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Audo VS Taktik
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RULES: 12 lines max no bullshit votes (d/r, crew, hate) no feeding, biting due by tonight since Taktik can't go untill 11:00, and I know he won't no show, so don't gotta worry about that aight........good luck I'ma spit later on tonight also cause I got practice |
dis should be hot,,,, ill look in when its done n vote... in da meantime peep ma battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=66349
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uppin............................................. ..................for taktik............................................
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=66630 vote if you want to................................................ ............................................
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yo this should be a pretty hot battle// ill hit this up wen u both done spittin// but while u waitin and shit can u guys plz hit my battle up with rythmictendencie thanx//
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MY BAD.....I was away for a day today but I'll spit in like 20-30 minutes....i dunno if Audo is online so I'll PM him after......peep my shit when it drops, seen?
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sorry, I wasn't home the whole day...............beach!!!!!!!!!! anyways, I'll spit as soon as I can, aight..........................
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aight, I'll spit now then
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Unteachable Skills........when you should and shouldn't call-out someone, lesson one, read below
Judgin' your shit like 'nervous~snitches, illness is 'hard~to~tell'// My punches like 'Satan~on~viagra' cuz they 'harder~than~hell'// These rhymes blow ya monitor, so Dude, you're gettin a Dell!!!//(Don't ask bout that line) ENUFF FUKIN ROUND You messin wit me like 'merkin' Adam Sandler' cuz shit...'Billy, this Man~is~son'd'//(Billy Madison) You couldn't sell your 'shit~gold' if 'Midas~sewer~dwelled' and handed~some//(Shit that is) You no~more safe in ya house, merked~away from ya mouse// Play 'relay~with~ya~lips' now let's see how good you 'run~ya~mouth'// Seen in my AIM, minute I got 'AOL' you knew Taktik would be testin'~ya// Instead of me temptin'~ya, you switched to MSN cuz ya'll know you can't shoot~the~Messenger// My rhymes etched~in~stone, I ain't a stone carver more like a 'permanent-merker'//(marker) Your house jus gotta~a~lot~smaller, your dark~assumtions just got a lot darker//(Uh Oh...you lose) Callin' out Taktik, tragic this had to happen,you play-off like a newb? And I bet this fuckin' win is 'Audo'-matic// Audo~pilot GPS Navigation, where would you like to get merked today? |
My lyrical taktik, is to decapitate you quick, cause that’s the only way you could get “a-head” in this battle/
Hesitating, I “dahm-innate”* this shit, cause it’s my natural instinct to eat the opposition like Hannibal/ My punches hit your chest, and “take your breath away”, like I ripped your lungs out, and covered your mouth with tape/ My lyrical attack, puts you in “bondage”, I got your arms and legs tied up, and your eyes blindfolded, this is a lyrical “rape”/ You would have to put “frosted flakes” in your raps with a touch of “Tony”, cause that’s only way that it could ever be “Grrrreat”/ Nobody listens to your lyrics, like mutes talking to deaf kids, you don’t wanna battle, you wanna live so you get Superman’s “S-Cape”/ You could never “deliver a blow” to my head, even if you tried wrapping up parcels and FedExing whores/ But I could strangle you with the mic cord twice, like you were an artist forced to “Re-cord”/ I elevate my shit so “high”, it’ll leave you “red-eyed”, like I was scanning your retina with “infra-red laser beams”/ You could never get into my “head”, even if you tried sneaking up and creeping around like Freddy Kreuger in my “dreams”/ I’ll expose and “rip” the “bitch from you”, “snatch the little girl out your stomach”, and leave your “womb bleeding”/ You’re trying to plant new seeds of ideas in your head, but I got you shook in the battle, so your scared and “re-ceding”(reseeding)/ *Jerry Dahmer=ate his partners while trapped in an avalanche, Innate=existing in, belonging to, or determined by factors present in an individual from birth good luck...............vote y'all!!!!!!!!! |
forgot to explain, "S-Cape", Supermans "S" on the cape, and escape from battle...only way he could live...escape and supermans cape...
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TIGHT BATTLE
IT SUCKS THAT I CANT VOTE YET DROP A VOTE ON/CHECK OUT MY BATTLE: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...?threadid=66726 |
At least give an explanation on who won ya know? Regardless if ya can't vote or can, jus is good to see what ya think nah mean?
