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9 Millimeter 07-17-03 01:55 PM

lilSmokey VS 9mm
 
~Rules~
1.no crew
2.no hate
3.no dickridin
4.15 lines
5.u spit first

9 Millimeter 07-17-03 01:56 PM

yo check in den drop yo shit
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lilsmokey 07-17-03 01:57 PM

fucked it up

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lilsmokey 07-17-03 01:58 PM

check in................................................ .....................................
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lilsmokey 07-17-03 02:11 PM

checked in with this kid ta heat up this battle only to tell you ya cant win /
spit the inferno words that physical damage ya body by meltin ya skin /
decrease ya vocab from 20 words to ten, rip out ya vocal cords and choke you till ya die /
this verse is not a lie- the way i put the cross hairs on ya heart and stick a needle in your eye /
inject the venomous visions ta blur ya sights /
more deadlier than my pit dawg- i do more than bite /
ya fight to your last breath so i snatch ya lungs /
conflicting more damage than you ever expected /
im like the unholy ghost that always becomes reserected /
carve away your torso with my gauge, show my blades /
close in on this cat like he was claustrophobic in many ways /
shit on this kid with every line i write /
so i'll end ya life quick- tell god i was polite /

holla

lilsmokey 07-17-03 03:13 PM

where did you go dog?
holla first uppin.......................................
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9 Millimeter 07-17-03 05:32 PM

iight i'm herre give me like 10 min
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9 Millimeter 07-17-03 05:58 PM

what u add subtracts like backwards mathematics//
I treat rap like gymnastics, backflip over wack shit//
ya lack wits to matchmy lyrical tactics wit this miraculous cats spits//
sorry to get graphic but suck my fat dick down to the last drips//
dig a grave for ya flow with this fantastic classic//
ya shit couldn’t spring back ta life if it had an elastic casket//
i aint perceivin a reason for you to remain breathin//
the shit u conceivin aint even brain teasin let alone pleasin//
ya been deceived if ya believe there’s relief for the pain I induce//
the ruthless truths I produce scoop dukes right out they boots//
the rapture captures cats who rap casually and makes ‘em casualties//
spit lyrical ballistics turn y’all to tragic statistics and tallied fatalities//
sounds like ya copped a gown cap plaque and degree at Wack Rapper Academy//
prolly got a contract and salary to be on the staff faculty//
ya class is cancelled lesson plan dismantled when I fly off the handle I’m spittin flames like roman candles//
plus I’m exposin scandals like toes in sandals tell the world ya gray matters just a frozen mantel//


iight uppin 4 votes

9 Millimeter 07-17-03 05:59 PM

uppin 4 votes
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9 Millimeter 07-18-03 11:43 AM

uppin 4 votes
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9 Millimeter 07-18-03 02:32 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by 9 Millimeter
uppin 4 votes
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Xtreme Flow 07-19-03 01:15 PM

smokey

checked in with this kid ta heat up this battle only to tell you ya cant win /
spit the inferno words that physical damage ya body by meltin ya skin /
-not throwin punches
decrease ya vocab from 20 words to ten, rip out ya vocal cords and choke you till ya die /
this verse is not a lie- the way i put the cross hairs on ya heart and stick a needle in your eye /
-a needle in his eye...???..lackin punches
inject the venomous visions ta blur ya sights /
more deadlier than my pit dawg- i do more than bite /
-more deadlier..pitiful grammer
ya fight to your last breath so i snatch ya lungs /
conflicting more damage than you ever expected /
im like the unholy ghost that always becomes reserected /
-lungs dont rhyme wit nuttin..flow is choppy
carve away your torso with my gauge, show my blades /
close in on this cat like he was claustrophobic in many ways /
-not a great punch
shit on this kid with every line i write /
so i'll end ya life quick- tell god i was polite /
wheres the punch

9 milli

what u add subtracts like backwards mathematics//
I treat rap like gymnastics, backflip over wack shit//
-not a good open
ya lack wits to matchmy lyrical tactics wit this miraculous cats spits//
sorry to get graphic but suck my fat dick down to the last drips//
-ur dick is drips..??..u didnt word this right
dig a grave for ya flow with this fantastic classic//
ya shit couldn’t spring back ta life if it had an elastic casket//
--???
i aint perceivin a reason for you to remain breathin//
the shit u conceivin aint even brain teasin let alone pleasin//
-PUNCH HIM..PLEASE
ya been deceived if ya believe there’s relief for the pain I induce//
the ruthless truths I produce scoop dukes right out they boots//
-WTF IS U TALKIN ABOUT
the rapture captures cats who rap casually and makes ‘em casualties//
spit lyrical ballistics turn y’all to tragic statistics and tallied fatalities//
-casually cassualities??
sounds like ya copped a gown cap plaque and degree at Wack Rapper Academy//
prolly got a contract and salary to be on the staff faculty//
-good setup..weak punch
ya class is cancelled lesson plan dismantled when I fly off the handle I’m spittin flames like roman candles//
plus I’m exposin scandals like toes in sandals tell the world ya gray matters just a frozen mantel//
--not great closer

