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Solar Elipse vs. Raz
10-15 lines MAX....
no crew, hate, dickridin votes.... Raz spits first...... here we go. vote on best verse.....peace. |
aight.....
now before ppl say my shit too long and it don't floh, bullshit, u have to floh to it a certain way, it's artist inturperation ok heres a quik freestyle.......... which i expect from u s.e. check it..... see solar eclipse explode like a red giant when i spit to this outkast// chemical warfare i unleash on this welfare bitch, we all know raz spit anthrax// this kat could make it as a rapper, u can tell how he rhymes he has no pride// couldn't ever get a girlfriend so prom night was a "Family Affair" like he "Mary J Blige"// restart and reboot ya system, i spit complex words ta overload ya cpu// ya prolly thought i wasn't listen'n when ya bitchslapped, u was like who-me-verse-you?!// clinically-proven Raz is not human ya know this fag is mortal// fuckin ya mama was a "rabbit Race" 12 months later out pops this "turtle"// <---means he is slow 12months vs. 9months......rabbit and turtle..... 8barz and i got u seein millions-of-stars make u feel like u got hit wit a car, nah a macktruck// leave u butchered, scared, charred and beat u wit a crow-bar, nah just spit 10barz should b-a-nuff// common dawg i know u ain't serious, what a newbie, u couldn't go first// u set everythang up and then bitch out puttin my name down, fuckin starburst// this bitch is 10-2 not kuz he good, kuz he rapes all tha new commers// u have no impact at all, all u make is noise, new name for u is thunder// *throws solar tha mic* |
shit man, this gonna be so fuckin dragged out..............common man spit, hate to have a fuckin noshow;..............................
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this isnt gonna be a no-show but i cant spit tonite..........ill check in tomorrow and write a verse after the check-in, so dont worry i hate no shows too. like i said, ill check in and post my verse, so until then...........peace.
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dawg don't fuckin prewritin this is a fuckin bitch move....u on right now and u cant drop 5 barz......PLeazz oh my god what tha fuck,....u see my verse and say i'll post tommorrow......this is BULlshit..............post tonight....or this is a noshow...don't wanna drag this shit out./......dayum
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damn is this kat really gonna get away with this shit, prewritin like a muhfucka.............this is BULLSHIT
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aight well dawg if u ain't post by 9 oclock tonight.......i'm gettin no show votes......fuckin prewritin...........
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u both are good if i had 2 vote i say raz by betta punches........................................... .................................................. ....
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i wanna battle the winna out of this.............................................. .................................................. ..........................................
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uhhh only raz spitted hahaha
.................................................. ...................... herb ________________ nice spit raz keep doin ur thang |
raz got this one by betta flows
raz can u check out my battle? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=64706 |
Hypnotic dawg he got 15 minutes till i get noshow votes....and if u want to poll ya vote.........
Smokin Dro thanx dawg come back when this finished and poll Massikre dawg i ain't gonna battle u man, i don't think it'd be right...... up ya posts and upp ya record and then pm me aight (no hate at all) ALL OF U, AT 9 I GETTIN NO SHOW VOTES........COME BACK AND POLL |
a u dont get wins fo no shows i dont think
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but dawg its bullshit if he got 3 days to look at my shit and prewrite and try and fuck my shit up and gimme a L because he prewritin.....thats bullshit....and i don't want this to be thrown out kuz i took time to think of this shit......so fuck i should get this W ....it's bullshit
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man what the FUCK is your problem?? I had family shit to take care of, so i couldnt spit last nite or tonite! But JESUS CHRIST stop whining like a little bitch....i NEVER pre-write and i check in before every battle. And 3 days? I started this on the 8th real late and now its the 10th. So its really only been 2. So BECAUSE I HAVE HAD FAMILY CRAP TO TAKE CARE OF, i havent been able to spit....i will tomorrow though, and itll be pure keystyle. peace.....for now anyways
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OMG, damn man, it's a spit of 10-15 and ur online now ur in tha executive fourm.....But ur a hot lyracist and can't spit.....please thats shit i understand all yo shit, but common it's a lil battle spit sumn so we can get this shit over wit.... i mean u read my shit, and i know u've thought about it atleast once so u pretty much gotta idea about what u gonna say,.......which is shit, but SPIT!!!!
