elocution v xl4real
 

10 lines max
no nuttin esp feedin
punches every line

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FUK IT AYO

i hear your metamorphosis n its got you burned down to da heel/
am battlin da lowest of da lowest from da u.k known as xl4real/
am stickin to ma guns so anytin you spit i can shoot down at a speed/
coz you're addicted to ma style, like smokey(friday) to his weed/
at any point xl you want me to stop n innitiate da final line/
you betta tel me now coz your oblivious to dis battle n now da crown is mine/
its simple,easy,hard n sleazy a little like your mum wen she's on her kneeeeeee.........syyyyy/
if you fail to co-operate n get da fuk out of ma sight/
den you'll have to feel elocutions girth,in da depths of da haunted night...../

ha ha ha aha .....freaky

RUTHLESS......

I aint feeling this elecution lesson::He switches his name to dean I think hes messin?
Cuz a player in the rap game who called dean::Dam I cant take him serious, he aint mean?
Nothing but a lesson in how speak proper:Give it up man you aint no rhyme dropper.
Im the man gonna make your brain vex::I'll reach inside, tie a knot in your cortex. (seriberal cortex = brain stem)
I rip your whole self from within your cranium::You become a ghost cuz your rhymes be fading son.
Im a ghostbuster I got you in my trap::Im exposing a fake and I think he gonna crack.

Dean, oh Dean nothing but a crack fiend::Biting and riding cuz he needs his dream.
Hes a wack ass punk bitch fake MC::With no skill, no ill and no chance of beating me.
Im a exorsise this battle cat like a fucking avenger::Reverse your power an turn you back into crenger.
Cuz if your true cat then you must be a kitten::But you cant hit me, you even miss your litter.

Yer this was wack but vote it up anyways!!! I wasnt feeling it!!! he! he! peace man.

im editing my verse son cuz theres a wird fucking smile face in it which I didnt do. good verse though son you got style hope I doh!!!! he! he!

It wont let me edit it man, thats fucked me right off, take no notice of that stupid fucking smile face, I didnt put it in dare!!!!!!!!!
i'll mail the mods and see if they can take it out!!!!

xl4real took this. had some nice flow and had harder punches. dean, your rapping too elementary, become more creative and you will be a better rapper.
vote- xl4real

return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=64435

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x took this, not by much because you both had alot of filler but lets just say you had a better flow that i enjoyed

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lets have some votes guys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
peace!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!

uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!
vote dis shit up guys and gals!!!!!
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XL got this, but only just

XL HIT THIS PIECE UP WITH SUM VOTES, Same for anyone else readin

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=64713

Dean came much to basic in this battle...The only thing he possibly ranked in was flow. X4Real took the battle to him. His wordplay and flow was better...Ya both need to some work though....

Vote is for X$real

uppin for 2 more votes cats!!!!!!!!!!!Lets hav em!!!!!!!!!
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Peace!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

FOREALLLLX U SHUDA CAME THAT HARD IN OUT BATTEL HOMIE NICE SHIT FEELIN...BUT ANYONE HIT DIS SHIT UP..NICE SHIT
TO YA BOTH BUT X MARKED MY SPOT........1
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=64430

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