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K.Largo 07-20-03 06:45 PM

BRibeOne::Vs::BrooklYn
 
10 Lines It Is........
No Crew,Hate,D/R,or Unexplained Votes..........
Spit First Ill Start Keyin too So we can Get this Done....

K.Largo 07-20-03 07:25 PM

Ill Leave That Up To him .....how bout 500 and Up only votes ....or Mods only votes ....let me get at least one of em.......

Droppin as Soon as U Drop

BROOKLYN 07-20-03 07:33 PM

IT DOESNT MATTER TO ME 500 SOUNDS GOOD, WILL YOU BE DROPPING AS SOON AS I DROP? IM ON MY LAST 2 LINES
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BROOKLYN 07-20-03 07:42 PM

Your Hard To Find On RB But Your The Worst-To-Hide, Claim You Merk Vets But You Get Merked-And-Lie,.. Curse-The-Bride And Take You To Get 'Groomed' But Your Never 'Made-Of-Honor' So You Stand On Stage-And-Wonder Why Your The 1st-To-Bribe!/1

Your 1st-To-Die By My Wrath, I Heard Regime Ain't The Boss-Of-You-Now, Im Tossing-You-Down Cus Your Property Of Lost-&-Found, Watch How Bribe 'Flees' Cus He's 'Barkin Up The Wrong Tree' So Its 'Off-To-The-Pound' So I Can Put You To Sleep In A Morgue While Freezing But Its Off-With-Your-Gown/2

Im Like An 'Rx Earthquake' To Leave You Left With An 'After-Effect' And Ghasper-Your-Breath To Steal Your Soul Like There's Really Life-After-Death But I'll Leave You Dumb-Founded The Way You Run-Town-With-Pussies, Not A Sound-From-This-Rookie So I Polish You With A 'Pledge' And Have You 'Holding-Your-Chest'/3

I'll Toss Your Eyes From Your Head Like A Mannequin Playing-Ceelo And Leave You Like A 'Door To Door' Salesman Knockin Around A Peep-Hole But In A Still-Disorder Like 'Bill-Porter' With A 'Viral-Disease' And Mild-Genes Like You Were Locked Down With A 'West Nile Mosquito'/4

You Reported A Dick-Ryding-Ring When Your Crowned The Dick-Ryding-King And Ruining 'Pretty' Records Must-Explain Why An AIDS Patient Is Around Your Crew-Name, So Return-The-Favor Will Turn-Your-Flavor-Sour Once I Devour-You-Stable-Power To 'Brain Storms' Like 'Rain-Showers', You Cant 'Scare' Me With Your 'Crow-Bars' So Bring Em' While I Tow-Cars And Leave You Left 'Without A Brain'!/5

K.Largo 07-20-03 07:45 PM

Brooklyns' Like A Purple Heart Hero How U Got a Certain Soldier Ridin Dick::
Throw Punches U gonna Regret Like Kobe Bryant Saying He Didnt Meant to Hit::
Sit And Admire What u Yearn ..Talent..Before u Retire I Hope U Learn::
Flaming Fag Picks On Newbies For Wins Thats Why Only Rookies Get Burned::
After This Call me Russian Or French The Way I Fuck Up Ya Alliance::
Like Failed Experiments I Pop The Thesis of ya Hy-po-thesis To Destroy Ya Science::
As Easy as Takin Ink To A Map Watch Me Scratch Out This Borough::
I'ts Like He Went To His Dentist The Way Brooklyns Cleansing was Thorugh::
Ya Trying To Keep Up ....But Ya Dick Choking Got Ya Runnin Out Of Breath::
Yeah ..For U.... Groupies Means Wins......So U Gunnin For The Bed:::::
Youre CAPS WENT LEFT the way your Pop lost all its Fizzle::
Yeah I said It Once ...Repeat?....I Hear Soldier Uses Ya Dick For a Missile::
Sorta Like I Took Ya Verse and Smoked it....The way those Fillers just Drag::
Brooklyns RBs' new Magician the way ya Bag Of Tricks Make Me Laugh::
Its Like Retards playing Chess the way Dumb Fucks Think They Clever::
Rolling Minds When I Broke Ya Spine At the Neck To Leave Ya Head Severed::
Wetter Sheets When The Better Speaks Cause My Flow Damped Ya Whole Paper::
Came Across At these Lines ^^ ...And U went around.....Cause Its Just Safer::................




