MC Rory Breaker v. o0 Spirit 0o
 

Here are the rules:

10-16 lines
No D/R, No Hate votes, Explain your votes well.
I spit first.
I'll drop afterwards.
No freeposting.

you are spiting first i told you in the pm so dont bs me

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OK, I'll go, I usually delete all of my old PMs, so I change the post and spit, I'm sorry about that.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62317
Vote On That For Me n I'll Vote For This Whenever Ya'll Post Ya'lls Verses

its alright man mistakes happen just make this a good battle and
Good luck

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So I just got back, and I haven't spat in a while
Even if I'm out of practice I can beat your style
I challenged this boy, he decided we could dance
He didn't know my flow is like a boot in the pants
This boy says he's a Spirit, but we know he's dead air
He'll need more than the Creator if he wants to compare
This kid will go down quicker than if his name was Cousteau (1)
My lyrics cut through his ear like Spirit was Van Gogh (2)
This kid's style is so old, it's gone green and hairy
He couldn't be sweet if he was a strawberry
Spirit makes the crowd sleepier than Benadryl
Instead of writing raps, he should start on his living will
So here's my closing line, it's your turn to rhyme spirit
But everyone's chanting for me so loud, they won't be able to hear it

references:

(1) Cousteau - French Oceanographer, easily the most famous ocean & scuba diver in the world (Even though he is dead)

(2) Van Gogh - Dutch painter who cut off his own ear, and sent it to a former mistress of his. He later killed himself.

P.S. It is kind of useless for you to ask us for votes MC Phuh Que, since we both don't even have 100 posts yet.

Wack Times Call For Drastic Rhymes...

So you wanna challenge ghosts, to gain something to boast
but you couldnt scream "I WIN", if you used winner butter on your winner toast//
A champions breakfast is all you can get, your hot rhymes has been stated as pozein wet
So call the investagers , this must be put in "Investagated Files"//
Your raps look bititng, like bites off of "Girls Gone Wild"
So if this is the test, then nigga i aint gonna fail//
This aint "Fival Goes West", cuz this cat will prevail
Tranvestites arnt welcome here, either that or "chipindale"
You couldnt fake a man, if you shipped out my "mail"//
When i challenge you fake cats, give five punches for you and one for me
Cuz i gotta make it look like, you didnt straight up freeze

Finnisher...

"Breakin" you will be ez a then breakin fake plasta
Because i am the director and you the fake actor//

.:. Mic Masta Out .:.

i capitalized some shit

good battle nice rhymes
Good luck
Upppppin fo poll and reg votes either way just peep this battle for us

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spirit gets this, that last line finished ya good, his punches and flow were better, it was kinda godd from mc rory beaker but spirit killed it...........

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Yo spirit How did you get that Gun pic, below ya post? I Need to know, I'll vote on this when you tell me!!!!!

lol dont go stealin my pic but keep the vote fair man dont wanna dick ryde you or anything ill pm it right now

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tight battle, you both came good
equal flow......but i think spirit got this
with his punches.....everything else
was either not there or equal
props to both
vote=spirit
peACE

Up, Up, Up, and away!!!!!

I'm upping this for votes, come on, don't sleep on this.
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rory had a nice verse, but spirit came out stronger and threw his punches stronger. if i could poll i would poll up spirit

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=63024

that was horrible....sooooo i'm goin with rory..his shit flowed smoother and had sum wut of betta punches.....vote=rory..oneeeeeeeeeee

Yo, I can't vote, but I just wanted to say...

Both of you had nice verses, good flow, good punches. So nice work to all, but I think Spirit took this one...I read his a couple times and the flow just felt a smoother and his punches hit a little bit harder. (And nice work on the Fival Goes West reference). But hey, props to both of you, keep up the good work.

Up, Up, Up, and away!!!!!

I'm upping this for votes, come on, don't sleep on this.
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Up, Up, Up, and away!!!!!

I'm upping this for votes, come on, don't sleep on this.
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feelin rory on this one, due to funny punches and shit, good referance to history,clever, but possibly pre-written?, either way he still gets the vote from me.
VERDICT.................RORY!
check out my battle with complex manthrax............

yo i hate to say it but spirit came a lil stronger rory. he just had overall better flow. but keep elevatin my nigga you'll get'm next time.

vote: o0 Spirit 0o

i like spirits way better
better verses punches,good flow
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Up, Up, Up, and away!!!!!

I'm upping this for votes, come on, don't sleep on this.
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Up, Up, Up, and away!!!!!

I'm upping this for votes, come on, don't sleep on this.
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Up, Up, Up, and away!!!!!

I'm upping this for votes, come on, don't sleep on this.
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um poll votes people

and rory dont up more than five tiems you can get disqualified

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spirit took this easily...better everything...i don't think rory wack..dawg jus elevate some...also i liked the spirit concept that was very tite...original...but spirit caned this...1...

vote-spirit

good battle one more poll vote for my favor and this is over

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Let SLiK Break this Down


Punches- Spirit
Flow- Both
Creativity- Spirit
More Interesting- Spirit
Wordplay- Both

Final Vote- Spirit

Hey spirit odnt forget to go poll vote on mine.............................................. ........................................