vote--9 milli for throwin a punch..and his flow n wordplay was on

Oxygen 07-19-03 01:18 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Xtreme Flow
smokey

checked in with this kid ta heat up this battle only to tell you ya cant win /
spit the inferno words that physical damage ya body by meltin ya skin /
-not throwin punches
decrease ya vocab from 20 words to ten, rip out ya vocal cords and choke you till ya die /
this verse is not a lie- the way i put the cross hairs on ya heart and stick a needle in your eye /
-a needle in his eye...???..lackin punches
inject the venomous visions ta blur ya sights /
more deadlier than my pit dawg- i do more than bite /
-more deadlier..pitiful grammer
ya fight to your last breath so i snatch ya lungs /
conflicting more damage than you ever expected /
im like the unholy ghost that always becomes reserected /
-lungs dont rhyme wit nuttin..flow is choppy
carve away your torso with my gauge, show my blades /
close in on this cat like he was claustrophobic in many ways /
-not a great punch
shit on this kid with every line i write /
so i'll end ya life quick- tell god i was polite /
wheres the punch

9 milli

what u add subtracts like backwards mathematics//
I treat rap like gymnastics, backflip over wack shit//
-not a good open
ya lack wits to matchmy lyrical tactics wit this miraculous cats spits//
sorry to get graphic but suck my fat dick down to the last drips//
-ur dick is drips..??..u didnt word this right
dig a grave for ya flow with this fantastic classic//
ya shit couldn’t spring back ta life if it had an elastic casket//
--???
i aint perceivin a reason for you to remain breathin//
the shit u conceivin aint even brain teasin let alone pleasin//
-PUNCH HIM..PLEASE
ya been deceived if ya believe there’s relief for the pain I induce//
the ruthless truths I produce scoop dukes right out they boots//
-WTF IS U TALKIN ABOUT
the rapture captures cats who rap casually and makes ‘em casualties//
spit lyrical ballistics turn y’all to tragic statistics and tallied fatalities//
-casually cassualities??
sounds like ya copped a gown cap plaque and degree at Wack Rapper Academy//
prolly got a contract and salary to be on the staff faculty//
-good setup..weak punch
ya class is cancelled lesson plan dismantled when I fly off the handle I’m spittin flames like roman candles//
plus I’m exposin scandals like toes in sandals tell the world ya gray matters just a frozen mantel//
--not great closer

vote--9 milli for throwin a punch..and his flow n wordplay was on



^w0rd..... vote 9mili

hit this up wit an honest vote.....i ned 1 mo vote to win..................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=66592

Aprentice² 07-19-03 01:36 PM

i vote 4 fuckin 9mill even tho i cant yet. yo he killed that opther kid. the other kds shit was wack as hell

9 Millimeter 07-19-03 02:15 PM

make sure ya'll poll vote
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5harp5h00ter 07-19-03 02:20 PM

gonna give this to 9mill
he had a better verse with better punches and flows, he came harder than lilsmokey, but I think somkey could have come harder, but 9mm took this one

vote - 9mm

hit this up with honest votes guys
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=66718
thx

Xtreme Flow 07-19-03 02:49 PM

i cant poll vote yet..don have 100 posts............................................. ...........................................

Smokin Dro 07-19-03 03:08 PM

nice spit lilsmokey but it wasn't enough
Vote:9mm better overall punches........................................... .........

CrazyE 07-19-03 03:14 PM

9 mm shot him up Good , Better Flow , Word PlaY , AND Multi's , not gonna break it down like "Extreme Flow" did , but he was on the money with his Summary.

Vote - 9mm (his Multi's took it - I think )

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2

Honest Votes Only .... No Schilling
CrazYE

Xtreme Flow 07-19-03 03:22 PM

thank you..i am 'very well greatfull when my work is appreciated................,.,.,...and i usually always vote like that so ppl cant say my shit is swayed or dickridin

J-Wizzle 07-19-03 03:40 PM

even tho 9mill got that dickryder xtreme flow he still get my vote fo better multies,puches,wordplay

Vote:9 milly

9 Millimeter 07-19-03 03:43 PM

shut tha fuck up he ain't no dickrider he's juss waitin fo my battle to close cause i battlin him next so shut tha fuck up................................................ .................

Xtreme Flow 07-19-03 03:46 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by J-Wizzle
even tho 9mill got that dickryder xtreme flow he still get my vote fo better multies,puches,wordplay

Vote:9 milly


what the fuck is u talkin about Bitch..just cuz i explained my fuckin vote ima dickrider..shut ya mouth u worthless piece of shit..Keep my name out ya mouth..FAGGOT

Xtreme Flow 07-19-03 03:51 PM

damn..nigga..wizzle..u shuldntbe talkin shit...U suck..i would fuckin murk u in a battle wit a half assed verse..I would fuckin destroy u..

Crackills 07-19-03 04:49 PM

nine got dis easily

but both had sum good verses dat niggas shit was super creative

both had good punches but 9's verse had better vocab

vote=9

vote honestly on my battle wit smokin dro
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