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13th Disciple 06-20-03 08:48 PM

13th Disciple vs Phrantik
 
Rulez: Mods/Admins Only Vote....Other Catz Can Drop Opinions Though...10-15max Linez.......U Drop First....Drop Today...Drop Now...STOP DUCKIN!!!......Loser Gets His Sig Edited By Winner...And Has To Keep It For A Month.........Lets Do This.....13 Disciple Owns U.......1


As I Said....Other CAN voice there opinion...its not swayin...when only mod/admins can vote.....why the hell did they let phrantik be a mod again?......always editing and certain mods end up doin bullshit.....

13th Disciple 06-20-03 08:49 PM

Herez My Check In....U said U Can Drop A Verse In Two Minutes And Son Me?....Do It.....Now.......Fuck Ur Check In....Drop........1

Phrantik 06-20-03 10:15 PM

sorry. i never thought to look for this..
blah.. im rusty. whatever... mod votes only.

Let me beat you a second time, With a second rhyme,
Its just Seconds til my next crime…
Tik tik tik… seconds fly by
Disciples been abused, drown by phrantik
Got iced like titanic ands at the bottom of the Atlantic
Hows it feel to be out done twice?
Arrow hits the x like you got pirate mice
Thinking id duck? You pray for the day
And frontin im late is your only chance to sway
This bitch accepts everything but turned down pink slips
Accepts big dicks but turns down pink slits
Kid gets me to post first so he can be behind me
Id cover my ass and this bitch still trys to grind me
Excuse me but no. I want this to end my way..
And I don’t need to edit your sig to make you say “I’m gay”

13th Disciple 06-20-03 11:00 PM

Re: 13th Disciple vs Phrantik
 
Phrantik....U Suck....Seriously.....After This Battle For A Month U Will Be My Bitch.....Wit Dat Said......Lets Do This.............




Tik's Whole Persona Just Like Sex Wit No Penetration Disciple
Exposin This Fake Fuck/Wondered Why U Been Evadin A Battle
Till I Flipped Thru The Channel Realized Its The Season For Ducks

Not Only Usin The Play Of My Words To Hurt Ya I'm Also Commin
Wit The Stones And The Sticks/The Three Modkateers?............
Yall Are Like My Sweaty Boxers & Briefs......Stuck On My Dick!

U Got Demodded For Childish Activities Then Publically Cried......
Ahhhh.....Now Thats A Shame/But Tik The Tightest Thing About
U Just Like Ur Verses Is When U Mention My Name

5 And 2 Battle Record?......Not Bad I Guess But Let Disciple Tell U
What/Goin Around And Callin Out For Pink Slips........Whatcha
Gonna Do When They Happen To SHow Up?

U Suck........U Suck........U Suck......U Suck....U Suck Even In Rhymes
^ Thats An Example That Disciples Fillers Are More Tighter Than
All Of Ur Wacklines

U Talk Like Ur Undefeatable........Then Why'd Disciple Strip U Of Ur
Topical Belt?/The Reason Is Like Ur Girl Feels About U...........Layin
The Pipe Is Sumthin Thats Hardly Ever Felt

U A Fan Of Sanford N Son?......Cuz Lamont Ur Lyrics Are Trash
Quote:
Originally posted by 13th Disciple
13 Disciple


^There U Have It WannaBe Mod......Cuz Tik I Was Savin The Best For Last

NewPort 06-20-03 11:08 PM

-Your not a mod/ Nor Admin..



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lilbrick005 06-20-03 11:22 PM

-Your not a mod/ Nor Admin..



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Derive 06-20-03 11:22 PM

-Your not a mod..



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Jae Cyph 06-20-03 11:49 PM

First Off, I Must Say Very Very Weak Battle,
I Expected Much Better From You Both . . .

Tik, Your Punches Didn't Really Hit To Hard, But
Your Flow Was MUCH Better Then 13th's..

Quote:
Excuse me but no. I want this to end my way..
And I don’t need to edit your sig to make you say “I’m gay”


pretty nice closer.

13th, your flow was horrid i found myself having to re-read
a lot of your lines because i lost track of flow.. played punches
pretty much, your first two lines were pretty nice, but the
rest of the verse was blah . .

