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I give mental -destructions- wit hardcore -corruptions- that cause organ -disfunctions- i dont allow -interuptions- or else ill get -paranoid- and hit u wit a force stronger than -steroids- //

Girls i -charish- but all the sluts will be -perished- u give me da -garbage- and ill eat ya ass like i was a fuckin -carnage- just killin niggas like -spawn- until da break of -dawn- //

Im da -panel- that keep u -chaneled- to burst out ya -information- cus im da one who sets da rules and -regulations- dont be da pussy and start sum -confrontation- cus im da type that rule da -nation- //

From my grip theres no -escape- but im nice to sale u -fish plates- and -chicken wings- for -sale- but when i gather my -siblings- they'll never have life in -jail- //

Dont give me ur bad -behavior- cus one day i could be ur -savior- and piss me off ill have u bald headed like -xavier- i got da skills to be -registered- i got connects larger than animal -herds- //

rate dis from a 1 to 10 scale

7 tight vocab

need to work on bar structure though

anymore f/b

can i get sum feedback

i give you a 7 too, nice vocab, try puttin it in bars though, its easier to read

thanx anymore feedback

it was a nice freestyle man...nice vocab and nice multis were used, and it flowed nicely to man..nice drop
8/10

check my verse: Last Job,

thanx any more f/b

decent read

def need sum structure tho..vocab was nice..flow would be a hell of a lot better if u had the structure..wordplay was decent..i found 1 flaw ttho..u looked like u were takin words str8 out the dictionary..its good 2 be complex but u went a lil over board..simpleness is good sumtimes...

my shit aint come from dictionarys dawg thats all me, mo f/b

i give it an 8 b/c it had very nice wordplay and flow and it was some over all tight shit

thanx dawg

8/10
ur flow was good and u had good vocab
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thanx

i got one word-----HOT

thanx

damn now that was way good give it 8/10 keep workin like that soon yull be gettin props from everybody

thanx yall for the feed back

Don't mark out ur rhyming words it makes it sound dumb if u rhymes are tight u dont need to make them stand out but it wasnt bad but fix the way u write it

that was an ill ass drop a bit unorganized but ill nonetheless.good job hustla

yah player, i give you a 9! that was fuckin tite, good use of vocab! keep it real!

okay. these replies are not good. one liners...
in about 2 weeks. i would ban each and every one of you


your flow was blah...you don't
know how to flow, that's the bottom line.

your content was blah, what
in the fuck are you talking about in this?

vocab was forced...you used big words
and they were misplaced and shitty....

don't seperate your bars like that and use
those gay ass symbols...thats wacK!


overall you get a 1.5/10


and that's being generous.

a fuck u bitch u wanna battle me bet i woop ur ass any day