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maxximum 07-15-03 09:39 AM

dw VS M.A.W. (check it out)
 
rules are:
no biting
no hate/dr/crew votes
xplain votes

maxximum 07-15-03 09:40 AM

checking in... I'll spit in 15 minutes
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dw. 07-15-03 09:49 AM

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i'll drop wen u done dawg!
its bin 20 mins already though!

dw. 07-15-03 09:50 AM

^^^^^^^^^mah bad lukin at my watch n its wrong, peace!
jus spit wen ya ready dawg, 4real!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

maxximum 07-15-03 10:04 AM

oh I forgot sumtin: 10-15 lines...
yo this boy's called dw cuz this Dawg is Whack//
he's such a fucking pussy, he ain't got a dick OR sack//
you a fag, that's why Imma break yo fucking neck//
I can try hard and trow shit,stones and bricks at ya//
but you're so fucking stupid you won't feel it, nigga//
or should I even call you black? you are even mo than whack//
yo white, I'm white, bitch respect it or fight//
white people CAN be succesfull only yo not eminem//
life's not only about cash allso about punchin you,femme//
yo have to say my name and again, fore you'll get a fan//
your father's gay, yo mom's a travesty, she ain't a man//
I bet yo father was in schock when he saw het pussy//
he shouldn't were a G, she should be a G, instead of a B//
you shouldn't battle against me,now the whole site knows it//
now the whole site knows that yo daddy's dick is in deep shit...(yo mum's ass is huge!!!)

yo spit sum good shit dawg, peace...

maxximum 07-15-03 10:08 AM

Quote:
posted by me
I bet yo father was in schock when he saw het pussy//

it should be her pussy
and not schock but shock, sorry
by the way, this wazen't my best shot at all!!!

dw. 07-15-03 10:30 AM

O.K BITCH, listen, yo yo listen, yo---
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lets go,
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M.A.W! who the fuck r you? comin in this thread claimin "i can beat dw"/ get real son, your rhymes bore while mine fun/ this only my second line n i already won/ gun, at my side or not, my shit makes yours rot till its more predictable than a kids robot/
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this mans so eger 2 be "ill" he wants cancer/ well believe me dawg cancer-ain't-the-answer/ cos even wiv a brain tuma you'd be lackin stanza/ rawness is a law, so wot the fuck u doin ere M.A.W/ reppin=from somewhere, cos u ain't got a home n no one cares/ this battle must av bin a dare, a dare where u leave stressed wiv no hair/ shud av come wiv a pair, so i get "2 for the price of 1", exploded like a bomb/ don't luk now but ya leveled out record, its just gone/
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man this battle like a picnic lunch/ u bringin salads while im just bringin punches/ punches in bunches compressin till your verse crunches/ your a light weight wiv a big mouth/ pack ya stuff n migrate south, 2 somewhere that will show appreciation/--4 the bullshit u "spread", like the farms down in "californication"/ elevation? u need it inserted in high doses through operation/ u need my rhymes feeded 2 u through a tube like your food/ mentally challenged that might explain why your wack shit bein spud--/--from your throat wiv every line, you've got more rough edges 2 even off than a porky-pine/ hope u gettin the sign im sendin, lendin u lead bullets in ya chest that might need mendin/ i mite aswell be, see, G, u way out of ya league/ cos u showin more fatigue/ more pantin than ya bitch wen i ask 4 a suck n shes grantin//
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last line here 2 wrap this up like a tortia/ after this it will be M.A.W-- RIP like we talkin bout alliyah//


uppin!

maxximum 07-15-03 10:36 AM

hahahahaha, nice verse!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!

XL4REAL 07-15-03 10:48 AM

well not being funny M.A.W. but yor punches were weak and not really orginal (no beef) just tellin like it is.....
plus lots of spelling mistakes.
D.W.......... your shit was a lot more clever,with better punches.....
couldnt figure out your flow in the first verse....but in picked up in second though
VOTE====D.W.


peace.

maxximum 07-15-03 10:54 AM

I had 2 write it fast thats why I made sum mistakes...
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maxximum 07-15-03 11:10 AM

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NewPort 07-15-03 11:12 AM

Dw murdered it dawg.. sorry you should have came harder
on tha real.. cuz dw got chu in every aspect

Vote - dw

return tha favor tho

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...3146#post623146

dw. 07-15-03 12:50 PM

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 3 votes!

hostilespitter 07-15-03 12:53 PM

dw killed this nigga more punches and he actually had flow. good job. newayz could y'all finish up my battle against dj-20? thanx i'll return da favor

dw. 07-15-03 02:20 PM

2 votes 2 finish this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!u ppin!!!!

dw. 07-16-03 07:06 AM

uppin 2 votes,
don't sleep y'all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Edicius 07-16-03 09:01 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by ThuG WhytE
Dw murdered it dawg.. sorry you should have came harder
on tha real.. cuz dw got chu in every aspect

Vote - dw

return tha favor tho

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...3146#post623146

Word vote-DW

youngblood 07-16-03 09:06 AM

[QUOTE]Originally posted by ThuG WhytE
[B]Dw murdered it dawg.. sorry you should have came harder
on tha real.. cuz dw got chu in every aspect

Vote - dw

Mystik Mind 07-16-03 10:28 AM

dw Killed It...No Need To Quote But Yeh...He Won It...More Elevated Verse Wit Punches...Flow...Complexity...Etc...

Vote - dw

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=66083

Thanx.

I.TWriter 07-16-03 01:00 PM

Dw git this one son
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Born To Kill 07-16-03 01:09 PM

This was a vicious merkin by DW...

Better everything, especially wordplay.

MAW came real simple, kinda funny, but still...

Not near enough to take down the vet.

Holla back...
Born to Kill vs. Thugz Do Cry (rematch)

dw. 07-17-03 05:48 AM

why av i not won yet, m.a.w how av u set this dawg cos its not 5-0 ko!
if a mod or anyone else who knows why i've not won yet let me know, thanx!

4 now
uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!

maxximum 07-17-03 06:21 AM

if u pm a mod 2 look at the battle and he'll be closed in a few hours...
peace!!!
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RIPallthat 07-17-03 07:29 AM

I got DW in this one.....He had the better punches and flow...Even the wordplay is dominant....

MAW is probably more skilled at song writing right now

Vote D.W.

dw. 07-17-03 07:43 AM

thanx
uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!! 1 more vote i hope! LOL

maxximum 07-17-03 11:56 AM

I got DW in this one.....He had the better punches and flow...Even the wordplay is dominant....

MAW is probably more skilled at song writing right now

probably.........

dw. 07-17-03 02:04 PM

uppin 1 vote plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
can a mod sort this cos i've not got my win yet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WarPlay 07-17-03 02:19 PM

damn i dont kno///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////why the fuck you have to write a hundred words for posting

MetaPhysik 07-17-03 02:48 PM

dw took dis betta punches and metas props 2 both tho im out holla

peep mine
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9021#post629021

dw. 07-21-03 06:30 AM

uppin stil haven't won this n don't no why?

uppin or can a mod close this n giv me my win, 4 fuck sake i've beat this bitch twice ere n stil haven't got my win, LOL!

Evolve 07-21-03 12:47 PM

dw Wins.. Battle Closed............................................ ....................
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