Quote:
U A Fan Of Sanford N Son?......Cuz Lamont Ur Lyrics Are Trash

quote:
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Originally posted by 13th Disciple
13 Disciple
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^There U Have It WannaBe Mod......Cuz Tik I Was Savin The Best For Last


I`m Almost 100% Positive That Was Bitten From Element
But I Cant Find The Link So, I`ll Just Say Fuck It, And count
It as A Played Punch.


vote-phrantik
very close battle weak verses from both
dissapointing as it is..

13th Disciple 06-21-03 12:17 AM

negative....u already know u can't vote.........not u or vortex....or x'podz.....thats bullshit if u do this.......cuz u got mad beef wit me...if u decide to edit this.......and keep that vote....i'll just go higher wit it......cuz i ripped phrantik a new asshole.....and.....i said in the rulez others can voice there opinions....so don't edit shit no more.......

13th Disciple 06-21-03 12:24 AM

thats bullshit that they're editin my rulez also....what the fuck kind of battle is this....if yall see voicing there opinions as swayin....who the fuck are they gonna sway to when only mods and admins can vote u dumb fuck........stop editin my shit.....let this battle be fair dick head

Jae Cyph 06-21-03 12:27 AM

I Can vote, i am mod of this forum i pledge
to give an honest vote, like it or not that was
honest ive dropped the beef with you, i never
had beef.

and others CANNOT Voice their opinions
this is a higher skilled battle so to have a newbie
be like


AYO I THINK PHRANTIK TOOK IT CUZ HIS VERSE
WAS BETTER OVERALLL BUT YO
VOTE MY BATTLE..

Isnt happening, i`ll have end come in here and enforce
it if you would like.

13th Disciple 06-21-03 12:30 AM

Do It Bitch Boy...Ur Fuckin Gay....And If this Is How ItS Gonna Be In This Battle.....Fuck The VOtes....Let Phrantik Win Right Now.....Let Him Change My SIg....Cuz I Thought Battles Was Different Than What Goes Down In Emcee Interaction...But Apparently U Bring The Hate Here.....I Merked Tiks Ass...Thats Why U Edited Everybodys Shit.....I Posted THe Rulez....Who Are U To Come In Here And Change It?....Fuck It....This Battle is Over...I Don't Even Wanna Win...Give It To Tik....Cuz Peril.....U And Other Mods I Know Of.....Are SOme Strait Bitches.....Yall Are The Onez That Make RB Wack!!!....I'm Ghost

Mad Man 06-21-03 01:11 AM

I would like to start off by saying that Jae Cyph's vote should count, well explained, bla bla bla.

So here's the breakdown for this Pink Slip Match

Phrantik: What the fuck happened man, I felt that you were just off the entire first half of your verse, the lines weren't of great quality. However, your second half made this the great battle that this was....

This bitch accepts everything but turned down pink slips
Accepts big dicks but turns down pink slits

^Dope line

Excuse me but no. I want this to end my way..
And I don’t need to edit your sig to make you say “I’m gay”

^Good ending, gay shit is played though

13th Disciple:
Alright, you were pretty much decent throughout the entire verse without showing signs of brialliance, or incompetence. A regular 13th Disciple verse if I may say so. No hate, just facts. Here are the lines I liked of yours...

Not Only Usin The Play Of My Words To Hurt Ya I'm Also Commin
Wit The Stones And The Sticks/The Three Modkateers?............
Yall Are Like My Sweaty Boxers & Briefs......Stuck On My Dick!

^A little bit of comedy, I liked this one

U Talk Like Ur Undefeatable........Then Why'd Disciple Strip U Of Ur
Topical Belt?/The Reason Is Like Ur Girl Feels About U...........Layin
The Pipe Is Sumthin Thats Hardly Ever Felt

^Harsh, and personal.

Overall I'm going to give this one to 13th Disciple. He didn't show any brilliance like you did Tik in some of your lines, but he wasn't stuck in Neutral for the first half of his verse. Nice battle from both....but

Vote=13th Disciple

Mental Stamina 06-21-03 02:58 AM

this battle was all filler and no thriller, both of you suck.

if I wanted to see this kinda bullshit I would go watch bambi

13th I've seen some of your battles and to me it looks like your losing your touch on things.

Phrantik stick to topical, your battling "pro-claimed" skills suck.

but if I were aloud to vote, I would vote for 13th, because he had an overall better verse in this shitty matchup

Feeble Minded. 06-21-03 06:18 AM

vote= 13th disciple..............................
flow- easily tik..............
punches-13th...........................

just thought tik's verse was boring is what it comes down to really............................................ .............................................
none of you had amazing lines but tik was just normal whole way through, 13th had some good lines though................

hit this up 13th please....just one more if its my way bu vote fairly plz.........

