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Marcianno v/ BROOKLYN
Marcianno vs BROOKLYN
Requirements: --------------------------- 8 Lines Maximum !!!! 20 minutes to drop after I drop Rules: --------------------------- No Bitin No Feedin No Bitching No Building No Countering No Hate Votes No Crew Votes No Freeposting No Vote Swaying No Newbie Bullshit No Default Vet Votes * .:!4 Wins To Vote!:. * Other: --------------------------- 5 Consecutive Votes Is A K.O. 5 Total Votes Is A Defeat Comments: -------------------------- OK, CHECK-IN AFTER YOUR 4 HOUR SCHEDULE & THEN I'LL DROP |
aight...
im back brook..- checking in.. hey yall remember - NO DICK RYDING:_:: I KNOW THIS CAT'S GOOD BUT THIS IS A SERIOUS BATTLE:: TAKE UR TIME READING THE VERSE AND MAKE A SERIOUS VOTE:: check in and ready |
mmm waiting...
im done with my verse.. since its no feeding i started writing some minutes ago- so uppin for yours... oh.. please drop in the next 30 mins since im going out.. thanks.. |
OH YOU BACK ALREADY?
4 HOURS WENT FAST, WELL CHECK IN OONCE MORE & I'LL DROP :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::; ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::; :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::; |
ready!
show me what u got.. ............................... ................................ ............................... ................................ oh.. and can u please dont use bold letter or undeline or whit like that to make words stand out??.. thanks.. |
.:OPENER:.
I could of sworn Marciano's were cherries, when i called him out I was expected to wreck a peck of fresh picked berries/ you soft like pickin teddies, typin in capitols(capitals) wont make your rhyme stand out like people named Tina in BUENOS AIRES/(Argen-tina) .:MAIN DISS:. I'll grab ya mouth then grin, as I connect my air-force to ya chin/ scrape your sores with pens, then spray anthrax through your pores and skin/ look, herb, my nerves deserves some type a relief when i speak/ lets be brief..you still couldn't rip me even if John Q provided you with ‘beats’/-get it? .:CLOSER:. look kid, its ok to get ripped, just take it as a com-pli-ment/ knock out your sockets with a roll of quarters at ya dome, until I realized I started knockin cents/(sense) spelling correction** .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....... |
20 MINUTES IS UP MARC, EITHER YOU DROP WHAT YOU HAD OR I WITHDRAW MY VERSE
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enough is enough- its time to give this cat his third loss...
check it:} .:OPENER:. My lines enter ur respiratory, making it hard for u to breath. -Instantly causing u to shake involuntarily like Parkinson’s disease// Fuck head on collisions, I’ll attack u in ur dreams and violently shove a microphone in ur throat, just to amplify ur screams// .:MAIN DISS:. I’d put gas in your mouth and light it and you still couldn’t spit-heat// Slash your vocal chords and play instrumentals so you can say you rip-beats// Commin through with a slew, of murder-related material, puttin anthrax, in your bowls of Lucky Charms cereal // You’re always sucking on silicone titties, so you cant help but spit fake-lyrics. You say that your raising hell, but if you were an Exorcist ya couldn’t wake-spirits// .:FINISHER:. Your lyrics couldn’t raise eyebrows, if you used liposuction to suck-your-forehead// i hope u've learned next time u will run amuck and hide under your bed, since my drop all you´ll do is duck-behind-threads// .................................................. .................................................. ................ editing just to add an a to threds... |
it had to be done....
uppin for votes...... .............................. .-........................... .............................. good battle homez, and good luck |
NO DIRECT HITS OR PERSONALS?
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are u trying to sway vote?