K.Largo 07-20-03 09:35 PM

Uppin for Poll votes now Thank u ........remember must have 500 posts to vote............Gyddy Up...............

BROOKLYN 07-20-03 10:49 PM

WOW 2 WHOLE HOURS TO EDIT A VERSE?
THAT SHOULD BE DQ BUT WHATEVA
UPPIN
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$ilk 07-20-03 10:53 PM

Good battle, this is how I was feelin it:
Bri-Dude had really good flow and the punches were on, the wordplay had some plays but still good.

BROOKLYN-Good flow, good punhces, good worldplay, good everything. It was a good verse. Everything was even and that's what made you get this.

Vote-BROOKLYN

Ricochet. 07-21-03 02:35 AM

I CULDA SWORN IT WAZZA BUNCH OF FREEPOST N HERR
WHA HAPPN? N I ALMOST SWORE BRIBE WAZ A GIRL BUT IT WAS A BIG MISUNDRESTANDIN

Lyricbrutalizer 07-21-03 03:16 AM

overall these bother were very good
verses one of the better battles
bribe verse stood our with better wordplay and punches
brookyln verse was punchlines and vocab
using vocab is harder (cludderin your lines is harder to read "flow")
bribe flowed better and tied in together easier
and he had the over all better verse he gets my vote

H4iKU 07-21-03 04:49 PM

what the fucks up with ut members posting and tryna sway votes.^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^

BROOKLYN 07-21-03 08:32 PM

SEE, YOU KNOW I SAID NO CREW VOTES AND NO VOTE SWAYING SO I GET A VOTE AND YOU GET YOUR PAL HERBERT TO COME VOTE? ANYWAY THANKS FOR THE HEAD UP H4IKU
UPPIN!

Pax 07-22-03 05:01 AM

both had an ill verse, but Brooklyns had just a few mistakes with the flow. Bribes was good flow punches wordplay personals. Brook had good vocab and shit but overall this goes to BribeOne

vote=BribeOne

Merking King 07-22-03 06:06 AM

This was a good battle
both came out really hard
respect ta both of you
no hate
but honestly i felt that Brooklyn took this one
his verse was a lil bit harder punched then Bribeone's was
nice battle
PROPS KEEP IT UP

vote-brooklyn
**it wont let me poll vote ALLDIG hasn't activated the voting thing yet**

K.Largo 07-22-03 10:09 PM

this battle is gettin truly slept on and its really good......Good battle Brooklyn..........uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin.....



up....

Born To Kill 07-23-03 01:25 PM

Nice battle...

Can't poll, but I'll tell ya who won.

Brooklyn with the complexity and the creative punches.

Bribe probably came a bit harder, but without the complexity and the wordplay, he was outclassed.

I mean, he had some of that, but not on the same level as Brooklyn.

Peace

K.Largo 07-23-03 04:41 PM

what do u know of complextity of punches....u dont have a name worth mentioning in that win list of yours..lol,.......uppin

K.Largo 07-23-03 08:36 PM

Third Uppin Lets see If We Can get some votes.....

