Goosen vs youngblood
 

ight
10-15 lines
i spit first
no feeding
no crew
no dr
good luck

checkin in dog.......................good luck back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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yo hit up my battle wit Born to Kill and i'll return tha favor when
this gets done.. normally i dont freepost but its gettin slept on
thanks.... - O n e

youngblood im down for a battle man!!!!just set it up, check the call out first though ok dawg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!peace!!

aight here we go

Your 'elevation', is so slow that your running out of hairs//
I take the escalator, while your taking the stairs//
I could beat you in this battle, with only 'one hand'on the keys//
The only time your 'spitting hard', is when your on your knees//
You say your not looking for a crew, but thats not really true//
You've looked at all the possibles, not even BRE want you//
I've got more 'covers', than the F.H.M magazine//
But your more like Haileys Comet, your hardly ever seen//
Your looking for an 'oasis', but your heading for a fall//
You've been at this for a while, but now you've hit the 'wonder wall'//
All career you've beaten newbies, now your paying for your crimes//
your style is so crooked, you need braces-on-your-rhymes//
Your getting so bad at this, that all you spit is foam//
Hopefully they will have rb on a computer, when you get to the retirement home//

aight your turn, good luck

Aight...
enough wit tha talkin...

aight look...
this guy's fake-as-fuck, only takes wins by give ups! or faith-and-luck//Keeps
talkin until he gets socked with upper-kuts, makin his face-bend-up//DISCRASED!...get scraped wit words which hurt worse then aches-and-cuts//Yo
you need to wake-on-up...and smelltha rhythm which i let-loose//leaven your
neck-loose, hangin from your shoulders like sex-juice//check-two...
these dope-rhymes, your whole crew wit broke-spines//damaging more
MINDS, then kids who smoke-dimes and snort coke-lines//I provoke-crimes...
with prolific-spit, which quickly-RIP your rhyme-flow//BLAST! lead
through your head, makin your outer mind-show//then kick the center of your
back with force, to make your spine-fold//yo, i block fissions like blind-
folds...and bright-flashes//leaven your back scratch-wit, six hundred and sixty
six mic-slashes//sit back and watch this hype-smash-his...cranium wit sick-tac-
tics//so QUICK!, i'll catch tha cap before tha mothafuckin gat-ticks//smash-his
ribs wit 6 bat-hits, leavin him wit fat-lips//BLACK-hips!, ~and smashed nose, like
his face was a FLAT-TIT!!!!

yo this was a tight battle but goosen edged ya just a little wit punches. i'll poll soon make sure when im in a battle y'all hit my shit up too

yo see i know that's bullshit, man i just posted my shit and 2 minutes later this fuckin newb gon say goosen edged this shit out, man how the fuck you gon read 2 verses within 2 min homie damn????

Goosen:
Like this one

Young:

This one i liked from your verse

fo real tight battle but youngblood took this on punches, they were some harder than goosen's........liked both verse nice flow but youngblood's punches were harder so he get's my vote

don't like da execs but goosen took it wid his punches n flow.....dint respect him at first but his lookin pretty dope,,good job

vote=goosen
flow=goosen
punches=goosen

im a quick reader i aint no dumshit. i scanned and read every line so dont come bullshittin to me. u need ta raise that chin up and take it like a man

youngblood gets my vote.... way better multies an' shit.. no real personals, but the flow and imagery was key here... goosen, maybe if you chaned your name you'd be a better rapper... lol, nah, j/p,, but seriously you had an' a'ight verse.. just wasn't feelin' the flow.. you got a simple AB AB rythm, try mixin' it up a bit more... 1

VOTE= youngblood

gud battle but i think young ad beta punches, both ad gud flow but this is a battle n i thought his punches were harder!!!!
vote=young

but where were youngs personals?
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you had a nice verse with nice personals but his verse was in my opinion harder with punches and he had a nice flow to so thats why he got's my vote........but your verse was aight tho only his one hits harder in my opinion

don't matter homie, i just came wit a lot of hard punches, i figured i would switch it up a little this time, so whatever the crowd feels playa, then that's what they feel, maybe they like punches instead???

maybe they do, it was a close battle, im just giving my opinion. no hate, good luck with the rest of the voting.
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Punches wins battles.................and if you got a nice flow to it thats in my eyes better than personals but it was an good battel good luck to you both with the voting

Youngblood was definately good no doubt very creative and his rhymes were better, but he was going on about how much he was gonna kill goosen instead of actually insulting him, no punches so im a vote goosen sorry youngblood!!!

Peace!!!

Damn I dunno.....
Goosen came out weak in the begining....Really liked his punches...


Young came out strong all the way.....Punches were nice too.....
Personals yeah......

Goosen had more wordplay than youngblood......

Young i felt had more creativness........but he came off with a good finish line......

Goosens end line was a little weak, not really, but props toboth verses, I dunno....Its hard, To me its kinda a draw......Imahave to give this to Goosen for better wordplay and came al ittle harder with punches.......

No beef dawgs......Just callin it how i see it. Nice battle. Props to both

My vote goes to Youngblood, His flow wasn't basic, it was more stocked in and consistent, The first line told me that Goosen wasn't gonna flow cause if you say his first line, it don't even sound right. I think goosen was trying something new or would've done better if he went second, but my vote goes to Youngblood although that killing shit ain't cool in a battle, cause its just bull, especially in a non hate battle.

Vote - Youngblood, He had better flow.

aight uppin for the last vote
drop a link and i will return the favor
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um a close battle.... imma give this one to Goosen cuz i hated
tryin to read young's verse since it wuz that close lil things
like that sets this battle apart.....

This Was An Aight Battle...Goosen Did Have A Few Personals But They Werent Hittin That Hard...Young Didnt Seem To Have Personals But Had Harder Hittin Punches...Both Had Good Flow But Young Got This On Punches And Creativity...Keep It Up Both Ya'll...

Vote - Youngblood