. haha, look who is writing in capitals now?? ............................................ ............................................ no freeposting bro.. just votes. u need to tell me something.. PM me VOTERS: read the rules..... u need 4 wins in order to vote.. and Feeble Minded.., about my flow... sometimes i flow with end rhymes... but sometimes with internal rhymes. nah qhat i mean??... like rhyming a word in the midle of the sentence with the last word.. like in the Lucky Charms line... so maybe thats why u didnt appreciate my flow that much |
im not gonna vote as marcianno is in my crew...read it ne way thinkin it was gonna be a better battle than it was...yall both can do better ive seen better from yall it was tight just not ya usual...dont wanna sway votes by sain who i think won so i wont even say that much...
could have beee improvedon both sides...flowwas off in some parts for both yall know where it is probably.. not hatin yall just bored ad figured yll might want feedback... |
Marcianno Gets My Vote
His hit harder and i felt it more, Brooklyns had some good stuff but didntl lake as much overall punch and flavour My lines enter ur respiratory, making it hard for u to breath. -Instantly causing u to shake involuntarily like Parkinson’s disease// You’re always sucking on silicone titties, so you cant help but spit fake-lyrics. You say that your raising hell, but if you were an Exorcist ya couldn’t wake-spirits// They were dope lines, brooks closer was alright, but still not enough punch like marciannos VOTE= MARCIANNO |
stupid thing saying voting action cant be done?
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MAYBE THAT WAS A HATE VOTE RETURNED TO ME BECAUSE OF THE FREESTYLE FRIDAY THING WITH YOUR BATTLE WITH ACE OF CLUBS PERHAPS? |
Thanks Blac Jack...
in o0rder to poll vote you need to be a registered voter. u have over 200 posts and 4 wins so just pm alldig or the End and tell them u want to become a registered voter, they will make u one in a few minutes and then u can come back and poll vote, but please do, all votes are important, specially in a battle like this.. thanks. |
Take a loss man, i dun give a fuck about that, i would have won that battle but he n his gay mates crew voted, so he got banned
as for freestyle friday i looked into that and heard the supposed biting accusation, nothin like what i said.......so leave ur imagination to urself as for the battle, u read my explanation, we shall wait and see for others responses, but thats how i saw it, i got repsect for u n ur pieces so dont go claimin a hot vote man, in caseu dun realsied ive hit up alot of ur pieces n one just recently with a vote for u, so itsa fair vote |
i think brook had a nice flow & better creative punches, sorry i cant poll vote
the battle was pretty even but marcianno's verse could have been directed toward anyone & it didnt mainly hit brook |
why bother voting if you cant poll? ok..im going to have to vote for Brooklyn. in a 4 bar battle everything has to shine....no room for filler or played lines....and Marci although you did have a pretty good verse some of it was played....
vote= brook |
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^^^wtf???
anyways.... its 1-1.. but 1-0 in th ´poll...shit.. REGIME people: i hope that the crew battle between Regime and UT doesn't affect your voting in this battle... im not saying anything against your vote irrelevance but i just want to leave that clear... peace.. |
^^why would i give a fuck? its the internet mayne...i voted accordingly.
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^^ sorry bout that.. im high-- wrong thread..
but im here so lets break this down... BROOKLYN: Ive battle u before dog remember.?.. u won 5-3.. and i know u can do much better. your opener was aight.. but u though Marcianno were cherries?? wtf?-- and ive been watching both of u and ur the one who always TYPES IN CAPITALS airforce, John Q lines were dope... so was the anthrax one but Marci answerd back with another anthrax line- the one with Lucky Charms...lol.. he got u on that one. good wordplay there too ur ending was aight. Marcianno the parkinson line wasn't my fav. but the amplifying the scream one was dope- creative as for the main diss im quoting eveything cuz i was feeling it al da way... nice flow and hard punches: I’d put gas in your mouth and light it and you still couldn’t spit-heat// Slash your vocal chords and play instrumentals so you can say you rip-beats// Commin through with a slew, of murder-related material, puttin anthrax, in your bowls of Lucky Charms cereal // You’re always sucking on silicone titties, so you cant help but spit fake-lyrics. You say that your raising hell, but if you were an Exorcist ya couldn’t wake-spirits// ^^ exorcist shit was creative too- nice choice of words there ur last line wasnt my fav either but the liposuction one "raised my eyebrow"..lol.. tight shit.. so at the end i think im going to have to give this to MARCI cuz he had hard hitting punches in everylin, nice comback on the anthrax, and had some very creative shit-- Brooklyn's verse was tight too but this one goes to MARCI.. vote: MARCI, respect it. |
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^^^yo , if u cant poll vote.. then from were the fuck did BROOk's secopnd poll vote came from???????? shit is messed up.. i should have 2 poll votes.. not himm..Blac's and Red's... |
i couldnt poll vote at the time
i just pm'ed alldig yesturday becuz it was suppose to be set up so i could poll already........................................... ...................................... |
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^ TOO HIGH AS FUCK YEA MARCIANNO'S ARE CHERRIES, LOOK EM' UP |
haha lol.. i dint know that shit either....
i used the name Marcianno referring to Martian... marciano in spanish i beleive... it just sounded coo... |
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that was a pretty tight battle... since it was only 8 lines each
both hit wit good punches... but marciano was more consistant his punches were all good.... brooklyn had some good 1's, but didn't equal to marcianno marciano also had better flow... so he gets my vote |
Breakdown...
