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Caramac 07-14-03 09:28 PM

Whoa, Bitch!
 
The Death Of Cornelis & Anime, Seriously. Dumb Motherfuckers Act Like Their Dope And Have One Tenth Of My Skill, Ha Ha. .


. .lets start with the fact Anime cant rap . . he bites, its a known fact
that the Backbone of his verses . . are in need of Marrow transplants.
cause god damn the newbies jock you. . but im 'bout to sonn you bad,
& leave these dumbfucks Hung from my Words like we playin Hangman.
so go aim your little buddies . . get them all to come and say were gay,
W.h.o.a 's the Selfish Talking clock . . we Wont Give u the Time of day.
cuz your rhymes are played, but what really gets under my skin is this -
Cornelis musta had a sex change . . to go from a Mr. to a fuckin bitch!
quit ducking kids, your the reason the herb-less lounge was required. .
Black hearted? i'll take a Stab in the Dark with an Object of your Desire.
cams fuckin fire, no need to quote my lines, the voter's'll do that mate,
once they realise that Anime's verses . . own more Bites than Bill Gates.
w.h.o.a kills fakes, slamming u on the ground u built ur dreams upon,
since the only people Feeling Anime are fans or cartoon porn & Pokemon.
when i smoke, your done. you still need -hyphens- to connect ur lines
but since you both come Half Assed. .its only right you get Left Behind!
im best with rhymes, fuck with me?! . . kids im cocking Gats and Techs,
blasting lead . . some call me Tarzan, i'll put a Pound to your Chests!
im surrounding your text, arousing the fact u two should be in a coffin,
Blah, blah-di-blah, blah. . yeah, my style is Nuts - so please lay off it!
i aint from the projects, gay, or wack <-- there yo ur 'personal' lines,
but im Winning w/ Backflips. . you two can take this Loss in your Stride.
" But cam . . were really active . . and were worthwhile to the site. ."
^that shits dumber than Trill thinkin he'd Lose Weight by Exercising his rights!

Whoa, Bitch!

Bigg E Z 07-15-03 07:43 AM

damn....what did they do yo tou bro..!?!?

Orikle 07-15-03 07:49 AM

..HAHAHHAHA..

WORD~PERFECT 07-15-03 07:55 AM

YO SON I LIKED TECHINICAL LINES FALLOWED BY WONDERFUL WORDPLAY AND STYLE 10/10

DeadlySpitta 07-15-03 07:56 AM

Reminds me of my old open mics I posted here... of course under a different name.... But hey. keep up and spit more man.

Caramac 07-15-03 11:46 AM

Werd.
And Thanks For The 10 / 10, Thats Legends Material. .

Dadi Kewl 07-15-03 12:48 PM

Very Nice, Cornelis is a fag and so is anime
Wordplay was spot on, and it flowed with style
got me laughing aswell,
just pictured them running away from you while you
chased them with an evil grin on your face and a baseball bat*Dont ask why....lol

Nice piece bro

-pz

Caramac 07-15-03 03:11 PM

Gyeah!

Kosta 07-15-03 03:13 PM

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Jae Cyph 07-15-03 03:41 PM

Th Excercise Your Rights Line Is Played As Fuck


Fracture: "You Think Exercising Your Rights Will help You Lose Weight"

But Otherwise, This Was wack As Fuck.

Caramac 07-15-03 04:36 PM

^ Like your audios, slag. : )

And at least it was better than Cornelis and Anime's diss to me and fundamentals, their shit was hyphened, quoted, bolded, and they even had a shit / cum line in there so swallow my nuts. .

9 Millimeter 07-15-03 06:06 PM

dat was ight

Caramac 07-15-03 06:32 PM

werd up G, homie dont play that nah'm sayin, 0ne!

damn net ganksta's. .

Lokinator 07-15-03 08:17 PM

Lol... Nice Drop Cam...

Cornelius is a Fag


Dya Remember In_Ur_Bed Btw...?!? She Was Dope...

Caramac 07-15-03 08:27 PM

^ Lmfao, i slept with her - her name was stacey. .

Maven 07-15-03 08:33 PM

hmmm...
cher wun gankstuh nucca!
Whoa, bitch!

Caramac 07-15-03 09:45 PM

^ Nice sig, nucca!
I know you read this over at H2F so its cool for you to freepost here : )

ToNe-E 07-16-03 02:02 PM

Word ..

Don't Do Drugs ..

9 Millimeter 07-16-03 03:46 PM

nice piece yo

BlUnT-MC 07-16-03 04:09 PM

I don't think it's legend material, the flow was kinda simple, but at the same time hard to follow, might just be how it was structured.. the wordplay was a'ight, the only real outstanding example of it is this "but since you both come Half Assed. .its only right you get Left Behind!".... I really liked that line... vocab wasn't to spectacular, I dno... I'll sat 8/10.. and the only reason you're gettin' that is 'cause you did have alot of personals and ripped them up pretty bad with them... 1

DETONATA 07-16-03 07:06 PM

^ Do you even know them? as far as i know, your not even at H2F, moron.

DETONATA 07-17-03 01:21 PM

^ lol.

dreamer 07-17-03 04:17 PM

Shit was tight 10/10





One Line Replies Will Get You Banned.
Watch Yourself.


-Sand

BlUnT-MC 07-17-03 05:22 PM

lol... go dreamer, stick it to sand... he's bein' a bitch today... and detonata... who the fuck cares if I don't know them, and no I'm not on H2F.. I can still tell what punches and shit are personals compared to just random dissin'...

shiznit 07-17-03 09:15 PM

whoa bitch...i mean Cam...;)...this was really interesting...ur whole vocab usage was defnitely good...the content really amused me and it made me laugh a little...got some crazy shit thrown out here and there...props for that...

the structure was awesome...very nice executable job...;)

Caramac 07-18-03 03:15 PM

^ I thank you for reading it my 'right hand' man. . : )

fgee 07-18-03 06:29 PM

nice drop
word play, disses, flow etc was all nice as fuck

Caramac 07-19-03 10:24 AM

^ Gyeah, I Thank You My Man. .


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