Common Sense... .(I'm back to my old self)
 

(this is a story, ((rewind))
(this is a story about, ((rewind))
(story about...
(common sense ((rewind))
(c-c-common sense....

common or not my sense's rotted, distraught like god circled false in the sanity check box.
mentality dun stepped off, I'm fallin' how soon 'till I hit rock bottom an' end on
a high note, blind by five fours.. you do the math, how long I been alive for?
I'd die for salvation, for kind salutations, but this evaluation's say'n I'm tha kind'll take it
an' now you makin' accusations, asumptions of somethin' you got no part of...
that's not the art of patience, an' understandin',
debatin' whether I should be a pacient for my underhandin'.
locked up an' wrapped in rubber padding, don't mind my askin..
but where the fuck you get off?.. fuck it. I'm-a speed it along, take heed to-tha song
caution, this may be an alarm, deciet means no harm, but I do
I lie to buy your trust, while I slide across ya sights un-noticed
an' while I'm out-a focus I I pull this... ((gun shot))
your whole existance is over.. another chip off my shoulder..

HOOK X2
this is common sense as far as I see it
my ideas spread over a wide variety of topics an' reason
without believing you wont see'm
but you hopeless peons wont believe'm if you cant see'm
so I can't teach'm

degenerates hooked on medicines percribed by doctors chalked up in my head again
they try'n ta clean tha streets, so why in tha first place was it fed to them
instead of lettin-in ya could've said to them-> no more
before it was too late, now they just fillin' space in hospital beds
try'n-a get off-a they meds, an almost imposible attempt, trust me I know!!
'cause before rap, I was on a high dose of tylonol you ain't never tried before
so much pain it was like my ribosomes were dried an' try'n-a find a new home
or arrive at new code from from the RNA, it's hard to say
but something did change, my faith swayed and my state-a mind stayed the same
so now I'm a believer.. I believe in home made electric chair levers
with bodies in-em, anialation of competition thru force or inscription
it doesn't matter, as long sa they battered after battle...
I slice-um with this sick incision...

^^^^^^^^^DAMN love the contend bro sick shit fam.....am feelin this u should make this piece into audio sound sick...............


Wun FAM

ya mang, thats shits sic, keep elevatin

elevatin'.... ok..

YO BLUNT REAL GOOD DROP MAN. IT WAS DEEP, AND MADE YOU THINK ABOUT DIFFERENT THINGS. YOU'RE RIGHT YOU DO TOUCH MAD DIFFERENT TOPICS WHICH MAKES YOU A WELL ROUNDED LYRICIST. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK , AND HOLLA AT THE KID!

woah!! i had to read that twice...just cuz i got in tha flow quick..lol..nice drop kid..*jaw drops* i'm aw'ed....and to think you asked me to write somethin w/ya..lol..jp..God bless..1..

This Was...TIGHT..Tighter Than A Wave A Cap On A Niggaz Head..:) Verse Was Dope The Whole Way Through..Loved It Man..

lol....man...my girls say that..but they say some spiderman iish underwear...don't ask..there a lil weird.....i thought no one else...ever did that...lol..sorry had to state that

lol... thx yo... appreciatin' the feedback

spandangle.....dope shit bro !!!!!!

lol.. spandangle... never heard that one b4... thx I guess.. keep 'em coming.... shiznit where you at, I like your feedback.. lol, UPPIN!!!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/b...inmentmusic.htm

^ GO THERE TO CHECK OUT THE AUDIO FOR THIS SONG.. IT'S ILL AS ECOLI WATER.... LOL,... , . ,.,.,.,. .,. ,, YOU GOTTA PEEP IT..

yo that was good one of the best ive heard

Good concepts... good flow... good vocab... this shit was sic. I'll check out your audio of this song when I get back home and get on the computer (I'm fuckin' around at work right now)... Peace

word... madd respect for tha respect on this piece.. lol, uppin' yet again..

You Have Elevated...

I Beat You In An Audio Battle :)

Nice Track

didn't I beat you?.. I dno, ne-way... uppin'...

I Believe It Was A 5-0 KO My Way :)

Uppin...

meh... whatever... you wan-a re-match?...

Shiznit's Thoughts:


VOCABULARY

>damn ...u used like the awesomest words...no one couldve done it better than u...the fact that u combined simplistic words with restructured glances of captured terminology..thats just basically brilliant!...

FLOW

>the hook made it more irreplaceable..like its made to be there...teh first time i read it i was feelin an audio coming then i heard it...its definitely exceptional...beats are alright tho..props for that

WORDPLAY

>nice played words like u amuse urself with it...the metas and multis are definitely enough to make the piece participate within each words and flow alltogether..just one thing tho...some words are missing but i cant think right now so ill just leave it like that..hehe

CONTENT

>typical but subliminal approach made this even better...i liked how the way u put emotions then one thing would refracted one way or another...its quite amusing..and i liked readin this a lot...

OVERALL

>another one from you....damn!>..thats cool...i like readin stuff from you...very nice...keep em droppin!

see that's why I like her... thx, and yes I do amuse myself with my wordplay... lol, this is all one big joke to me, it's really nothing.. *modest smile*.. .lol..