My Mic (Peep this)
 

yo this is 5 barz i am gonna make this a collab and a song........ gimme feedback foreal


yo check this mic is like my fuckin outlet to tha world//
dude i treat my mic even better than my babygirl//

prolly a fault but foreal thou it's my occupation//
first time all alone, ready ta spit i was pationly waitin//

oh my god when i let loose and busted my spit that night//
i vowed always to satisfy, and never turn my back on tha mic//

dawg i don't let no muhfucka talk no shit at her, always got her back//
and yo it's a blessing, we got common interest we think of tha same exact raps//

i exchanged my vows to it and over and over renewin them//
by cuttin down these haters and spittin 10 barz to dem, and acceptin my win//

ain't no feeling when i with my mic, like tha world couldn't stop us//
like pac and his gun, damn watch gay-z try ta cop this//

sesions alone, shits crazy i explode and get pissed but she never complains//
she understands by amplifing my thoughts it'll bring da reign//

she had some friends so i got my boys thay very own baby//
never let my mic outta my sight, if i lost it i'd go crazy//

u would never understand tha feelings i get when i place my hands on her//
and when i go into 'oral intercoarse' she stands screamin no need for furniture//

at age 11 i found my soul mate that would be wit me for out my life//
and yo this is a spit to renew tha vows of devotion for me and my mic//

yo....dope ass subject dawg....i got really into it.....i only had about 3 to 4 times were the flow was i LIL off.....but i dont know what beat u usin...and i know that if u readin with no beat....u cant get the flow.....

anyway...dope shit....i like this lin....----->

at age 11 i found my soul mate that would be wit me for out my life//
and yo this is a spit to renew tha vows of devotion for me and my mic//


damn....i hope ya wear condoms...!!! lol...

yo....chek my shit tho..."Cash Stripped"....peace....nice drop..!!

ayo feedback on this shit..........tell me what ya think......oh and its a hot ass beat, once i get my mic together i'mma drop it on soundclick......

yo what ya'll think bout my verse.........

gimme some feedback.......

tell me what ya think.................

Re: My Mic (Peep this)
 

[QUOTE]Originally posted by Raz
[B]yo this is 10 barz i am gonna make this a collab and a song........ gimme feedback foreal


YO MAN DOpe concept. flows nice

thanx kid........... ya i'mma drop it as an audio when i get my beats together be on tha look out............ more replies

neone else gonna comment......

don't sleep.........


foreal uppin this thread.......

peep it

it has been slept on but shouldnt be this was ill and well worth reading stay up

any more reply's damn, shit sucks when u get no feedback.....


why even post my shit if it getin slept on.......

yo man tight shit right there...loved the meta the woman being like the mic, that was hot shit...liked the flow alot too, I was doin it to my own beat and all, I wanna here audio..

check my verse out please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=65540

nice son really original
its tight

Nice shit... flows a little off in some places, but for the most part it's pretty tight. Keep 'em comin'.

kewl spit man.. i wish i had skills to write somethin' like that dawg.. keep it up aight? peace..!!!

Thanx ya'll foreal.......means alot.........this started out as a lil freestyle but like i said it's gonna be an audio........so peep it when it finished........
More feed back ya'll don't sleep

Haha check it now....i got 3 mics now......

I big pimpin now.......LMAO

Yo uppin this shit lets get more responces

this shit was dope dawg....keep doin tha damn thang, you'll be great

hit my shit dawg
im killin for response

ya see i would but u didn't drop a link so there fore i can't do nuffin mayne............lol drop a link