Rhyme Masta vs. Ill Error
 

10 lines
Check is Tues
Verse due Wendsday

aight the verse is due Tuesday we both agreed------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Yo heres mine

So you Ill Error this is the biggest error you ever make
Battlin me you better give the Lord your soul to take

Was ya doing dope when you accepted this battle cause you chokin
From what I've heard dope wasn't the only thing you be smokin

Ye granny says you need to stop suckin on dick
She also adds rub her nipples faster thats the trick

My rhymes leave people on the edge of they seat
Too bad though your dick is the only thing you can beat

Tell your girl that tommorow I'll see her somehow
Nevermind, scratch that I'm in bed with her right now

Ayo,

I ~kill wit skill~ and dump peices in ~parks~
My verse so hot have ya ears shootin ~sparks~ no ~remarks~

You try ta ~remark me~ bark me ~ talk me~ but im to ~sparky~
im runnin but u tryna ~walk me~ im too hot u cant ~cough me~

im to ~sick to heater~ blood to ~thick 1 touch u got ~fever~
dont even leave it to ~beaver~ and fuck ~ms. cleaver~

fuck t.v shows im too smart just call me ~higher-grade~
u could'nt throw punches if u had a glass of ~kool-aid~ too afraid

cuz i clip ~backs~ knock down ~stacks~ im to solid no ~cracks~
i roll solo fuck ~packs~ i terminate ~masta nacks~ no ~raps~

This dude like a politic tryna ~protest~ no ~test~
i'll cuff ya cardiac and have ya in ~cardiac arrest~ ~no rest~

u washed u finshed im done end this with ~hype~ no ~life~
bitch be like the WIZARDS and just retire the ~MIC~ (m.j)

UPPIN FOR VOTES YALL HOLLA
COME ON NA
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Ayo, both verses were good but Rhyme Masta came harder i liked these lines ............

My rhymes leave people on the edge of they seat
Too bad though your dick is the only thing you can beat

Tell your girl that tommorow I'll see her somehow
Nevermind, scratch that I'm in bed with her right now

And Hit up these battles honestly please...
Thanks


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5136#post605136

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5325#post605325

i got wat betta punches buck
alright though
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You didn't vote you just gave your explanation vote for it aight
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come on yall

yeah, eveything was even until Rhyme Masta dropped the 4pounder. great battle to both.....
vote=Ryme Masta

word that shit was a good battle in all but rhyme masta got this one

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Ayo hit up these battles, if you drop your link then ill drop an honest vote ok, peace

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5136#post605136


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5521#post605521

I can't vote cause I have 78 posts otherwise I would---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

I think Ill Error took this one
Ill error had some good wordplay and I think his punches came harder
I feel Ryme Masta's verse was a lil to simple
vote=Ill Error

uppin vote peeps---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

2-1 uppin
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rhyme masta got my vote.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........

Yo when ya get to 100 posts make sure ya come back and vote we need votes -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

uppin for votes...-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

this was close, but im going for rhyme masta. although his verse was simple, it had some nice flow. error tried a little too hard to get wordplay and metas, and it affected the general flow.
vote- rhyme masta

Aight if ya vote in here drop a link and I'll give an honest vote in your battle. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

ryhme masta the lines that young buck yacked about was da ones dat won it

ya droppin is flowin nicely

ill u needa up ya skillz

POLL VOTE TO RYHME MASTA

yo master took this by obvoius reasons, ey master please hit up this battle right quick and poll vote for the best verse, dont forget 2 poll vote aight, thanx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=64229