<Afta^^Shock> VS <Sharp^^Sh00ter>
 

aight 10 linez max
no d/r
hate
crew,
u no da shit

o u drop first.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,



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aight, its commin soon
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Afta Shock when the lyrical punches hit you gonna feel the shock afta/
If you don't give up you gonna have to bow down to your lyrical masta/
My flows flow so well, my words thend to float/
Your career bout to sink like a hole in a boat/
Physical~philosophical~flows, shocking more faces than when pipe bombs blow/(terrorist attacks)
If you seriously think your rap careers a go, I might aswell call this battle a no-show, cause even if you straped C-4, you would never explode/
If you commin at me, you gonna get son'd, so call me your lyrical father/
when my punches land i'll leace you seen double like when Geroge Bush sees his daughters/(twins)
From beginning to end, this battle is over/
Check your record when this battle is done, your career should be over/


Peace~

Good Luck~~

aight dat was pretty tite



my go................................................ ..........................................

yo, yo , check it,





No, no, no you got it all wrong, im da lyracal "masta"//
Steppin up ta me took a lotta guts, but dis battle is gonna turn out 2 b a "disasta"//
Pull a gat back, ya here Rat'tat'tat, and make ya brains go splat//
So go work for a "construction field", dats da only way u gonna b "jacked"//(jackhammer the tool)
Go get some trainin from "Iverson" and do some b-ball "slammin//
Dats da only way u gonna b "jammin"//(lyk a b-ball dunk)
With raps, i got a delicate "taste"//
Da only thing u a pro at is "copy and paste"//
With flows, i gots a divine "flavor"//
Lyk a "butcher" ill chop ya up wit a "meat cleavor"//




-dat sucked

aight lets start uppin............................................. .................................................. ...........................

yo my votez gotta go 2 afta


betta flow
and lil betta punches



Vote= Afta Shock


(sry cant poll)

yo man, both verses were pretty tight, but sharpshooters verse was so tight it left afta shock chokin man. sharps cuts were deeper and his punches hit harder. aftas flow was good though, but the punches felt a little weak and wordplay coulda been better. sharps wording was pretty hot throughout, so i gotta give it to him for that.

vote = sharpshooter

peace boys, nice battle

..nice spits to u both.....a lil below evergae tho wsnt feelin em
.. ididnt like dat guy wit the worm as his logo..shit wasnt too tite at all....sharp shooter was aite..his was beter if anything.return da favor tho..http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=59821 dats da best battle ulll see in a few dayz

Uppin 4 votes lets see a winner here
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leave a link with a battle and i will hit you up with a true and honest vote.

im going for sharp shooter here. afta shock lacked flow. sharp had some nice punches which gave him the battle.
vote- sharp shooter

return the favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=59952

Did that one cat rly vote for Afta Shock??..Oh well not sein that one...But Sharp Shooter took it with WAY better punches and a nice flow...Not hatin on you Afta Shock aight dog...Sorry I can't poll vote..I dont have enough posts yet...But if you can hit my battle up..Tha bitch uppited it so many fuckin times...But if you can hit it up it'd be greatly appreciated..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=59821

yo sharpshooter gets this for blainten reasons...better wordplay better flow even tho the pucnhes were quite evenl matched sharpshooter still took that
...return tha favour wit an honest vote on my battle wit cuttin p.

~1~

5hooter got this with more complexity and better wordplay..............keep ya head up Afta and keep gettin better......peace

Vote = 5hooter

Yo 5hooter when we gonna battle........you said last night you would when ya other battle cleared....I'll post another call out in bitch slapped and I'll PM you....so you see it

eyup...otha cat started feedin right from line 1...lesson to be learned dun feed like a bitch...get sum creativity...sharp..takes my vote...hate feeders....i see potential sharp, decent vocab n flo..elavate an ya could be pretty good....

Uppin 4 votes lets see a winner here
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leave a link with a battle and i will hit you up with a true and honest vote.

Uppin 4 votes lets see a winner here
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leave a link with a battle and i will hit you up with a true and honest vote.

im forgot to poll last time. but i went for sharpshooter. i was feeling his flow and liked his wordplay.
afta shock lacked flow.
vote- sharp shooter

holla bak
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60823

Shap had this on better wordplay and Flow...punches also
came hard...Afta just elevate yo shit, couple yo lines made me laugh...

vote: Sharp