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dw vs black.jack
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no feedin no crew/d ridin/hatin votes i'll spit first! |
aight dawg im checkin in for ya
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alrite listen, yo yo, yo yo--
--black jack come back wen lines have elevated from "flat"/ "flat lines" the news n that black jack has 2 eat his food through tubes/ my lines so "phat" they cud do wiv liposucion, so y'all cud av a chance of winnin instead of a record deducion/ the poll 4 a election! an election where im gatherin all the affection, n u av 2 settle wiv overwhelmin rejection/ man ima infest in ya ears n nest, so wen ya rest my style can make ya heart pump through ya vest/ in this thread u my guest, n unless u already know the pigs lookin 4 u on suixide arrest/ battlin me? u might aswell get an uzi, n blow ya brains into sushi, cos u ment 2 bring a tight verse but ya bring yours loosely/ u from hong kong hope that don't mean u got sars, cos 1 thing u avn't got, is rhymes in barz--/ jails the nearest u bin 2 them n u enjoyed that cos u left wiv bum hole scars, your verse shud come in a vars--/ cos a battle means punches, n your verse the equivelent of flowers in bunches/ we came 2 this battle 4 sportin reasons but we leavin with "fillet" beef, cos im a thief whos robbin a bit of ya record n ya self belief/ relief is wot you feel wen i key in my last diss, i neva miss-wiv-a-diss while u do even wiv a pre-writtin list/ armaggedon started on febuary the nineth, the world's end began wen ya mum granted u wiv life/ bout 2 finish now but i'll be back 4 more, im closin the door but thats not the end of this lyrical war// black jack's profile: born= feb 9 lives= hong kong o.k reply wen ya can dawg! |
yo dw i will honestly hit dis up when black.jack spits..
but in the mean time can u honestly hit my battle up wid style.. cause it is bieng slept on..... peace |
come on black u droppin dawg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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yeah sorry man, had sum shit to take care of, aight i will drop soon, ill be quick puttin it together
Peace, and nice drop |
Im a "Dope Verse Prostitute" the way niggaz line up to pay for my shit/
No concern bout ma vocab but cause just like an "Action Movie Handgun" im runnin wit an "Unlimited" clip/ My lyrical skills leavin me in a world of good livin whilst your obviously still "Mentally Health Stricken"/ Shit its bout time i change my name to "Undertaker" seein as im "Buryin" cats for a living/ (Undertaker buries people, my skill does on this site) Like "murderin" with a handgun im not Hittin as Hard As I Can/ Thats why i plan to end your textcee career by gettin a shotgun n' Blowin Off Ya Hands/ Im the Microsoft X Box, The newest n' hottest Shit Around/ Your just the Nintendo 64, cause when compared to me you just get "Clowned"/ FINISHIN PUNCHES.... Like a cheap cologne I "Burn Ya" n "Sting Ya" upon Contact/ Speakin of contact your "lense" must be too blurred for u to look at my drops n claim "I Can Outplay That"/ THE CLOSER.... Carelessly I Rep Hong Kong, on this site its a move seen as Bold/ Whilst on this site your the reason for not f*ckin old people, CAUSE YA SHITS TOO OLD!!/ Chump..... Aight peace out all, lets get sum votes in ere |
nice....wut was ya name before blakc jack.. i remmemebr u tellin me before..im just curios...shits boggilin my mind..besides dat nice spit dw..but balck jack took it i was feelin his punches...even tho both verses where wak...because the punches where weak...u guys cuda use ahrder shit,,,,,dw actaully had a nnice intro..but lost hope from there...
vote...black.............hit dat up eiother u cats http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=64430 |
Dw, ya had some good stuff, but I think ya may have been concerned with making to much of a long post. Ya need to strengthen ya bars. Quality is always better than quantity.
I vote **Blackjack** cause his bars packed the quality that makes readers be like wow. Blackjack lead with wordplay, punches, and structure. |
Im not sure, But i cant vote anyways
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0977#post610977 Hit me up there |
Dw, ya had some good stuff, but I think ya may have been concerned with making to much of a long post. Ya need to strengthen ya bars. Quality is always better than quantity.
I vote **Blackjack** cause his bars packed the quality that makes readers be like wow. Blackjack lead with wordplay, punches, and structure. __________________ word guyz. dw much respect |
yo dw i still think i could've taken u. i'll battle u again just not rite now. when i get some wins and even my record out then maybe we will. im probly gonna face xl rite now so hit it up
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yo i think dw got this shit by betta punches, poll vote- dw, ey dw hit up this shit and poll vote for the best verse aight dawg, dont forget 2 poll vote, thanx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=64729
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alrite 3-1 to black thats rite y'all just vote 4 your favourite!
2 nice verses, black gud battle dawg! uppin!!!!!!!!!! |
hmm could youngbloods be a hate vote for me rippin his ass when he left the executives, i dont know but it looks that way, casue the whole crew jacked his ass includin me, anyway no dramas,
Lets get sum more votes in ere Peace |
Dw got this one for ju 1 reason... betta flow ... i really don't think either of them are great .. but overall Dw took it in my opinion..!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>
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Black took this nice verse to both of ya.......nice punches but i thought black's were a bit harder so he gets my vote Vote=Blck |
K Yawll 1 more to close this out
Chid matic, why state ur opinion? its not needed Last one uppin fo ............................ ........................... ........................... |
K YO EVERYONE< LETS GET THIS CLEANED OUT
NEED ONE MORE VOTE DROP LINKS FOR VOTES ON BATTLES PEACE |
^^Word...Black Had Sum Creative Shit...dw Was Aight BUt Not Much Complexity...Sumthin For You To Work On...Nice Punches And Flow And Thats Why Black Took This...Respect To Both..
Vote - Black.Jack http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=64728 Thanx. |
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