Brooklyn: I could of sworn Marciano's were cherries, when i called him out I was expected to wreck a peck of fresh picked berries/...That was lame Brook...LMAO...sorry yo...but you could have flipped that 100% better... you soft like pickin teddies, typin in capitols(capitals) wont make your rhyme stand out like people named Tina in BUENOS AIRES/...This was alright...wordplay was there, but could have been flipped better... I'll grab ya mouth then grin, as I connect my air-force to ya chin/...decent punch... scrape your sores with pens, then spray anthrax through your pores and skin/...Nice...graphic... look, herb, my nerves deserves some type a relief when i speak/ lets be brief..you still couldn't rip me even if John Q provided you with ‘beats’/...dope set up...nice punch and wordplay also... look kid, its ok to get ripped, just take it as a com-pli-ment/ knock out your sockets with a roll of quarters at ya dome, until I realized I started knockin cents/...LMAO...that was pretty coo... Overall, this was a decent verse...I seen you come way iller than this Brook...you been sleeping lately or something...but you had some decent set ups and a couple of punches connected... Overall: 6/10 Marciano: My lines enter ur respiratory, making it hard for u to breath. -Instantly causing u to shake involuntarily like Parkinson’s disease// Fuck head on collisions, I’ll attack u in ur dreams and violently shove a microphone in ur throat, just to amplify ur screams//...Dope ass opener and the flow and wordplay was felt... I’d put gas in your mouth and light it and you still couldn’t spit-heat// Slash your vocal chords and play instrumentals so you can say you rip-beats//...LMAO...this was nice... Commin through with a slew, of murder-related material, puttin anthrax, in your bowls of Lucky Charms cereal //...That was lame yo...LMAO...Lucky Charms...LMAO...too thought out...could have been flipped totally better than what it was... You’re always sucking on silicone titties, so you cant help but spit fake-lyrics. You say that your raising hell, but if you were an Exorcist ya couldn’t wake-spirits//...The first place was alright...but you made up for it on the second part... Your lyrics couldn’t raise eyebrows, if you used liposuction to suck-your-forehead// i hope u've learned next time u will run amuck and hide under your bed, since my drop all you´ll do is duck-behind-threads//...No...lol...really...closer was lame...could have left that out or thought of something better... Overall, same as Brook, decent verse...I've never seen any of your material, so I wouldn't know how you usual come, but everyone needs room for elevation...but your flow was on point for the most part, but you had some coo punches...what really stood out was your opener...you two have a similar style or was that just for this battle in particular? Overall: 5.5/10 Vote: Brooklyn |
damn.. Splitt..lost by 0.5 there.. oh well ,,its aight...
yo thanks fo the breakdown.-.. although after reading it i thout i was gonna get the vote but life's a bitch..hah lol.. good explanation.. bout the style- it was just for this battle- BROOk uses it all the time though |
I've personally seen better from both but Brook took this. Both were sort of simple but Marc used played out shit but his consistency was good. Brook was ok, just ok, creativity and flowed.
Vote: Brooklyn |
i would like to know what part of my verse yall considered played???
cuz i disagree and apparently thats the onyl excuse so far for voting against me....and i think its a cheap excuse... .................................................. .............................................. |
this was an iight battle but brook came harder and he was ill ..his punches his and he had nice word play
Favorite Lines I'll grab ya mouth then grin, as I connect my air-force to ya chin/ scrape your sores with pens, then spray anthrax through your pores and skin/ look, herb, my nerves deserves some type a relief when i speak/ lets be brief..you still couldn't rip me even if John Q provided you with ‘beats’/-get it? nice shit brook Vote Brooklyn |
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