Raz Vs Audo
 

Rules:
No dickrydin ....ect Votes
12 lines min and max...
Post Asap

audo

yo i'll take my [steal toe], and my [elbow] to show u whats up//
i'll bore u a [new asshole] save ya [soul] kuz nigga ya lost ya luck//

u [beatin me] is like [muhammed ali] tryin ta sit still, it ain't gonna happen//
pickin me to battle u must be blind, but this ain't brail, this is close caption//

i got u a new chinese name 'Master' 'Bation', kuz u tha only one feelin yo shit//
girls told me about u, u won't post ur shit kuz u afraid to commit//

dawg ur job gonna be hard, how can u diss me I have no flaws//
and if i was u i wouldn't brag bout where u live and ya connection, "dsl" in bathroom stallz// *dsl = dick suckin lips

okay call me an 'asshole', it's fine i 'spit' 'ill' 'shit' and i can 'back' it//
i'mma 'wipe' 'u out' and make u not come back is my rap tactic//

u a 'cracka' fuck i'mma call u 'snack' 'well' kuz u snack on a lyracists rhyme//
if we was ina club battlin, u'd try and battle, but u'd look like a mime// (nuffin to say)

*throws Audo tha mic*
Yo turn...

aight

listen dog, in the closet is the colt and tha tec/
ima bust my guns, pierce bullets through ya neck/
only way you spit some ill shit, is when it leaks out ya pussy lips/
I rip this shit, rip you up, this is my win, you a bunch of drips/
and you thought my job was gonna be hard?/
I got all the disses here, I'm just playing my cards/
and you try and act non-chalant in front of my entourage/
but nigga, my sudden barrage will make ya face look like a collage/
Your girl gave me a name, its the side tapper/
she wants me more cause Audo's the better rapper/
and your girl, I got a pet name, Ms. Feely/
cause she's feeling my shit, both of 'um fa sheezy/

done

good luck

TIME 2 VOTE

lol nice way to feed off my shit .......lol luv tha creativity......but newayz good battle for tha most part............ UPPIN FOR VOTESSSSS

nice battle Raz, you had some nice punchlines. holla back!
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thanx dawg, damn nigga would hafta kill ta get a vote round here...lol oh well UPPIN...........................

yup, I got alotta battles people still gotta vote on. yo check your PM inbox aight. holla!
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vote!

eh yo Raz, check out my battle against VIP911, aight
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I'ma have to go with Raz, he had a better lay-out, he had better wordplay, and multis....Audo took the punchlines though, both did ok......keep elevating

Vote-Raz

eh yo EvilKronix, can you vote on this 2 battles?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=61264

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=61197

UPPIN THIS SHIT..............VOTE YA'LL ..................................
VOTE ON THIS SHIT.............................................

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VOTE PPL DAMN..........................UPPIN .................................................. ..............................................

Audo you dont seem to grap it yet....fuck that Gangsta shit it doesnt work in battles....my vote goes to Raz cause at least he had punches....Raz you are a decent newb but Audo....read some more battles and try again.

aight uppin this shit...................vote vote vote
vote vote and we will return tha favor.....
poll it

again

Again uppin this shit for one more vote or 3...lol kuz i'mma bout ta hit tha sack, uppin ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

UPPIN THIS SHIT.........................Poll this so it can be over VOTE VOTE VOTE...................

dis was a good battle but it was one sided


punches-raz
flow audo
overall best verses
my vote goes 2 raz

nice battle though guys

thanx for tha vote..................but we need some poll vote on this shit.........................

Get this shit UPp.//.................................Poll ya vote...........................GET THIS SHIT GOIN!!!!$!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPPIN FO VOTES

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Once again:mad: damn ppl vote

foreal don't let this go undecided, poll vote ..........

UPPIN THIS SHIT>................................Poll ya vote,.......so we can get this goin Uppin i got this 2-0

ya no need to type it again

imma go with raz on this one coz he seemed to try a bit harder but both were pretty weak in wordplay and punches, VOTE+RAZ

yo thanx for tha vote.............Uppin 3-0 two more votes.............................Poll Votes WANTED!!!!!

COMMON POLL YA VOTE SO THIS SHIT CAN BE OVER...................................i will return tha favor............................

I'm goin with raz on this. Better multis and punches. AUdo had a better flow but his ounches weren't hittin as hard.


Vote=Raz

UPPiN 4-0 my lead.........................ONE MORE AND THIS IS OVER....................................ONE MORE POLL VOTE

damn u all one more vote i got this 4-0 lets get this over wit..................poll vote this shit.........drop a link and i'll get u back

yo foreal i got this 4-0 we need more votes on this shit..............post and poll then drop a link and i will hit yo shit up...................UPPIN hopefully last time

One post.............one poll vote................all i need.............................................. ..UPPIN.........................................

UPPIN FOR 1 POLL VOTE...................4-0 MY LEAD NEED VOTES TO RAP THIS UP,....................DROP A LINK AND I WILL VOTE FOR UR SHIT...............

I gotta give it to Raz cause i liked the structure and his multies and meta's was tight............................................. ............holla back

[ Moved To Closed Battles ]

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