Franchi$e v/ BROOKLYN
 

RULES:
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8 LINES
NO HATIN/CREW/D/R VOTES
TIME LIMIT FOR 8 LINES IS 20 MINUTES
REQUIREMENTS:
CHECK-IN
DROP WITHIN 20 MINUTES AFTER I DROP

ill vote when both have spitted plz vote on my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=61976

yo man What tha fuck I thought I was battlin you Brooklyn?????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????

oh yeah im here.............................................. .....................................
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INTERNET KEEPS GOIN DOWN, I'LL DROP QUICKLY
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Franchise gets no special privaleges because in this battle he get cut with ridges/
my punches connect & give him more incisions than transitions in bridges/
I'm delivering rockets and cannons but Franchise drops his rock and ran/
I'm always plottin a scam but you're ‘less effective’ than tryin to use ‘sunblock for a tan’/
you spit at me? fuck a talk nice you brought a rock to a glock fight../
you got less of a chance beatin me than catchin chicken pox twice/
my gun got a two shot ammo, Franchise is only a 'thug on wax' like 2pac candles/
i commit murder, stab shoot and do stealin too, sayin you 'suck' is more than God wit the given truth/

yo nigga what about our battle?******************************************* ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ***************

Battlin u is like gettin a "clock drunk" cuz ya a "waste of my time"/
dawg u aint pimp u is a whimp and unless ya gettin change u'll
never get a dime/
and when Franchise came to BROOKLYN i see-ya-hid/
shit i should be runnin cuz ya career didn't get as high as
Aaliyah-did/
dawg u is a dumass i see why u didn't make a's and b's/
ya said u couldn't learn da alphabet cuz ya wuz to busy N halin'
MCees/
nigga tha barz u spit aren't even big enough to confine migets/
i throw punches like tyson, yours wouldn't cause a baby to
fidgets/

brooklyn's rhyme appealed to be much more creative
i liked both verses but that alliah punch is commonly used & the see-ya-hid line is past tense when it suppose to be present tense

best lines from brooklyn:

you got less of a chance beatin me than catchin chicken pox twice/

my gun got a two shot ammo, Franchise is only a 'thug on wax' like 2pac candles/

best lines from franchise:

nigga tha barz u spit aren't even big enough to confine migets/

vote..brooklyn

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iight
brooklyn got this by better punches and beter flow.... good drop both of you juss feelin brooklyn's more

YO DAWG IF I COULD VOTE I WOULD GIVE IT TA BROKLNY
THAT SHIT CAME HARD FRNCHISE UR SHIT CAME HARD TO BUT COMPARED TA BROOKLYN YURS CAME AS HARD AS AN OL MANS DICK LOL NAH BUT MAD RESPECT DAWG I PROLLY COULND DROP THAT TIGHT IF MAH LIFE DEPENED ON IT LOL NICE BATTLE FO AN 8 LINER

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i was fellin brooklyns punches more than franchi$es........................................ .................................................. ...............................................

Gotta throw to Brooklyn...

Not real hard, but creative and complex punches...

Great "chicken pox" line...

Holla back, please...
Born to Kill vs. Violent Words

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uppin this fo sho i guess he merked me good battle tho/
hurry up and give em 2 mo votes so he can get da win/
imma already in 2 battles after this one is finished i can battle again/
yall cats no im so sick wit the rhymes/
and by the way im uppin this 4 da 4th time/

pleaz can this battle get sum more votes/
or i'll bust in ya like "johns" do hors throats/
if u want my 4-0 winnin streak to come to an abrupt end/
BROOKYLN BETTA START USIN HIS UPPINS

Yeah, was feelin Brooklyn's more than Franchi$e... i would vote BROOKLYN too... if i could.


Go on and Vote damnit! Hell u ppl who have the ablility are wastin' it.. fuck ya!

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NO, JUST WANT FAIR VOTIN

UPPIN
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Yo both was ok but franchise's shit was tha kill
and BROOKLYN's shit was tha Murda


Vote=BROOKLYN

I got a Question BROOKYLN do u think that verse wuz good
or do i really need to elevate??? SORRY MODS for freeposting

aiigth franchise your opener was tight as hell...'Battlin u is like gettin a "clock drunk" cuz ya a "waste of my time"/'

but the rest didn't follow in consistency cuz if it had you woulda won...anyway...boorklyn you had hard punches throught n was structured better a touch more than franchise...jus bein real wit you...tite battle

vote-brooklyn