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XL4REAL vs COMPLEX MANTHRAX
10 lines max
you spit first no editing your post |
Ok dude here we go!!!!!! UK!!!!!!!!
checkin in i'll spit after ya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
I SPAT FIRST but this kid spat 20 lines instead of 10 so i repeated my verse below and added 10 lines to make it fair,,, read mine first to keep it fair for him also... peace
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I spit against you with your own elements//
I'll crush your style like 100 elephants. Thunder, lightning, rain and showers// I'll use them against you until your pushing up flowers. I heard in your into weird shit your talking kicks in your messages// I heard you a freak smelling shoes for fetishes. Well you gave me that line when shell toes you be talking// I'll shove my size 12 so far up ur ass in your mouth i'll be walking. You think your complex, na your simple// I'll squeeze your brain through your eyes like im squeezing a pimple. You couldnt absorb my skill, you gonna get beat up manthrax// Cuz your about to get bloody soak it up like a tampax. I twist your set up back around against you// You so dumb you dont realise that I just dissed you. I heard you got mad dirty s.t.d.'s// After all manthrax your half a disease. (manthrax = man + anthrax) The other half (man) you think you can be// Never, cuz you replaced your dick with a pussy. Your rhymes are fake as shit like silicone tits// Now you've digested my style its given you the shits. |
you went TWICE OVER THE LIMIT erase half your verse and i'll not call for a DQ................................................ ........its 10 line limit 5 bars
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I'LL SPIT AGAIN WITH AN ADDED 10 LINES SEEING AS YOU SPIT 20 AND THE LIMIT WAS 10
I come armed-with-berrettas to harm-the-trendsetters/// I slap down your lyrics put my palm-to-your-letters/// Ya pits-stink, ya-spits-stink, its instinct ya mad-at-me/// You write like the Bee Gees and your flows a fuckin ‘Tradegy’/// I spit quick sporadically; MK fatality/// To want to battle COM ain’t dumb its insanity/// The only grip you got on this battle is on ya shell-toes/// That post is more of a waste (waist) then where my fucking belt-goes/// I can’t write with pens I’m so hot the fucking felt-glows/// I’ll melt-those shell-toes turn them into sneaks with velcro/// My spits so thick its get stuck-in-tissue/// This punch line could miss and still fucking-hit-you/// I corrode-you-with-chemicals coz your ode-was-so-terrible/// I wipe the smile of your crew; leave you solo-hysterical/// You mean-to-cuss-me? need speed-to-rush-me/// You won’t like me when I’m mad; I turn green-and-muscley/// I’ll slaughter ya-order and kidnap ya-daughter/// You could have her back for one night but you still can’t afford-her/// |
wot you on about mate? youve got 12 lines in there too?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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YOU HAVE WRIT 20 LINES, there are two lines then a space then two lines then a space and so on, i only wrote ten so i write ANOTHER ten to be even with YOU
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good battle and close battle on both ya parts
Xl4real had a good finisher, but Complex was more consistant complex had good multis and wordplay and what I think is important, better vocab by the way, Xl4real, that half man half anthrax shit had me laughin, good shit, but Com still won vote=Complex Manthrax check out my battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=63437 |
thanx dawg much appreciated, uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....
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Good battle you two. I just started postin so i cant vote yet but i think complex got this one his flow was dead on. Xl4 had some good punch lines but the flow was a bit off. Great battle
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THIS IS A HARD DECISION, BOTH VERSES WERE GOOD, PRETTY GOOD PUNCHES BUT MANTHRAX FELL OFF AT THE END AND EXCLUDING XL'S LINE LIMIT I THINK HE TOOK THIS BATTLE
MAYBE IF BOTH VERSES WERE EVEN IT WOULD HAVE MADE A BETTER DIFFERENCE FOR COMPLEX VOTE-XL |
This was a very close battle. But I'ma have to give it to the man with the better punches.......XL4real. A good majority of his punches were funny as hell, while Complex your punches flowed well but they just didn't seem to connect as hard.
