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AlcaTrakz 06-26-03 03:06 PM

Jenifer Lopez Naked (FINISHED)
 
OK ITS DONE....Verse one is at the beggining of the track..and verse 2 comes in around 2:10

Sike....but it is a J.Lo Remix.....

THIS IS WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU GET REALLY FUCKING BORED

Im Glad Remix ft. Djx

the quality on hifi is pretty dope

Holla back..lol..let me know what u think of my lil radio style remix

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MC Concise 06-26-03 03:09 PM

This was horrible.

AlcaTrakz 06-26-03 03:16 PM

thanks..not really askin about tastes....i wouldnt buy it...but id listen to it on the RADIO....

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MC Concise 06-26-03 03:22 PM

lol wtf.. you know i didnt listen too it.... i just told you these comps dont have soundcards or something.

AlcaTrakz 06-26-03 03:34 PM

i hate you bastard

Knox 06-26-03 03:48 PM

great delivery, lil sporadic in lyrical content. overall : good shit man, like you said its a rough draft, do some polishing on the lyrics i.e. you had a good story going, keep it going, dont go off on tangents. gonna be a hot song, better let me know when u done wit it.

hola

Rhyme Masta 06-26-03 03:59 PM

Yo dat some pretty good stuff. Holla a me when ya get it all the way done cause it soundin good right now.

KayinOmega 06-26-03 05:02 PM

mic presence is there...lyrix seem str8...quality is nice...i'm feelin that...mixin is well done...as far as i'm conerned...aiight
short as hell but i felt this

AK 06-26-03 07:05 PM

a dope track dj id like 2 hear the finished version wen u complete it

ninemillimeter 06-26-03 07:58 PM

very nice, i like this. i've heard it 5 times on replay untill soundclick fucked it up. good work!

YuNg-GuN 06-27-03 12:52 AM

mixin is nice( dats what producers do mix good)
flow is nice and on beat lyriks are nice on point no punches or nuffin eye poppin but ur flow makes my head knock verses shuld be a lil longer but overall nice drop
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Rhyme Masta 06-27-03 12:58 AM

Yo it sound good dog keep that up I'm glad that ya got the finished version done today so I could here it good shit.

MC Concise 06-27-03 02:53 AM

wow, i actualy felt this. I remember back when it was cool to be
a textcee, i always felt you, and as a producer i felt you, but not
so much as an emcee, but your last few tracks have been nice
as hell. Im impessed. Nice shit man....

AlcaTrakz 06-29-03 03:09 AM

:)

~SoSa~ 06-30-03 08:16 PM

how u gonna do a collab wit my wife in law...

flow was straight

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62290

The End 07-01-03 02:47 AM

Nice job, I thought this was really good. I can definately see this playing on radios. I think its much better than the original. :)

Rags 07-01-03 03:47 AM

i feel you on dat boredom shit cuz i did a remix to the right thurr song lmao

dis wasnt even dat bad...good shit homie...still doin rap as a hobby or u serious bout it yet?

MysticMastermind 07-01-03 09:57 AM

i didn't like this too much, got a whack lyricist fuckin up the song, the best part was when j-lo started singin.
The flow was basic and weak,
you need to step up your vocab...
but the mix down was aiight.

BriX 07-01-03 11:19 PM

Ill flow...good shit...sounds real pro...keep it up

AlcaTrakz 07-02-03 01:02 AM

lets notice the replies mystic...

you the ONLY ONE hatin on it....

GROW UP now....i ATE you a month ago..and you still on my dick...do i need to drop another verse?

WHO is still in the tourney? me or YOU?

this was a POP remix...fuck ima do spit mos def type vocab?

Your a fucking no talent asshole, that NEEDS to respond to all my shit..JUST so people will know who you are....

GO AWAY

to the other cats that responded (good or bad) as long as it was constructive...good looks

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Dariel Shariem 07-02-03 11:14 AM

hot ness man.. your flow is dope... feeling the flow.. your voice is good. feels good over the beat.. but as a remix it doesnt cut the mustard.. i mean.. if just to say you were to actual do this for commercial purposes with JLo .. this you wouldnt have come off appealling enough.. i know if it was serious and not boredom you would of layed it out easy...

suggest for coolness.. next time you do this.. actually try and make it commercially appealing ..

second verse was better.. that u did..

this is still safe...

one.. peep my track http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62772

Kredit 07-03-03 07:39 PM

Flow is nice.. and you're right, this is a radio track.

Mr. Rogers 07-09-03 07:39 PM

:) I Liked This..You Flowed Amazing Man..But You Made Me Mad Cuz I Really Thought It Was J.lo Naked..LoL

Good Drop Man..


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