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Wreckle$$ vs. Sand
Darn Brandon
Said We Couldn't Do Pink Slips. :confused: but it's all coo... here's the battle... 16 lines |
Wreckle$$...
iight man...lemme free this real quick...get ya verse in by tonite... im the "king" so i build a "castle"-with-this-"sand" listen son, u aint on my level, so i wont even hastle-with-this-man hit ya with "crayons" to add a lil "color"-to-your-game run up wit a towel soaked in "ether" then "smother"-your-fame put another-to-the-flame, my ryhmes aint clean or "staralyzed" hit ya between the eyes, brake ya thighs, got you WISHIN you were paralyzed u a bitch-without-the-clit, ya think-kid, that you can take my "pink-slip" but u aint got my skillz, ya ryhmes are "short" and "soft" like ya "limp-dick"! (OUCH!) my pimp-shit, my cars, my ice, got me "king-of-rocks-ho's-and-roads" you beatin me?? thats impossible, like "yao ming"-blocked-by-"bogues" ull "croak"-like-toads, while im the fuckin "lion"-of-this-bunch let me put it this way...ill take you AND that "whitenigga" "dinin-out-to-lunch" (lion=carnevour) im "linin-you-with-punches", then make you "toke"and "choke" on my gun "smoke" i dont get it kid, how the fuck u gunna spit, with "whiteniggas" dick down ya throat?? make this note, next time u wanna battle "pink slips" dont challenge-the-"wreck" ill make this clean as possible, ill get u screamin "bloody HECK" with a "tallon"-in-ya-neck (heck=hell clean version) |
lets begin...
yes the Christians are wondering today, this battles a lost hope... i thought you wouldn't bite so gay but ya punches still in quotes... kill it hoe, any thoughts of standin' over me learn to shrink quick.. if you put my hand in your privates, only way i'd get a pink slip... think kid, give birth to a seal, but the roof aint gettin raised... fuck battling, i'm playin' x box, an Wreckless Still Gettin Played!... Hoe enough being gay, lets settle this, be serious for a minute... when you said you 'dug my style' did you expect to fall in it? ... a small victim, hoe's for paper, watch me straight up rip this whore you ain't shatterin' glass, why the fuck you stay switchin boards? kiddie's more? RB ain't even your home, here's an eviction notice and i know i handed you a loss, but why are you so happy to hold it? are you slow bitch, sit back, learn your fucking really dumb... when heads start to elevate you get left behind like cookie crumbs and i admit you shook me son, and in real it was goodly done... but you got hurt quick, so now the rookies done... LMFAO...Edited Cuz' Of INSIDE JOKE... should be coo...pz |
iight lets up on this battle!!!!
how come it aint for pink slips no more??????? thats a lil strange......hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm uppin for votes!!! be-eazy |
wreckless your quoting to many things man dont do that it messed up your structure, iight this is how im voting
punches-wreckless structure-sand flo-tie wordplay-sand my vote=sand hit back the favor with a FAIR vote at http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9794#post569794 i killed this kat but i still need more votes |
an admin said you cant do pink slips with your amount of post.
anyways im going to vote on this battle and break both verses down so no bitches can complain about me voting. |
wreckless, ya wouldve had my vote if you didnt quote so many things and if ya had more personals..................................
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Wreckless
iight man...lemme free this real quick...get ya verse in by tonite... im the "king" so i build a "castle"-with-this-"sand" listen son, u aint on my level, so i wont even hastle-with-this-man meh...filler... hit ya with "crayons" to add a lil "color"-to-your-game run up wit a towel soaked in "ether" then "smother"-your-fame nice flow.. poor punch put another-to-the-flame, my ryhmes aint clean or "staralyzed" hit ya between the eyes, brake ya thighs, got you WISHIN you were paralyzed your getting there... u a bitch-without-the-clit, ya think-kid, that you can take my "pink-slip" dissing yourself isnt good in battles... lol but u aint got my skillz, ya ryhmes are "short" and "soft" like ya "limp-dick"! (OUCH!) shoulda kept up with this heat my pimp-shit, my cars, my ice, got me "king-of-rocks-ho's-and-roads" FILLER FILLER FILLER*chants* you beatin me?? thats impossible, like "yao ming"-blocked-by-"bogues" ull "croak"-like-toads, while im the fuckin "lion"-of-this-bunch nah... let me put it this way...ill take you AND that "whitenigga" "dinin-out-to-lunch" (lion=carnevour) pethetic personal im "linin-you-with-punches", then make you "toke"and "choke" on my gun "smoke" i dont get it kid, how the fuck u gunna spit, with "whiteniggas" dick down ya throat?? nice punch make this note, next time u wanna battle "pink slips" dont challenge-the-"wreck" ill make this clean as possible, ill get u screamin "bloody HECK" with a "tallon"-in-ya-neck (heck=hell clean version) shit closer Score: 2.5 out of 5 Sand lets begin... yes the Christians are wondering today, this battles a lost hope... i thought you wouldn't bite so gay but ya punches still in quotes... good opener kill it hoe, any thoughts of standin' over me learn to shrink quick.. if you put my hand in your privates, only way i'd get a pink slip... meh good punch think kid, give birth to