goosen vs feeble minded
 

aite...
rules explained in bs
u spit first
u check in...when u do tell me how long u need...then ill spit back in that...1 hour max...

alright good luck
No Feeding off my verse
Keep your verse simple, NO BOLDING OR UNDERLINING!
i will take no longer than 45 mins, you get as long as i take.

I GONNA VOTE WHEN U'Z DROP ... BUT IN THE MEANTIME CAN U DO A FAIR VOTE ON MY BATTLE WIT SPLITTIN HEADACHE

first of all u cant vote...second of all, no................................................ .................................................. .u cant come in and vote like that read the rules...

this shud be tight y'all i'll be watchin this n i'll vote wen its done, gud luk 2 both u playas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

u only got 3 minutes playa...i can give u a few extra not much more cuz i only got near 45 minutes now...

///fuck...why wont it let me edit my own post it says im logged in..
i tried to save myself an up lol....

ur outta time playa....
ill give u another 2 minutes...

yo when yall spit i will hit dis up
but in the mean time can yall honestly hit my battle up.
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dis battle is gonna be tight to good battlers...i'ma look at dis fa sho

aite this is the 4th up....

the answer is no...
and i hereby forbid u to vote here at all...dont post another thing in here or ull probably be banned,...

actually dawg...its been 55 minutes...u better just hope i have time to answer or i cant get on till same time tom night...
last up/...

sorry dude if its a bit late, i apologise

Youv'e come back from a break, and i'm the 'water' thats caused your rust//
I'm the King, and your the 'Queen', 'Another one bites the dust'//
Your name explains your rhyming, your inadequate in the mind//
The only time people 'bow' to you is when you come up from behind//
People read your spits like the 'bible', they stop after the first line//
Feebles had his 'genesis', now its Goosens time to shine//
I'm electric, just like power lines, and your flying a kite//
I spit like a fat chick on an amusement ride, its tight//
Your a washed up vet on this site, thats why you arent a MOD//
And i'm sorry to tell your feeble, but no one believes in god// (he calls himself 'god' above his avatar)
I'm taking on the big fish, conquered, came and saw//
You saw me coming at you, so you started bolting-more//(Balitmore, where he lives)
Your so scared of fighting me, your 'blood' will run in fright//
havent you read the label? Don't mix red with white// (or the colors run)
Feeble Minded? To me, that doesnt sound ill//
You fight like your signature, you just wont stand still//
Your in the top 10, you yourself said-it//
The movie, Goosen beats Feeble, and they're rolling the credits//

once again sorry im late, got lost in time, good luck

lol...big mistake...i am a mod yo...lol...of investigated reports where we catch cheaters and ban them...

yo..yo..

i done told this geek my punches are too discrete...i handicapped him...he'll never get back on his feet/
or be elite, just admit defeat, this man is whack like homeless guys on the street/
destroyed this man, then i wondered and... once my punches hit if he ever, ever ran?/
you must be rollin the 'peter pan clip'...cuz ya punches 'never, never-land'/ (lol)
i am a mod.. that mistake just stuck out like your bad acne/
we all know ur a pussy, so bitch...go ahead and smack me!/
you got it all wrong, its "i came i saw i conquered" and u stole it from napolean/
ya so full of shit ya ass aint even enuf...quick sum1 put another hole-in-him/
battlin me is a 'leap of faith' like he 'fell off a stage in heaven'/
look to ya 'ass', he said it...'shit' is where ya career is headin'/ lol
winnin this is a 'needle in a haystack' and 'he tried to thread it'!/
my razor sharp flow is like 'black guys hair'...its 'dreaded'/
ya flows like highway car crashes...its wrecked/
im droppin bombs on ya like that guy from the upper deck/
he couldnt 'fill my shoes' if i gave him some 'dirt and my cleat'/
like size seven shoes beatin him is cnsidered a small 'feat'/ (feet)
that was a pretty 'shitty drop' like he used 'too much exlax'/
my rhymes are always 'on top'...like 'male sex facts'/


(there was a guy on espn that dropped a cherry bomb into the lower deck from the upper)

nice battle yo...
itrs aite bout the time...

aight nice spit, i didnt know u were a MOD, but i also said NO FEEDING!
but anyway lets get some votes.

oh my bad yo...i didnt load the page...i can take that out and put sumthin else in if ya want dawg....

dont worry about it, i went over time so u can keep those lines.
good luck
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aite good luck...
i wont post again cuz i dont want the mods of f.l. to think im just freeposting...
dont really know why people are so worried about post count ne ways...i dont try to get mine up...i wouldnt mind if a mod took 200 posts from me right now actually...

