asizzle vs. soulseeker
 

let's go 25 line max
i'll spit first

aright...

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don't take too long...

go.

listen soul seeker, i'll have your soul in beaker, put u in my closet where god can't reach ya\
you inexperienced bitch, don't get it twisted, just cuz u came here doesn't mean that ur gifted\
i'll have ur ego lifted, you will have my aura to fear\
like two fingers during a pap smear, ill have ur confidence disapear\
duck for shelter where the sun don't glisten, cuz my rhymes are explosive like nitroglyceren\
heres my next decision, ill defeat wit ease, and wit laser like precision and wit devestation like train collisions\
no holdin back, no aprehension, wrap a chain around ur neck and sell you for a pension\
learn how to pay attention, to my lesson that i'm stressin\
don't fuck wit wat u can't handle, cuz u test me and ill kill u and throw u down a channel\
body slam u into it like i was kurt angle, i'm ruthless and uninhibited\
i got mother fuckin markmanship like billy the kid, blast u in the head where lincoln got hit\
trust me my aim has credentials, ill pump u so full a lead, u'd be shittin out pencils\
u'd be on the concrete makin a white stencil, while i was eatin ramen and my asian lentils\
yo soulseeker u should leave this shit alone, cuz the only shit ur takin is a loss back home

aright asizzle...her i go........


a sizzle i'll give it to you simple and plain, my lines slicker than average flows, how could you possibly maintain/
they go straight to your brain, causing your mind to relapse, youre now under constant surveillance, your lines have been tapped/
this battles already been capped, ever since you even thought to contest, cause you unknowingly stepped into the ring with the best/
first of all, your name is a sizzle, did you just step out the frying pan, i will bust you till you burst blood, and that's with one restrained hand/
so it seems you did step out the pan, and straight into my flames,
you pickin on a newbie, damn son, you should be ashamed/
we both represent VA the same, but here you are giving all of us a bad name, and now you straight trying to claim/
like you got the skills of "billy the kid" when i know for sure you don't tote wit the munitions, you some petty fake bitch with high ambitions/
and don't worry, i'm paying full attention, watching your ass fall in defeat, no backing out now, there's no option to retreat/
let's keep our history tidy and neat, lincoln didn't die right after he got shot, he only died cause the needed medical attention wasn't brought/
so while the pistols still hot, aim again, but maybe you'll aim for a more vital area, before i inflict more damage than Andross did to Corneria/
too late, i hurt your pride, and i just massacred your lyrics, so now there you are conscience filled with troubled spirits/
your soul has been searched, but it's nothing i need, if i was testing your masculinity, you'd only be a half breed/
so next time you try to impede, remember that fucking with the SOULseeker will leave you with mind abrasions/
sending chills through your body, and spine tingling sensations/

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this battle was kinda weak but at the sametime it was very close.both emcees came strong and ended the same.the punches werent all that great but some were nice.soulseeker is takin this one because his verse was a little stronger

vote-soulseeker

this battle was close.........but i think soulseeker took it cuz he had some better punches and flow. I like with the 25 line limit, they both didnt go that far haha, but whatever. My vote goes to soul. peace.

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soulseeker you had some sick rhymes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
close, but if i could vote:

VOTE=SOULseeker

the bit bout shittin out pencil was my fav

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Vote = Soulseeker

both had quite strong punchlines, i enjoyed this battle, it was pretty close but soulseeker took it...just.

remember soulseeker u are only allowed to up a battle 5 times! any more and you shall be banned - just a little advice.

anyways i've poll voted so vote on my battle please:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62457

you pickin on a newbie, damn son, you should be ashamed/
we both represent VA the same, but here you are giving all of us a bad name,

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reason I like that is that callin' him out from the same city, making them look bad, nice

so next time you try to impede, remember that fucking with the SOULseeker will leave you with mind abrasions/
sending chills through your body, and spine tingling sensations/

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that last line was nice too.....good word play



i'll have ur ego lifted, you will have my aura to fear\
like two fingers during a pap smear, ill have ur confidence disapear\

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nice line......good punch


overall Soulseeker was tighter............better sounding rhyme

vote - Soulseeker

this was a close battle but soulseeker came a lil harder and i liked his sick rhymez
vote-soulseeker