a seal, but the roof aint gettin raised... fuck battling, i'm playin' x box, an Wreckless Still Gettin Played!... heh xbox lol Hoe enough being gay, lets settle this, be serious for a minute... when you said you 'dug my style' did you expect to fall in it? ... lol a small victim, hoe's for paper, watch me straight up rip this whore you ain't shatterin' glass, why the fuck you stay switchin boards? personal. it was ok kiddie's more? RB ain't even your home, here's an eviction notice and i know i handed you a loss, but why are you so happy to hold it? for you children, read wreck's sig....good personal are you slow bitch, sit back, learn your fucking really dumb... when heads start to elevate you get left behind like cookie crumbs and i admit you shook me son, and in real it was goodly done... but you got hurt quick, so now the rookies done... finished well Score : 3.8 out of 5 nice job sand. Vote: Sand |
punchlines = sand
flow = Wreckless wordplay = Wreckless meta's = sand multi's = Wreckless vocab = Wreckless complexity = draw creativity = Wreckless enjoyment = Wreckless Vote = Wreckless 2 nice drops but i feel wreckless deserved this, they both got in quite a few punchlines, sands was harder than wreckless but wreckless had a sweeter flow, nice wordplay and was overall a better read. might have been different through audio although i suppose all battles are. Vote = Wreckless |
yo this was a hot battle but im giving my vote to sand
i think he was better in multiple catagories as listed and i was feeling his verse more. |
punchlines = sand
flow = sand wordplay = Wreckless meta's = sand multi's = Wreckless vocab = ehh tie complexity = sand creativity = Wreckless enjoyment = eehh tie 6-5 Vote goes to sand because of more complexity and lil more hard punches... But wreckless - good verse 1 |
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man are you shittin yourselves? sand was not "the shit" he was "shit"
wreckless definately got him his punches were way better, so was wordplay n better flow wit multi's i woulda ripped ya too sand mental stamina... your a fuckin d/r, your whole break down was obviously 2 try n convince us that sand was awesome, u didn't give wreckless not credit, ya that's right vote=wreckless sand.. you lucky this ain't pinkslips |
lol people...ur all a bunch of newbies...
putting QUOTES around something means its a META!!!!! oh wait..do people know wut meta's are??? lmao let me explain... but u aint got my skillz, ya ryhmes are "short" and "soft" like ya "limp-dick"! /\ implying that ur ryhmes are like a limp dick...short and soft means that ur verses are short in length (similair to the size of ur penis, and soft meaning u dont punch hard..also mean your penis is limp) WOW you people are intelligent!!!! also... u a bitch-without-the-clit, ya think-kid, that you can take my "pink-slip" dissing yourself isnt good in battles... lol /\ HOW DID I DISS MYSELF?!?!?!?!?!? pathetic! iight im done.... just to let ya know this battle will be posted on Street-science so we can get some intelligent votes cuz yall are just missin the target... pathetic and embarassing.... its 3-2 we still uppin in this bitch be-eazy |
wreckless copped this win easy cuz his was just better
hit my battle up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60227 |
yo i gotta go wit wreckless flew more and betta punches,,
hit dis up fo me tho http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0635#post570635 |
umm wreckless, i think people
know what meta's are. if you need to emphasize your meta's by putting quotes around them that proves they aren't good enough......get me? And Kerdezzy, I'm talking to the end right now, consider this a callout for a pink slip battle....herb pz.. |
thats 4-3 my lead...
ummmmm sand..i BEG you to battle me on street-science! i literally BEG YOU! kids on this site...well the kids who voted for you anyway...just aint as intelligent as the kids on street-science... so when street-science fixes the memory problem after july 1st we will battle on street-science... and its funny cuz im murkin u right now 4-3....damn... be-eazy |
actually it's 4-2 MY lead.
look at the poll. you have no idea what you are saying ask anyone who knows anything. you did not even come close. YOUR votes were from non-intelligent newbies... ................................................ |
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i liked sands verse a lil bit more
he had more punchlines and metephors and good flow Wreckless didn't come out to hard vote=Sand |
lmao we all know that vote dont count....
and hey sand...your a bum...all u got is d/r b! seriously please lets take this to another site..neutral ground... get at me on AIM..... and i got 3 votes if u go back and read them u fuckin punk.... lets take this somewhere else...or get some admins to peep this cuz ur fuckin trash...its simple as that.... be-eazy |
listen man, look around where
we are battling, who would be dickriding me here? this is nuetral ground. i'm the supermod that closes all of these kids battles and DQ's them, they don't like me. they are just learning how to vote fairly......word? |
sand has my vote, his punches were better and much cleverer word play and his use of the other guys lines against him was phat!!!
sand you got my vote |
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