Dear God
 

|[R.x Steps up, his head is down and his eyes closed as if prayin]|
|[His voice is heard]|

Dear lord let me in |
Forget my of my sin |
Wipe these tears of pain from my chin |
Dear lord let me know its safe to once again grin |

Ayo, I stand here in the dark, ready to embark this trail of hate |
You know why I debate so much, this so called topic of fate |
I have hade the many reasons to trust in you, to lust in you |
From being a small kid brown hair eyes a baby blue |
Cancer in my body not sure how i feel, thats why when I spit its real |
Not caught on the trends, staying away from the thug appeal |
Leaving some peoples mouth wide, tears not so far on the hide |
Alot of the times Im feeling like one of your downed, frowned with a broken pride |
Oh...

Dear lord let me in |
Forget my of my sin |
Wipe these tears of pain from my chin |
Dear lord let me know its safe to once again grin |

I havent been the most humble and loving person around you |
But when I shed the old image, won the scrimmage I vowed to start anew |
I know when im dead, im not going be the perfect soul to be feed |
Torn to a new shred with every move I make, But I always look ahead |
Knowning I could end up dead in the hands of fate, only if I think it true |
I hated you for so long, ya made me feel so wrong making all my old say adieu |
Oh...

Dear lord let me in |
Forget my of my sin |
Wipe these tears of pain from my chin |
Dear lord let me know its safe to once again grin |

|[Beat changes to a more uppy beat, R.x lifts his head up]|

R.x here, dont give a care, will take and do any dare |
I declare the world my battle zone, hitting it like a kiler cyclone |
Ya cant come at me alone, yall always bring my crew into it |
So im not just going say oh shit, I just cant sit |
Its been awhile since my last drop, I cant stop |
I wont allow myself to flop off, I dont care if I dont reach the top |
Like I say my skills are on the devlopmentals |
Reppin till they drop me, The Elementals |

|[Beat ends]|
|[R.x Steps Out]|

dope man....i have no advice to give ya....i dont think ya need much anyway. Keep up the work

^Thanks. Uppin.

Damn thats some great stuff,
i think mex is right, there isnt much adive to give ya
keep up the great stuff

damnit man I wrote a "Dear God" verse back like 2 or 3 yearz ago. I still got it too. Damn kids alwayz gotta be stealin' my ideaz n shit. I thought my shit was original but I never put it online ( as I do with most of my writtens) in fear someone would bite it. But anyways nice verse.

^Thanks for the feedbacks. Yea I have had this idea for a bit and it was finally put into words and im happy with how it came out.

Uppin.

my track had the same title and everything. Damn, I'ma have to post my verse up in here one day after I copyright the shit.

Ya man didnt know ya had the same thing or i probly would have altered the title some cause i dont like it when im close others for title and i think my style is my own, could be wrong.

Im uppin this again cause its moving down, people see it but they dont respond for some reason.

Ok Uppin cause it was like 8 replies ( till now ) to 44 views what the hell is up? Why not view it?........has sleepin on stuff really gone so high since my last post.

it's all good. You ain't had no way of knowin' since I ain't posted it online.

Yea I know thats why im not feeling 100% bad for ya.

Uppin while im here.

You're Pretty Dope Man...You Don't Need No Tips..You've GOtten Everything Down..Keep This Shit Up Man You're Pretty Dope

Check This Out 4 Me...I'm Gettin Slept On Like Bed Cots

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=59374

^Aight thank. And I will respond to your piece.

i really liked it, had some real feel to it. that was some powerful shit dude, keep it up.

^Thanks

Last uppin 9/10

niceeeee, like it!
keep up the good work man

Uppin

8/10

Uppin

7-10

Ayo come on, havent dropped in bit and dont want this to die out yet.

6-10

thats some hot shit....you gotta spit that

^Yea. I thought the same and its one of the things I plan to work on over the summer and maybe have an audio of soon.

Dope Shit...
Overall Nice Drop...

that was mad dope man keep spittin

^Thanks and I plan to do just that. Im working on my next drop now so look for it in a few days or so.

nice post and all, but this idea aint that original, this si the type a shit dmx is always throwen down,this dear god stuff,so i dont htink anyone can really say this dude bit there idea,cuz really he would be bitin dmx's ideas,not sayen u did,but u no, good drop keep prospering and elevatin...peace

^The difference with mine and like DMX is that his is a prayer most the time mine wasnt it was like me saying dear I wanna thank you for this and that. Its only the called that because of the hook. The head down in prayin was also more of a sad way to go at. The verses of the song are more towards people and not the lord. The hook is like telling him to forgive me for the way im treating people in my life. Then the last verse was just a way to respect my crew which seems to be a target against me many use. But I thank you for your reply.