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...12&pagenumber=1

oh yea and i can poll vote here....im a mod of I.R. (investigated reports)

Feeble Minded. 06-21-03 06:22 AM

damn. i just read 13th's flow again a diffeent way...and it actually does flow well....u just gotta end each line with a certian word...

you could arange ya verse like this 13th...then cats would have understood ya flow....

blah blah blah/
blah blah blah/ .........ur like the top cat on here....why dont u do that lol? 13th took this easily in my opinio after re reading the flow...it was closer while not realizing his flow actually made more sense than it seemed./...

13th Disciple 06-21-03 11:42 AM

its the way that i flow......if u heard it on audio....then u would understand theres no need for correction....we all have our different style........my record might say i'm the top cat....but believe me....theres much more iller heads around then me......chrit once recommended a flow change....i can't do it....because i get down the way that i get down....appreciate the votes tho.....1

PlaGuE2 06-21-03 11:49 AM

tiks verse was lacking most of basic features a battle should have, hard punches, creativity, metas, multis, his flow was the only thing which was good. 13th flow was basic as this is a text battle, if it was audio i can see it would have been ill..., shit needs improved in this line of field tho, but he did have some better punches than tik, which is what a battle should have. Overall this was a poorly shot battle as both of you can do better, well atleast i thought so after all the banter that went back and forth. Going on punches, im going with 13th.
vote: 13th

Jae Cyph 06-21-03 01:02 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by 13th Disciple
its the way that i flow......if u heard it on audio....then u would understand theres no need for correction....we all have our different style........my record might say i'm the top cat....but believe me....theres much more iller heads around then me......chrit once recommended a flow change....i can't do it....because i get down the way that i get down....appreciate the votes tho.....1



Nah Man, trust me it wouldn't flow good in audio
i've been audio for a while now, and i have to change
my style in my audio and in text, that style your using
wouldnt work.

Look's like Tiks going to have some shit in his sig:p

but may I ask

If You Are NOT Mod or Admin DO NOT Post A Poll Vote, Fuck!


I'm editing the poll back to 1-1 considering all the other voters
were not mods.

PlaGuE2 06-21-03 01:19 PM

If it has to be mod on this forum, sorry, but if not im mod on Investigated Reports if that counts.....

13th Disciple 06-21-03 01:50 PM

So I Guess That VOte Goes Back Then Cyph.........Cuz He Is A Mod............................................... .........................................

NewPort 06-21-03 01:56 PM

yo 13th i put in my opinon dawg and you
said you'd check out my battle wit Black_Plague..can you
hit that up?............................................... .... - one

Jae Cyph 06-21-03 02:45 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by BlacK_PlaGuE
If it has to be mod on this forum, sorry, but if not im mod on Investigated Reports if that counts.....



Crew forum runners arent moderators

PlaGuE2 06-21-03 03:51 PM

Im not a crew forum mod Jae, Investigated Reports isnt a crew, it is run by Dirty Shanks investigating biters.. foul play etc....... but yo wotever...... i gave opinion as that is useful to both battlers, the vote is just an add on, add it, or leave it man, upto you...

Jae Cyph 06-21-03 03:56 PM

i asked the end, and he said you guys
dont count as moderators, so . . i go
by what he says.


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ShEmY 06-21-03 04:51 PM

I am the mod of Platinum Recordz so I am votein on this.

Phrantik. I was not feeling yo shit at all. Completely sucky ass punches period. No good ones what so ever in my oppinion.

13th I like yo shit actually. Flow not that good. I am gonna go wit you on this one. But hot punches bro.

Vote:13th Disciple.

I will poll in a minute.

Phrantik 06-21-03 05:05 PM

I said real mods.
not mods of petty crew forums.
get the fuck outta here.
i wouldnt allow xpos'd to vote and he is crew,
but he cant vote for the sheer fact he only mods his crews forum.
fuck off all of you.

13th Disciple 06-21-03 06:07 PM

basically...no one can vote on me cuz tik and cyph won't allow it...so i appreciate it u all but i think this battle is set up to let tik win.........and thats how it goes down in RB....cuz this battle already should be 4-1

G.Hod 06-21-03 06:30 PM

I can't vote, but it was awfully close. . Tik's done (a lot) better, and 13th's bars were stretched way too much. It totally threw of the flow - if I could vote I'd probably go with Phrantik. .

