[4] G Hod. vs. [14] Addlib
 

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Topic...... Last Words...

In.......................Nice topic

but dam g.hod, i 'm gettin matched up with some ill cats.

goodluck man

in. . good luck. drop early so we can get good voters.

Alrite say by tommorow...............

L A S T W O R D S

background information: the sheik (abdel rahman) is an influential, elder spokesman of the al qaeda network who is the highest ranking member of the network that has steady communication with the western world. his translator, a member of the qatar-based al jazeera network, is a non-islamic reporter who has made both professional and personal contact with the sheik on a common basis.

Honestly, the sheik's health has declined along with the stealth of his mind
His "talker," as he is lovingly deemed, knows that his wealth has been timed
His "strife" had been timed right: prosperity! but, he left his wife in the hindsight
There was a magnificent price to pay for the experience of life in the limelight
Suddenly, elders say his death in near. . along with blinded eyes, he receives two deafened ears
"Allah is calling his name," he signed. . translated: "the talker" says thats "Heaven's here."
On a deathbed, the sheik is spirited. . hurting, he's weak but tears are hid
Ninety-two years old; An illustrious life, the outcome's meek but fear's for kids
Officials crowded at bedside. . His signals astound all the tense guys
He signals again, articulately. . There's not a sound at his head's rise
His motions are not hesitant, as death's potion becomes evident. .
The following shift in feelings along with commotion will set precedents. .
Enter the reporter with the paper, in this atmosphere, disorder is not savored. .
The sheik's "talker" is drawn close: the Islams in the quarters are disfavored
The sheik's words are surprising, in fact, the talker's perturbed by his findings
The message is personal. . an explanation is deserved and the circle is rising
From behind, they demand a response. . before "he is disbanded at once!"
"The talker" is knocked down repeatedly. . he only stands to be punched
The sheik's life has passed, forgotten: a large-scale, religious fight is cast
Interfaction broods, the journalist escapes. . But, of course his strife will last
The sheik cared for a friend. . And, although impaired til the end
The well-respected elder kept it in the family, he didn't dare to pretend. .
The message protected the sootheable, in fact, corrected the usual
As for the sheik's "words" to the talker. . Let's just say that the respect had been mutual

Epilogue: The journalist lived a life of prosperity in Eastern Europe with his family after the sheik's unfortunate death. However, he never publicly revealed what the sheik had told him on his deathbed. The sheik did not get a burial fit for a man of his repertoire, due to the circumstances that arose between his own people at the time of his death. As for the ever-present mural: Truth and heart always lead the way to prosperity, whether it be materialistic or sentimental. . or something like that.

AddLibb left "cause of herbs," check his sig above. . And I wasted my damn time.

See you next round tik, Sand, MM & Sureal!

There's an Oxymoron for you. Left RB because it was full of herbs...Went to RS. Which is full of herbs. Whatever. I'm leaving this open so people can leave responses.

G. Hod.. You Lucky Bastard..
Nice Verse Though

This is to be read as a story.



Last Words
A beautiful Day, some might say.
the sun was blissfull, pelting skin with honey warm rays.
Fathers being sunburnt, left dazed.
Water sprinklers praised by all,
everyone outside, beckoned by the wheathers call.

The Setting for a walk with mom,
pushed in the pram, the child sucking her thumb.
Listening to the radio, the music turned thoughts numb.
All of a sudden, a crackle and static,
a break in the voice of Mr boombastic.
Pinging the ears with a tone sounding drastic.
a Gunshot left a ripple affect through the air.
the mother instinctivly covered her child,
lashing its face with her hair.
Screams from all corners of the street,
as chaos set in, and jeopordy lept to its feet.
The Gun shots continued to repeat,
and in all the chaos the child did speak.
Mommy...she squeled and started to cry.
Harsh situations can cause great events, but there was no time to ask why.
Because at that moment, a shadow jumped the fence.
A cold chill felt from Behind................
as the bullet cracked through her spine, a shrill whine was cast.
She collapsed to the floor................and again another Gun blast.
And this Childs first words were also her last..........

By Verse Quality And Strcuture G. Hod Took This One..
Addlibb Did Not Come At Full Potential.. The Bar Lengths
Were Irratic, And He's Written Way Better Peices..
G. Hod, Had A Better Grasp Of The Topic..
Better Vocabulary, And More Imagery Put Into His Peice..

Vote: G. Hod

too be honest i didn't like G.hods verse a great deal
but it was very well done as in the structure of it etc
Addlib...i've seen you drop some ill shit and this was nice
but i'm afraid 'Ali' just out did your verse with a more complex joint

question: Why didn't you like it? The theme? I need critique to improve upon my chances of further victory.

^i think its your sig...................dam i'm gonna vomit

nah i came weak, i should have done better with it
i reckon i had a good concept i just didnt pull it off

respect to oyur verse, i liked it alot (shaould i be sayin that)
i dont care, .................Resp................

i'm rootin for you to win the tourny, cos then at eats i can say i only
lost to the champ..........lol

props

thanks. good luck. stay on rb.

G hod took this....Addlib you
seemed to have rushed your
verse a lot. it was good, but
just a little bit hasty...and one
question...what is the sudden
obsession with islam G. Hod?


v. G. Hod

a book I've been reading. . I needed a new gimmick.

Again This Was Another Nice Battle Here...Props To Both...

Addlibb
Nice Verse...Not What Were Used To Seeing From You But Still Nice Verse...Like Sand Said...It Seemed Rushed And Therefore That Took Away From Your Verse...Had Good Concept And If Had More Time Spent On It...It Could Have Been Really Dope...

G.Hod
Very Nice Verse Here...Consistancy And Complexity Here Worked Very Well...The Concept You Took Was Good And Used It To Full Effect...

Vote - G.Hod

Vote Ghod

His verse was obviously better.... Add's structure and rhyme scheme were sketchy in alot of places.... Ghod was solid all the way through... nice verse