Soz guys, i cant vote, but feeble minded took that for creativity, wordplay, and just plain fun to read. If you guys wanna, could you plz vote at my battle?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1533#post611533

alrite y'all nice battle!!!! wen i read goosen's verse i liked it alot gud flow n nice creativity n wiv feeble bein gone 4 a while i didn't think he'd come bac strong enough.....BUT he did! that was a very nice drop feeb, gud flow and very tight wordplay, my fav line was:

"you must be rollin the 'peter pan clip'...cuz ya punches 'never, never-land'/ "

very nice!
gud battle by both but goosen was just SLIGHTLY outclassed!

vote=feeble minded

uppin number 1
drop a link and i will return the favor
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Goosen's--
Youv'e come back from a break, and i'm the 'water' thats caused your rust// nice wordplay
I'm the King, and your the 'Queen', 'Another one bites the dust'//
Your name explains your rhyming, your inadequate in the mind//
The only time people 'bow' to you is when you come up from behind//
People read your spits like the 'bible', they stop after the first line//ha--good terminology
Feebles had his 'genesis', now its Goosens time to shine//
I'm electric, just like power lines, and your flying a kite//
I spit like a fat chick on an amusement ride, its tight//again, nice wordplay
Your a washed up vet on this site, thats why you arent a MOD//
And i'm sorry to tell your feeble, but no one believes in god// (he calls himself 'god' above his avatar)nice personal
I'm taking on the big fish, conquered, came and saw//
You saw me coming at you, so you started bolting-more//(Balitmore, where he lives)
Your so scared of fighting me, your 'blood' will run in fright//
havent you read the label? Don't mix red with white// (or the colors run)
Feeble Minded? To me, that doesnt sound ill//
You fight like your signature, you just wont stand still//
Your in the top 10, you yourself said-it//
The movie, Goosen beats Feeble, and they're rolling the credits//


Feeble Minded i done told this geek my punches are too discrete...i handicapped him...he'll never get back on his feet/or be elite, just admit defeat, this man is whack like homeless guys on the street/dam

destroyed this man, then i wondered and... once my punches hit if he ever, ever ran?/
you must be rollin the 'peter pan clip'...cuz ya punches 'never, never-land'/ (lol)that the hot $hit
i am a mod.. that mistake just stuck out like your bad acne/feeding but only to make a point clear
we all know ur a pussy, so bitch...go ahead and smack me!/
you got it all wrong, its "i came i saw i conquered" and u stole it from napolean/
ya so full of shit ya ass aint even enuf...quick sum1 put another hole-in-him/
battlin me is a 'leap of faith' like he 'fell off a stage in heaven'/dam
look to ya 'ass', he said it...'shit' is where ya career is headin'/ lol
winnin this is a 'needle in a haystack' and 'he tried to thread it'!/
my razor sharp flow is like 'black guys hair'...its 'dreaded'/
ya flows like highway car crashes...its wrecked/
im droppin bombs on ya like that guy from the upper deck/
he couldnt 'fill my shoes' if i gave him some 'dirt and my cleat'/
like size seven shoes beatin him is cnsidered a small 'feat'/ (feet)
that was a pretty 'shitty drop' like he used 'too much exlax'/
my rhymes are always 'on top'...like 'male sex facts'/


I vote Feeble Minded in this one. The wordplay was to much for Gooosen in this one. Even though Feeble bite of the MOD verse, it was only to say that he was indeed a mod. Goosen did a great job, but was outmatched a little......

am a mod.. that mistake just stuck out like your bad acne/
we all know ur a pussy, so bitch...go ahead and smack me!/
you got it all wrong, its "i came i saw i conquered" and u stole it from napolean/
ya so full of shit ya ass aint even enuf...quick sum1 put another hole-in-him/

feelin dat...goosen ya shit was ill tite ass flow...sik as fuk..sum punches cud be knock outs..but feeble came out si kwit that one funny ass line..im too lasy to go copy an past ti..but funny shit..good as fukinbattle...but im gunna have to go wit goosen..cuz punchees even i think
wordplay feeble by a bit
texture of verse...even
flow goosen
ummmm close as fuk....goosen u got my vote..feeble no hate ya shit was ill but goosen just took me from his intro to outro..

^ my bad ..if dis is called free postin an feeble..i wudnt care either u got like a guzillion posts it dont amtter how many they take off as long as u still considered a vet..as ya status..so i feel u on dat..i use to be a vet..but i lost my fukin password...fuk
^http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=64430

uppin number 2
drop a link and ill return the favor
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Goosen messed wit tha wrong lyricist in this battle dawg..
it was ight but he got chu.. i was feelin his shit more

Vote - Feeble

return tha favor
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...1743#post611743

Nice battle, i think both these dudes had very nice flows, i liked that shit about God and the bible, but i liked feebles shit about never never land, that made me laugh, yer i gotta give this to feeble, very nice battle...