However, the rules are clearly in tik's favor, even though I wouldn't like to admit it. If 13 agreed to all of the rules, he's a fool.

PS: Don't capitalize every damn word, Disciple. You're quite the cocky one, too. . I hope you show up in our battle

Sureal 06-21-03 06:36 PM

Alright, Tik's Verse Seemed Almost Rushed, To Tell The Truth, 13ths seemed to have alot more thought into it ... tik had some alright punches, and 13ths had good punches and some alright wordplay... ive seen better battles from both of you... but as it stands right now..

Vote 13th disciple

[mod of Open Mic, Front Lines, and Elite Front Lines]
-Sureal

13th Disciple 06-21-03 08:56 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Lyricali
I can't vote, but it was awfully close. . Tik's done (a lot) better, and 13th's bars were stretched way too much. It totally threw of the flow - if I could vote I'd probably go with Phrantik. .

However, the rules are clearly in tik's favor, even though I wouldn't like to admit it. If 13 agreed to all of the rules, he's a fool.

PS: Don't capitalize every damn word, Disciple. You're quite the cocky one, too. . I hope you show up in our battle



does anyone else notice how disciple stays gettin hated on?....i have to flow a certain way....i can't capitalize my words.......i'm too cocky......can someone tell disciple how to be in battles please? matter of fact just write me a script so i can follow it.....everybody hatin on lil ol disciple........aint that sumthin.....
matter of fact.....what i'm sayin now will be hated on....guarantee it.......but i am who i am....

The End 06-21-03 10:19 PM

Tik, you are way better than your verse. I remember when the whole "Rise situation" came up and you wrote that battle verse for him within a few minutes.. that was better than this and there was no beef whatsoever between you two. It's almost like you didn't start trying to win this until 3/4ths of the way through it.

13th, your lines are a little extended for my personal liking. It sorta flowed, but not as well as it could have. I feel like you put way more effort and thought into this battle than Tik (except for Tik's last few lines). Sorry Tik, but...

Vote - 13th

ShEmY 06-22-03 12:38 AM

I will vote on whoeva the fuck I want too. Fuck u Tik. Fuckin AssHole!!!!
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ShEmY 06-22-03 12:43 AM

Tik you is fuckin lucky I can't vote. But you is gonna be gone. 13th Disciple is gonna win this shit. If I could vote it would be 4-1. He won don't be a fuckin asshole. It wont let me vote though. Who knows Phrantik prolly rigged it up or somthin. FUck you tik.

G. Buttersworth 06-22-03 06:44 AM

tik's punches were ight.. nothing real special about them.

13th's punches were ight.

some decent wordplay from both.


but this battle was kinda weak to me... and clearly 13th had the upperhand in this.

vote= 13th

Bart Burnt 06-22-03 08:32 AM

no offense but for a kat like 13th to call himself any sort of emcee let alone a champ u gotta drop a lil harder...i coulda ripped both verses with a 2 minute key...guaranteed...

lilbrick005 06-22-03 11:37 AM

Ay yo first off if you guys can't read 13th's flow yall shouldn't even be in the Elite front lines and 13th had master wordplay and punches in his verse, but ONLY REAL EMCEE"S cought on to them. Yall mother fuckers need to stop hating on him, his lines where no more strechted than Phrantik's its just that yall dont know how to read battles.

Another thing. You guys CANNOT JUDGE INTERNET BATTLES ON FLOW
A- you dont know how fast or slow the person is rapping
B- You dont know if the person is putting an emphasis on a syllable
C- making two words rhyme when you are typing is so easy-cheesy-please me-t.v (i mean flowing on the internet cannot decide battles and you people need to realize that)

And why is Jae Cyph posting and arguing with 13th when this isn't even his battle (if he voted for phrantik its prolly a hate vote against 13th)

Anyways 13th already won this battle so GOOD BATTLE.


^^^^MY OPINION

13th Disciple 06-22-03 12:12 PM

^thank u so damn much!!!....seriously.....for a minute......i thought it was me against the world.....mad respect brick.......mad respect...................uppin................... ..................................

13th Disciple 06-22-03 05:20 PM

Uppin This Thang.......I Don't Want It To Go Away......................
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13th Disciple 06-22-03 09:12 PM

anybody got some crystal meth?.......cuz this battle is gettin sleepy.............diizzzzzaammmm................. ..........................


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