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Derive 07-04-03 04:32 PM

Purple Haze vs Dillusionist
 
Rules:
1 round
10-20lines max
no crew/hate/dickryder votes
YOU spit first
no recycling
no feeding
24hour DQ rule

iight ur up, spit ur verse

Derive 07-04-03 04:35 PM

checking in................................................ ..................................................

Dillusionist 07-04-03 04:43 PM

my name says it all, my rymes are crazy,
what the fucks with yours, purple hazey
ur gay as a two dollar bill, ya we all know
u cant rap for shit, this pussy aint got nothin to show
why dont you quit now before i light up your backside,
ill lay u out like a carpet and hang you from my roofside
your a pussy, ya already i can tell
ill knock you out cold while your hearin' the bell
this jimmy hendrix shit aint gunna work for you,
ill put you in a concentration camp like a fuckin jew

Derive 07-04-03 04:47 PM

hmmmm ok, i think you need alot of practice man, ok im gonna spit now, good luck.............................................. ..........

Dillusionist 07-04-03 04:50 PM

ya im new to this but thats ok................we'll see............................................... ................

Derive 07-04-03 04:52 PM

iight ill spit in a bit man, hold up cuz im on 2sites right now so u gotta chill ill have the verse done in 5-10mins

Dillusionist 07-04-03 04:57 PM

iight thats cool, take ur time............................/////////////////////////................................

Dillusionist 07-04-03 05:12 PM

you almost done i got myself a nasty case of swamp ass............................................... .................................

Derive 07-04-03 05:27 PM

iight ma bad, i was doing a topical on another site ok im gonna start writing my verse now, i wont take long

Dillusionist 07-04-03 05:46 PM

aight............................................. .......................///////////////////////////...............///////////////////.................

Derive 07-04-03 05:53 PM

I am the 'key to this site' thats why ya opticals locked//
this aint an optional-drop your death is as sure as catchin your mom ontop-of-my-cock//
killin you must be 'kosher' cuz ima maim-this-dill//
you couldnt swallow this victory if it came in a medical-pill//
deranged-n-Ill,you cant contain-this-skill//
your verse was like 'your mom givin birth to you', its not makin-a-point//
Dillusionist statement-is-voit i'll 'roll' you son like an 'autistic person' makin-a-joint//
serve you n Deliver infared tactics cuz when i target you all i see-is-red//
battlin with a 6 sence cuz i'm lookin at you and i see-the-dead son ima bout to put ya knees-to-bed//(kneel)
fill ya skull with bullets and part ya brain like god and a sea-of-lead//
Dillusionist ya verse 'blows' and now its safe to say the breeze-has-end//

~Purple Haze

Derive 07-04-03 05:54 PM

iight lets get some votes, that wasnt my best but it was enough to beat ur verse, ok VOTES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dillusionist 07-04-03 06:04 PM

iight lets get some votes...............////////////////...........................////////////////////............,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

B.A.D. R.A.P. 07-04-03 06:11 PM

uh... no need to explain vote, puprle... stop fuckin' with newbies, Dillusionist... you needa elevate for reals man, puple haze got this even though he had that played line about "you're not makin a point" and it still didn't make sense... but the rest of his rhyme murdered this cat.

vote=purple haze

hit up the battle link in my sig:

Derive 07-04-03 06:17 PM

can yall please poll vote ur votes, cuz then ur vote was worthless, wen ya vote poll vote ur vote, thx

Agony 07-04-03 06:18 PM

Purple Haze took this one with a better overall verse
purple haze had better punches and better and good multis
yo dillusionist, try to up ur vocab a bit, words were a lil to basic and try to use more punches
vote=Purple Haze

check out my battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62971

Coast 07-04-03 06:21 PM

just reading this cause Dillusionist is my friend on my block, and purple haze is in my crew....... if u really decifer it, it was a close battle, purple haze u in my crew and all but i expected a lot better punches than that. ur stuff was a lil played out... just some positive criticism

Derive 07-04-03 06:23 PM

^^^yo, you think i was trying hard hahahah, i went easy on him bro hes knew to this so i aint gonna go homicidal lol,

POLL VOTE UR FREAKING VOTES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

IceBerg420 07-04-03 06:25 PM

Man this was an easy one to Decide, Purple ya didnt have to slam him so hard though LoL. We all know who won this shit its just a matter of how quick u get your 5 votes. Dillusionists its ok man, spend a lil bit more time on this site, and trust me you'll get better.

Vote = Purple Haze

Derive 07-04-03 06:58 PM

iight uppin fo some moe votes, can yall remember to poll your votes pls, iight VOTES!!!!!!!

(2nd UP)

Derive 07-04-03 07:42 PM

lets get some votes up in dis place, so far its 3-0 im winning cmon i wanna end this shit VOTES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(3rd UP)

psycolad 07-04-03 07:50 PM

no offence to the newbie but u need to elevate a lot and purple haze had a lot of dacent wordplay in comparison.only probs wit purple hazes verse is lack of line equality and sentences that actually made sense!!!

vote=Purple haze

peace out.../

Psyco

Deadly Alliance 07-04-03 07:53 PM

my vote goes to purple haze, he had better punches flo wordplay etc., i htink that dillusionist really needs to practice

vote=purple haze


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