Vote = XL |
thanks for tha props............................................. ......................... just uppin for votes yall..................ICEBERG420 u didnt poll vote son...........................peace!!!!!!!!!!!
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complex....
I come armed-with-berrettas to harm-the-trendsetters/// I slap down your lyrics put my palm-to-your-letters/// that's a good ass start.... Ya pits-stink, ya-spits-stink, its instinct ya mad-at-me/// You write like the Bee Gees and your flows a fuckin ‘Tradegy’/// meh, that's alright I guess I spit quick sporadically; MK fatality/// To want to battle COM ain’t dumb its insanity/// ok The only grip you got on this battle is on ya shell-toes/// That post is more of a waste (waist) then where my fucking belt-goes/// I can’t write with pens I’m so hot the fucking felt-glows/// I’ll melt-those shell-toes turn them into sneaks with velcro/// My spits so thick its get stuck-in-tissue/// This punch line could miss and still fucking-hit-you/// I corrode-you-with-chemicals coz your ode-was-so-terrible/// I wipe the smile of your crew; leave you solo-hysterical/// You mean-to-cuss-me? need speed-to-rush-me/// You won’t like me when I’m mad; I turn green-and-muscley/// I’ll slaughter ya-order and kidnap ya-daughter/// You could have her back for one night but you still can’t afford-her/// the rest was ok, the whole verse was alright but not great now XL.... I spit against you with your own elements// I'll crush your style like 100 elephants. complex's open was better Thunder, lightning, rain and showers// I'll use them against you until your pushing up flowers. that wasn't too shabby, I kind a liked it I heard in your into weird shit your talking kicks in your messages// I heard you a freak smelling shoes for fetishes. that's just silly Well you gave me that line when shell toes you be talking// I'll shove my size 12 so far up ur ass in your mouth i'll be walking. haha, that's funny You think your complex, na your simple// I'll squeeze your brain through your eyes like im squeezing a pimple. You couldnt absorb my skill, you gonna get beat up manthrax// Cuz your about to get bloody soak it up like a tampax. good stuff good stuff I twist your set up back around against you// You so dumb you dont realise that I just dissed you. I heard you got mad dirty s.t.d.'s// After all manthrax your half a disease. (manthrax = man + anthrax) I think this dudes winnin, let's see.... The other half (man) you think you can be// Never, cuz you replaced your dick with a pussy. Your rhymes are fake as shit like silicone tits// Now you've digested my style its given you the shits. ok, both these dudes verses were alright, they both had some good lines in their stuff, I liked complex's start, but I liked XL's whole verse better than complex's vote: XL bye |
uppin for votes, cmon peeps i tottaly merked this guy, anyone who thinks otherwise must be trippin'.......................................... .................................................. ..........................
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Complete Man got this for me.He had alot of multis and punches.
XL4real's verse was kind of childish. That 100 elephant line and that element line was bullshit.. my vote goes to complete hit the battle up that in my sig. |
HUH???????????????????
SORRY KIDD!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW OLD ARE YOU?????????????????LITTLE BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!! YOUD KNOW ALL ABOUT CHILDISH...BEING STILL STUCK TO YA MUMMA'S SKIRT!!!!!!!!!!!! |
my vote goes to COMplex, b4 yo ustart talkin shit about younggadgets verse XL, read your own verse it was childish!, i dun know how people voted for you, COMS obviously was wayy better, i dont need you to talk shit about this post because its my opinion so if u got shit to say keep it to urself cuz i alrdy merked ya once
vote=COM |
oh damn man outta everyone id least expect you to do dat COM, damn man your ma boy COM and id hate to do dis but i got 2 dawg its my job, u ma boy but i gotta do my shit man, COM is DQed, he used that same verse against someone in another site, the link is
http://www.mrlif.com/forums/index.p...=6116&page=-1#5 damn man,not smart bro COM losses CLOSED |
^^^^^Good Looking Out,Excellent Work,Keep Up The Good Work
COMPLEX IS DQed CLOSED!!!!!! |
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