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nDn_MC vs chris wood 3
aint got all day 10/20 lines
u know the rules no crew/no hate no this/ no that blah blah u spit first |
whose battlin here.............................................. .................................................. ....
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look at da heading...... man....me chris wood 3 yeh open ur eyes man.......................lol funny
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yo im ere now n im gonna spit now .................................................. .................................................. ..........................................
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yo i gtg.....spit ill get bak 2 ya 2morrow........................................... .................................................. ..........................
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nDn_MC ur a fuckin fool,cos my lyrics ll make u bitches drool//
im just fuckin agressive n crule/ sick enough to drown u in ya own backyard swimming pool// im perverted n thats just it,while im writein this rhyme i got my dick in ya mummas clit// i write like wot i fight like,dats 1st class bitch with or without a mike// give up rhymin bitch,n learn how to nit make ya self a sweater make sure it fits/ cos u be homeless on the street when im finished wit u bitch// in this maaafuckin battle ya gonna get slaughtered/ ya gonna wish when u were a baby u were fuckin aborted// im the boogy monster of rap, n ur lyrics r crap// n 4 u this battles like one big slap/......in the face cos its me ya gonna dream about in lonsuray n pink lace// nDn_MC vs chris wood 3,every one fuckin vote 4 me// n fuck this battle i need to take a leek/ so cumn kiss me on the cheek,but not the one on my face// im talkin the one belowi think its called an ASS ur turn ace// ''sorry ppl im tired cant think straight illdo better next time'' |
sorry i took so long to spit
writers block tiered its 11:00 over here n e way dont just diss my lines lets see some skill |
awwww u from NSW me too later dogg.............................................. .................................................. ...................................
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62812 yo vote no show on this battle and I'll hit this back
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stop bitin from eminem!!!i think its say wat u say or summat on the eminem show!!!........................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .
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yo chris wood 3// letz juz see//ure messing wif da nDn_MC//
i'll show ya da skills of a curr-ee//(curry) yo animal saying u biting from eminem// coz if u are, den i win dis battle, i mite stop slammin-den// but juz incase, i'll spit some shit make u look misplaced// i'll leave you in disillusion//head full of confusion// u gonna need a fusion//wif eminem, to keep ur arse from losing//look at me SEE//im on da SHORE// while u floating out to SEA//on a wooden raft// i mentioned ur name 2 ppl//dey juz stood and laughed// ur forgotten, u stink//ur lyk an egg da juz went rotten// im not tellin a lie// im stating da truth// mess wif me, u'll be lyk a baby// examine da sitution// u gonna need more information// to keep ur arse from disintegrate-n//(disintergrating) ur pushing so hard lyk a guy wif constepation// wif only one tooth// ur rhymes are petty// all over da place lyk confetti//im leaving ur rhyme deminished// ur gonna need a lyrical miracle//to keep ur arse from being finished// |
shit i stuffed up, it shud be lyk dis from here:
"u 'll be lyk a baby, wif only one tooth" sorry bout dat ppl, i re read it and juz noticed it................vote now ppl |
Both pieces needa up there vocab big time and work on there structure
nDm MC gets my vote though His piece had a bit more flavour to it and i digged some of his ryhmes but you still have room to improve, but they were both alorght, just keep uppin your vocab both of you and things will start to fall into place Peace |
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what the fuck yo talkin' bout boy? |
he was talking bout his arse man............lol da cheek not on his face...da other cheek iz his arse cheek..................
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he's talkin about his ass cheek, i think that nDn_mc had a better flow and more/stronger punches.
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ndn gets my vote
return the favor vote 4 me on mastov me !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
yo man how can u vote? u only got 70 posts....lol
uppin for more votes ppl........................... |
come on uppin for more votes ppl come on, only allowed 2 vote for about 12 dayz or so, so hurry.........................
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i dont do dat shit....cant u get banned for asking ppl 2 do dat???
uppin for more votes ppl...... |
come on ppl more votes come on............running out of time.............................................. .................................................. ...........
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yo come on ppl vote waz holding u up!!!............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...........
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chris swung it 4 me coz his punches were a bit harder n flow was smoother.........................vote when i can
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hea's my break down...
Flow: Chris Rhymes:Chris Punches:nDn Creativity:nDn Difficulty: nDn Chris's made me laugh tho. haha, yeah it kinda came through that it was late d00d. but it was good, jus its gotta go to nDn this time 'cas he had the harder punches and was a lil more togeather. One thing i do have to say is, nDn, is that you should werk on maybe makin it a bit funnier.... lol ima always going for the funny shit. |
yo! gotta say that nDn-MC iz the winna,on the simple fact that he aint rippin off eminem, and that his flow is a lot tighta.so there you go guys.
hey check out my battle wit complex manthax. |
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ya......hit up ma battle wit a poll vote.....1 http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=63383 |
uppin for few more votes ppl............................................... ..................................
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hea's my break down...
Flow: Chris Rhymes:Chris Punches:nDn Creativity:nDn Difficulty: nDn Chris's made me laugh tho. haha, yeah it kinda came through that it was late d00d. but it was good, jus its gotta go to nDn this time 'cas he had the harder punches and was a lil more togeather. One thing i do have to say is, nDn, is that you should werk on maybe makin it a bit funnier.... lol ima always going for the funny shit. If everyone knows there elemetry math,yall will know that 3 is more than 2 so my vote goes to NdN. hit up the battle that is in my sig. |
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