"Native Spirits of War"
 

Native Spirits Of War

Picturesque Skys Adorned The Sacred Southern Land..
Destiny In The Dynasty Of The Ones To Have It In Hand..
Sand Brushed Through The Feet Of the Dry Land Stepped..
Feelings Of Conflict Graced The Air As The Harsh Winds Swept..
An Ownership Bestowed Upon The Ancestral Creations..
Was To Be Upheld, Fought For, Against Any Ambitious Nations..
Sensations Of Masses Grouped Together In Revolution of Presence..
The Essence Of A Community To Hold Histories With Blessins..
Lessons Handed Down To Teach The Young The Pride Of Blood..
Now Joined By Seniors In Defence Of Their Sacred Land Of Mud..
Uprisings Eventuated Through Not Only Thoughts But Actions..
White Men Were Overawed By The Stern Nature Of Native Reactions..
To Stand Down Was A Sin! Paradise Would Be Lost Like Adam and Eve..
Running Bull Sat Perched In His Homestead Contemplating, He Couldn’t Believe..
A Deceitful Race, Unknown To A Graced Group, Was Here To Bring Hurt..
Expansion Of One Race Would Bring Downfall To Another, To Eat Dirt..
Goodness In Ones Eyes Is Perceived Different To Others..
Bonds Held Strong Natives Knew They Would Stick Together as Brothers..
Lovers, Mothers, All Were To Fight Till Death..
The Papichan Tribe All Took What May Have Been their Last Breath..
Raised The Weapons To The Sky And Indebted Their Actions To Ancestors..
Charged At English White Men, They Were Rightful Protestors..
Testers Of the Faith, Spirits Guided Them On Their Journey..
They Were Oblivious, Never To Know Whites Could Have Concerned The..
Battle It was, Running Bull Guided The Tribe Into Their Fight..
Rose With Might Outnumbered, However, They Contested The White..
Thousands Of Natives Were Killed, Their Land Was Lost That Night..
Their Land Handed Over, Although, Their Spirits would NEVER Die!..
This Was War..Whites Could Never Run Sacred Lands, Still They Would Try..
As The Sun Rose Up That Morning, Angry Native Faces Adorned That Sky..

................................Pz................ ..................

Sik Drop...Loved The Flow Of The Whole Thing,Also Love The Vocab..This Was A Sik Peice Man..Stay Up

^I Helped! lol...

Nice Piece... If It Wasn't For Bourke You Wouldn't Have Written This...

Very very excellent verse. Ive dropped feed on like 10 things thismorning, but this is by far the best. Very good work. love the flow, love the vocab, and it jus made me wanna keep reading. Keep em coming like this!

Peace

^^Thunx^^...Simon Says.....UP!!!!!!!!

Fucken Sleepers...Up Again...

^^^^^^^^^^EVEN KNOW I DONT GET ALONG WIT THESE AUSTRALIAN KANGAROO FUCKERS...lol


Shit i read this nice done i aint hatin......COntend wus aight...Flow to the point..............Nice drop

HAhahah, You Know You On My Dick Dun haha...Up...

Nice Vocab , Nice Wordplay , and Nice Concept , But you're still a BITCH!!!!!!!

^^Do I Even Know You Homo?^^NO-One Does...Coz You Wack...

Lmao , If u dont know me , Then how would u know that I'm Whack........... DUMBASS

Yo on da real Yo vocab was aight but ada den dat yo shit was wack I don't even know wat da Phuk u's speakin on and yo punk ass betta not say shit Blood Damu one BE-YATCH EAT A FAT DICK BITCH I'M CALLIN' OUT NAMES FUCK ORACLE !!!

HAHAHHA....Battle Record: 0-3 ....^^Jealous Homo^^ hahaha Uppin Fo Some Real Replies HAHAHHA....

You want a real reply drop me a line

In your own time

Huh? Who Are You..What Do YOu Mean?? Anywayz...UPPIN!...

Did Someone Say UP!...

scheme, structure and cadence were evidently polished and constructed very well,, content was good could have been better if you used different imagery and examples, wordplay was decent and vocab great.. overall it seemed very poetic and something only used for text rhyming, but it was still a 9/10


pieces.