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ok, first of all, why did Audo spit 22 lines when he had said 12 lines max? I HATE it when people do that shit to me, cuz they do it all the damn time. And while some of ur verse was good, some was kinda vague...like this:
You could never “deliver a blow” to my head, even if you tried wrapping up parcels and FedExing whores/ that didnt even rhyme. Nice try though. To Taktiks verse, his was shorter and had some nice punches and flow. To be honest, ive seen better from him, but givin the fact that Audo wrote 8 more lines than him doesnt help Audo's case. And i think if taktik had written 8 more he would have slaughtered him. So my vote goes to Audo.....peace. |
haha, what i meant to say was my vote goes to taktik....for some reason it wont let me edit my post. Being tired as shit doesnt help........vote = taktik. peace.
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True audo you should work on your length,. taktiks verse was tight but seen alot better by him, unfair that audo had 22 lines....
Taktik took it with punches and owrdplay, audo shorten your lines a bit and jus stick to ya rules..... Pce My Vote = Taktik Hit this up you two and don;t hate if i voted gainst you or i'll get you banned=) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=65323 Pce |
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^^word, he said it all vote-taktik |
did any of you guys realize that the line you guys are talking about is ONE WHOLE LINE!!! whatevers though, but other guys spit long ass lines too....I ain't one to complain, just settin the record straight.......
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My punches hit your chest, and “take your breath away”, like I ripped your lungs out, and covered your mouth with tape/
Honestly, I'm one to occasionally spit longer lines but these lines were pretty insanly long....^^^that line above is a BAR....it jus don't rhyme.......this is one line(below) My punches hit your chest, and “take your breath away”// ^^^that's one, your lines were really two inside of one, seen? But i don't care......I'm jus here UPPIN 4 VOTES PPL, leave a link and i'll give your battle a true and honest vote.......much appretiation |
like i said before, i think people should look more into it than just the lines. i know, it was set as a rule, but that shouldnt be the whole reasoning of the vote. lets not ride the bandwagon and just vote because of that.
anyhow, this is how i think of this battle... flow - tie - well audo's flow is definately hard to read because his lines are SO stretched out... but taktik's are kind of wierd as i tend to pause when saying his lines outloud. punchlines - taktik - taktik ran him over from what he said first, all the way to the bottom, at his finish. wordplay / vocab - taktik overall: well of course, rules shouldnt be teh #1 reasoning for everything, but when they arent followed it tends to become a problem. what hurt you the most audo is your own rule and how you controlled your 12 lines, which resulted in having extremely stretched out lines. thats why taktik's verse won my vote. vote = taktik |
er and a link to my battle, please drop an honest vote:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=66527 not freeposting........ ................................. .................................. just forgot................. ................................... .................................... . -tengo |
whatevers guys, fuck this shit already............I ain't one to bitch over a loss, but I can't take this shit any more, I'll accept this loss, but I seen guys spit lines longer than me, and i'll give you an example...
You try and match key words till you wrists~hurt, you couldn't 'make~fun~of~shampoo' for your words to properly 'diss~PERT'// now this was a line from one of Taktik's battles, I don't know if this was a line or a bar, but thats just as long as mine. But Taktik, I got respect for you, but I'm just saying that lines shouldn't be a major part in your reason for a vote...aight! But whatever, i'll take the loss........no big deal |
That was basically a bar but I asked R-Rated or Kerrdezzy (wherever the fuck you got that) b4 hand if that was alright if I made longer lines AND/OR bars, it was my deal.....they battled with long lines but that's because I informed them......I even lost to Kerdezzy from that line (i think)
like i said I dun care....you battled fine enuff for me ok? I would've accepted the loss if you were to win and I would expect you to do the same. I respect you like you respect me.....but don't leave a cat shellshocked when he comes to see long ass lines and he has like 10-15 syllable lines compared to your 30-40 syllable ones....a little warning would've been nice but good spit, liked reading it. Uppin for the win ppl |
sorry, and thanks for the compliments and all, but I think that the shit is bullshit when they are judging it on the lines, they all just jumped on the fuckin bandwagon and quote what solar eclipse said, they probably didn't even read the verses...
gimme the loss already............... |
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooo man audo got smoked..hahahah but i cant vote so sorry taktik
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vote-tatik..
edged out on the punches...flow was bout the same...good wordplay..... good battle |
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