Bash (1-1) v. Irrelevance (1-1)
 

8-20 LINE Maximum
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Verses By : THE END OF THURSDAY
No Biting, D/R, Recycling of Any Kind..
**Every person must vote on three regular battles, and two out of the three championship battles. Post your links in the page designated for them in the LLL Office forum. Make sure to post your five links on only one page (edit).

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alright since youve checked in i see no point in wasting any time...

What can i say about Bash? hes good at poetry...but his rap skills arnt deep,
afraid to elevate? 10-2 cause you stay in the Front Lines, and out of the Elite,
you know your place at least, but still got shit flipped backwords,
i'll help, add an H to BRE and see whats in the mirror.......HERB,
kids a net nerd. 2300 posts? mustve skipped class..thats not smart, he must not give a fuck,
his raps are Craps,wrote Bash on dice & rolled snake eyes..mustve been Dumb Luck,
heres a buck to pay your ghostwriter, i just want to make sure that you show,
Nevermind it doesnt matter,could name your verse Hydro and it still wouldnt be dope,
a win? nope. like non-gambling cripples you dont Stand a Chance,
im no Sitting Bull and youre no Custer, but this is Bashs Last Stand

there ya go....match my 10. good luck


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uppin for Bash....lets get this over with.


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This kid is "Too-Gay", the only time he "Spits Fresh" is when he uses "Mouthwash-n-Toothpaste"/
cuz like P.DIDDY and MICHAEL JACKSON, my 4 5 Lines wit CLIPS, got A~LOTTA~GREAT~HITS/ (Hope u get it)
Having "Aids" is the only time that some1 will tell this nigga that he's got an "Illness"/
My rhymes hit u so "Fast" that it gon seem like u have just been "Blessed"/
I'm 'Sicker' than 'Herpes' even if "Dezyir's" Punches were "Stoned' they still wouldn't hurt me"/
he barely meets simple Satisfaction...watch me spicen up the Action....my Spits sick to leave this kid flipped like a RESIPRICLE FRACTION/
Not Only That I'm gonna Destroy-Ya-Click , but u need Ta Worry Bout “MORE-GAUGE”, because i'm about too Deploy-Ur-Ribs Faster Then a BarBQ-DELIVERY-SERVICE (mortgage)/
Im Jus “Bustin this Kid” On Fools worse Then A ORPHAN-EDGE"/
The Problem is These 2 And For-Da-Solution Imma Literally Take a PIECE-OF-UR-MIND/
HEAD BLOWN OFF it’s the-Whore’s-Execution.. So Like a Crazy Coach I've REMOVED DA “QUARTER BACK” wit out a SIGN ( this ones a thinker.. Get it.. If not then u're dumb)

alright dunny...uppin


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this was a decent battle, not soo bad like osme other battles, ok heres the layout

punches-bash
flo-irrelevance
wordplay-bash
style-irrelevance
overall-bash

both had their faults and hteir good lines but im gonna give this to bash, he just barely took this

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this was a hott battle. lemme break it down

wordlay- bash
puches- dezyir
metas- bash
flow- dezyir
creativity- dezyir
overall- dezyir

my vote- dezyir

^^could you poll vote please

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Pretty nice battle. Both verses were pretty sick!
Breakin it down:

punchlines-bash
flow-Tie
wordplay-bash
Disses- bash
overall-bash

My vote goes to Bash!

ok...since i just left BRE this inst a hate vote...

this wasnt tthat great of a abttle, and bash thos~thing~right there is irritaing as hell...but your punches were better...irrelivance u really had no good punches

vote= bash

3-1 Bash but im confident that itll turn around.

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punches:bash
flow:irrel
werd:bash
overall:bash

good battle over all but i felt bash took he he had aight flow even thoug irrel took that but irrel didnt have as good of punches ass bash and he also used good werd play nice job from both
my vote
BASH

i honestly dont see how the fuck im losing this when his verse was obviously a prewrite with no personals. could just fill in the name....

What can i say about Bash? hes good at poetry...but his rap skills arnt deep,
afraid to elevate? 10-2 cause you stay in the Front Lines, and out of the Elite,

good personal

you know your place at least, but still got shit flipped backwords,
i'll help, add an H to BRE and see whats in the mirror.......HERB,

decent...wording was kind of off

kids a net nerd. 2300 posts? mustve skipped class..thats not smart, he must not give a fuck,
his raps are Craps,wrote Bash on dice & rolled snake eyes..mustve been Dumb Luck,

bleh...not feelin

heres a buck to pay your ghostwriter, i just want to make sure that you show,
Nevermind it doesnt matter,could name your verse Hydro and it still wouldnt be dope,

these two lines are incredibly played n weak

a win? nope. like non-gambling cripples you dont Stand a Chance,
im no Sitting Bull and youre no Custer, but this is Bashs Last Stand

ehh...verse started off good wit perosnals then fell off...

bash

This kid is "Too-Gay", the only time he "Spits Fresh" is when he uses "Mouthwash-n-Toothpaste"/
cuz like P.DIDDY and MICHAEL JACKSON, my 4 5 Lines wit CLIPS, got A~LOTTA~GREAT~HITS/ (Hope u get it)

this is wak and gay

Having "Aids" is the only time that some1 will tell this nigga that he's got an "Illness"/
My rhymes hit u so "Fast" that it gon seem like u have just been "Blessed"/

smh...no

I'm 'Sicker' than 'Herpes' even if "Dezyir's" Punches were "Stoned' they still wouldn't hurt me"/
he barely meets simple Satisfaction...watch me spicen up the Action....my Spits sick to leave this kid flipped like a RESIPRICLE FRACTION/

no,again

Not Only That I'm gonna Destroy-Ya-Click , but u need Ta Worry Bout “MORE-GAUGE”, because i'm about too Deploy-Ur-Ribs Faster Then a BarBQ-DELIVERY-SERVICE (mortgage)/

wtf is this nonsense

Im Jus “Bustin this Kid” On Fools worse Then A ORPHAN-EDGE"/
The Problem is These 2 And For-Da-Solution Imma Literally Take a PIECE-OF-UR-MIND/
HEAD BLOWN OFF it’s the-Whore’s-Execution.. So Like a Crazy Coach I've REMOVED DA “QUARTER BACK” wit out a SIGN

bleh...not feeling any of ya verse...shit was just sloppy,punches were weak and the capitilizing of every letter in words to make shit stand out as wacker then using Bold Codings...

vote=dezyir

i cant poll vote for some fukkin reason...if someone knows how i can fix that lemme know

ok so its 4-2 bash.


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Lmao..Why u getting Mad...I wont argue though , because it's worthless arguing over da Net..........

not mad. frustrated. i feel im gettin sonned here...but youre right it is the net. its not like this affects wether or not i get laid tonight or anything

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Alright, So Far 4-2 . Poll Edited To Show So

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