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i already told you, i cant tonite cuz im burnin a cd, and besides i dont pre-write shit anyways. Ill have my shit by tomorrow, and if you dont you can take the win. But I WILL POST A VERSE BY TOMORROW, KNOW THIS..................until then, i gotta sleep. peace........................
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dawg whatever mayne, i can't take it when battles go slow, it's fucked..................... i know u understand
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yo ill vote when he spits// but 4 the meantime can u plz hit my shit up with emcee rashaddy// thanx if u vote dont forget to poll vote and ill come back and vote on this shit honestly//
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alright, im gonna show this bitch how to REALLY keystyle.....ill spit in about 10-15 minutes and show you how its done. Maybe after that, you'll quit whinin and we'll finally see who won this battle........peace.
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16 minutes is all i need to finish this...heres a little keystylin for you Raz............................no pre-writtin here
These rhymes slice through ur chest like a sword, ur verse must be a 2 by 4 cuz it makes me lyrically “board” (bored) :: got you with words that come in perfect accord, pound you into the ground so much you couldn’t get more “floored” // 1 For your own sake, take your skills and forsake em, cuz im takin ur rhymes and squeezing em like a grape :: rake up this win to shut this bitch’s face, my rhymes leave you so paranoid you’ll be “sleeping awake” // 2 Show no fear when I kill this queer, don’t look at Solar directly cuz ill leave ya retina seared :: you got no moves left, got you crackin tears, your fag ass should go back to ur homosexual video career // 3 You couldn’t create a “buzz” if you were a saw, metaphorically murderin u raw and exposin ur greatest flaws :: got this cat verbally “de-clawed,” spit spiteful clauses that cause time to pause, cuz my lyrcials are beyond physical and spiritual laws // 4 Im spittin miracles like I was lyrically blessed, got you to confess due to the stress of this battle test, I can attest to ur lyrical mess :: I haven’t even flexed half my skill pecs, rip your lips into tiny bits to leave you speech-less // 5 Wreckin Raz radically like I was Taz is my latest fab, this retard thought “keystylin” was when I dress up my keypad :: Got this bitch ticked, put him on my latest “merkin” tab, he couldn’t come up with a “solution” to his rhyme problems if he was a science lab // 6 vote on best verse.....peace. |
Good Battle........Really Feelin it.......
Solar I think in my opinoin Took this one............ He had a smoother Flow and nice punches.....Good Wordplay too.......... Raz Nice punches........I liked ur Family Affair Line....haha.....yours was good......No doubt, Just you fell off in some places Dawg........No beef.......Much Respect Could ya Check this..... http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=64754 |
yo UPPIN, good drop but lets get some more votes in this bitch.......................Holla drop a poll and i'll hit yo shit up wit a poll, just drop a link
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Aight ill take a no-show vote....
Check out my battles http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=63221 AND http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=64420 |
Oops solar did drop and wow did he drop alright..... I felt his flow and he gets my vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=63221 AND http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=64420 |
okay lemme break it down...
WORDPLAY=SOLAR ELIPSE PUNCHES=RAZ FLOW=RAZ CREATIVITY=SOLAR ELIPSE PERSONALS=RAZ close ass battle, but i think Raz got it. VOTE=RAZ |
solar.... deffinately got this
raz had some ight punches... but lacked to have enough of them solar was constantly droppin good punches.. nice opener by the way vote=solar better wordplay punches n overall just better wit multis n all |
solar took it betta punches props 2 both tho im out holla
peep mine http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6497#post616497 |
solar took it fo sho, better flow, punches were decent, nice wordplay
vote=solar vote on my shit http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=65158 |
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