i dont care if u peep or not....im just so happy!
 

"DreAMs Do Come True"

i never really thought of falling now,
i never really expected this
Talking you for the first time
already made my heart beat

So from then on, you were a dream
i thought i could never reach
i thought you were just mere reflections,
of what's buried in my heart so deep
i was surprised!

you too had fallen for a girl,
a girl who had been dreaming
of you all along
my heart was filled with joy
i realized my dreams were coming true!
what's best about everything
is when you finally said
"I LOVE YOU!"

is there a link between this and the whole ------KaPOnE roCKS mY BoDy lIke SluGs fRoM a 12 Gay-GE ShoTTy------- looooool

this was nice i like short sentenced poems...makes it easier to take in...like a willy IM GUESSING.....(just ingore that) anyway i liked this alot but u cud have made it more length but it seems nice...has this actually happened and thats why ur so happy...nice stuff agen

awww babey i felt that shyt....is it a true story - by the way it was writen i could tell that it was

happy for you too!!!

keep da peace ya heard . .. . fashow

da hunnet

Heh, nice work nitty...

...and nice to know youse happy..(gawd damn, knew i should've made my move sooner..gah!..)..

..but yeah, seriously. Nicely put onto paper. Was what it was. And couldn't have been with a nicer guy than Kapone (i mean nice in an obscure, sewer searching, rat eating way...!...and i don't mean that in the way you might think...more in the creative way...oh frig it, i'm only kidding..i'll leave it at that...though Kapone might understand...)..

..resp...

*applause*
good ish...
i liked the true life aspect...

not really...i put that on my sig cuz he beat me on yahoo fighter and i lose 10 times or more :( that was just the consequence if i lose LOL...kap was really good ..*shrugs* oh well i aint even good in the real rock, paper, scissor shit anyways...hahaha im a loser!





hmmm...kap is really nice , he's like the second coolest on my hidden list under my bed trapped in some yellowish stuff with a jello and cherry on top LOL (thats how hidden it is)...

lets just say that this one is for someone special that made me soo damn happy like whoa:hairy: , like whoa:eek: , ya know like whoa :cool: and more :whacky: ....like wh....ahhhh yeah kno what i mean....its just like that!



thanks for the replies y'all....i aint really writing for the sake of writing but cuz of the fact that i want this happiness to be shared.....ahhhhhhhh happiness paranoia! (hmmm...nice words for my next poem...hahaha WATCH OUT! )

Damn Shiz............Last nite when i talked to ya u wus tellin me that you Loved ME......and Now This.....damn....lol

Nice poem nice drop felt the contend

peep mine

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=58416

I'm glad you love me and all, shiznit, but I can't say I love you. We're just moving way to fast in our relationship.

Um... for realz though... thats a nice poem to read. For no other reason perhaps then it's just plain upbeat.

~Shalom~

hmm....not you necro...actually the one behind you who is waering a white t-shirt...;)

but thanks...its simple but it came straight from the heart

I usually only read threads in here and not post.. but think I will make an exception. I am really happy to see you like this. That guy is very lucky to have someone like you love him. :) About the poem, like all of your writing, I liked that as well. Keep up the good work. :D

*drives into thread in 3 whellin caddy and opens fire with a 12 gauge*

*joins Kapone with an uzi*

damn Kapz bustin caps, how incredably ironic


good poem shiznit...


do you look as good as your avatar?

errr....better ;)..LOL


thanks for droppin by anyways....glad u liked it

omg, does this means what i think it means? lol

btw, nice poem lol

i dont know what ur thinking tory....hit me up on aim...LOL...


but im thinking i know but im just pretending not to....thanks !

this was simple but real and everyone wishes they had the story book ending...or wishes they had the neeverending storyy with that special sommone ya know...this was alright....reply please peace

hey..this wasnt a bad piece,
it was sweet and had the right touch
of non-simplicity...if that makes sense.
enjoyed reading this.keep it up

one love

good poem, it was really simple(not anything to be published, seemed more like just sumthin for fun) but it was real life. it seemed like just a kid getting a present they really wanted (like the kid in Childs Play 1 lol) keep writin from ur heart

well i know how it feels to be happy..and i'm glad for ya chicky. Nice piece..straight from the heart....i remember when thats all i did..once upon an old RB..lol..nice piece...much luv..God bless..1.

wow...i feel sooo loved...:)


content flowz...yeah neverending story..thanks ! im glad u liked it.


K.E.M---hehehe it does makes sense...:)...much appreciated man...


Pax ---good some good ish too...not really Child's play kinda thing :)..but yeah thanks!


Lady trinity...---yes i am happy...im soooo happy that i would just go out and scream the whole world how happy i am...lol

thanks for all the love guys!