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BROOKLYN 07-23-03 08:46 PM

YEAH AND WITH ALL THOSE CLOSED CREW BATTLES IT PUSHED THIS DOWN EVEN FRTHER,
2ND UPPIN
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YOUNG MIK 07-24-03 01:24 AM

atleast brobone came ready an prepared wit a 100 lines to match brooklyns book...
but i was feelin da book more
brobe u ahd sum clena ass punches..
i liked ya structure
but brooklyns shits flwoin was never endin. i swear i iddnt stop an it flowed thru out da shit..
punches were weak from him
but everything else was clean as fukk
close to the end,,,but i gotta give it to brooklyn on dis one..
PLUS BROOKLYN ME AN MERKIN KING CANT POLL VOTE...WE AINT ACTIVATED IF U WANT YA 2 VOTES..I SAY U GET US ACTIVATED I PMED HIM A FEW MILLION TIMS..SO I DONT NO WUT TO DO...
PROPS BRIBEONE U MITE JUST STEAL DA VICTORY

YOUNG MIK 07-24-03 01:25 AM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67684


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13th Disciple 07-24-03 01:50 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by YOUNG MIK
atleast brobone came ready an prepared wit a 100 lines to match brooklyns book...
but i was feelin da book more
brobe u ahd sum clena ass punches..
i liked ya structure
but brooklyns shits flwoin was never endin. i swear i iddnt stop



okay....this isn't swaying....just wondering....WTF!! did this cat
just say?!.....who's brobone?......and what book what u feeling
more?...obviously not Hooked On Phonics....and this line right
here.....'brobe u ahd sum clena ass punches'....seriously....whats
wrong with u?...don't EVER say that again.....dumb bastard...okay
thats all i have to say........becuz no crew votes i won't say
anything besides good battle to both....1




















vote=bribe...lol

YOUNG MIK 07-24-03 01:56 AM

i aint in any of there crews..an fuk u..ill say wutever the fuk i want mark ass bitch..who the fuk r u.......foreal......i type fast as fuk i hadd to go somewhere..i got a fukin life..try it..dumb herb....
again..im not in anyones crew.here..ahahha stupid fuk..stfu sumtimes u think your da fukin king of this rap shit.u aint shit...uve been merked 22 times.....ill make it 23 if u want..
i aint tryna start nuthin on da fukin internet...but dont come off at me like dat......bitch..
vote brooklyn....

BROOKLYN 07-24-03 05:49 PM

THIS IS BULL, 13TH SWAYED VOTES IN HOTTIE7'S BATTLE AND MINES?
WHY DON'T YOU GET A LIFE LIKE YOUNG MIK SAID YOU POETIC HERB & STOP TEXT VOTIN IN YOUR CREWS BATTLES

Derive 07-24-03 05:57 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Merking King
This was a good battle
both came out really hard
respect ta both of you
no hate
but honestly i felt that Brooklyn took this one
his verse was a lil bit harder punched then Bribeone's was
nice battle
PROPS KEEP IT UP

vote-brooklyn
**it wont let me poll vote ALLDIG hasn't activated the voting thing yet**



^^enuff said....if ya want to whine that i didnt explain it all just read wat merkin king said and if not then ask me and ill put it in other words for ya

vote-brook

K.Largo 07-24-03 06:41 PM

BROOKLYN i give it up to ya no wonder u got that kinda record....
lol....luckily for me my record dont mean shit to me.. join the LLL and see how many wins u can accomplish....

K.Largo 07-25-03 04:13 PM

and as my last uppin can someone please vote on this MOFO..
dayum ......dayum......dayum............................ ........................UP

MoRbId 07-26-03 08:56 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by 13th Disciple



okay....this isn't swaying....just wondering....WTF!! did this cat
just say?!.....who's brobone?......and what book what u feeling
more?...obviously not Hooked On Phonics....and this line right
here.....'brobe u ahd sum clena ass punches'....seriously....whats
wrong with u?...don't EVER say that again.....dumb bastard...okay
thats all i have to say........becuz no crew votes i won't say
anything besides good battle to both....1


vote=bribe...lol


Mik was prolly high or sum shit... yeah...
brooklyn's format annoyed me i jus wanna say that an bribe's was funny an made me laugh an i jus plain liked it so there! :p

BROOKLYN 07-26-03 09:04 PM

UPPIN
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.::KamikazE::. 07-26-03 09:59 PM

nice battle, it was nice creativity from brooklyn and cosistency
bribe was ok but not very direct n brooklyn came direct with the name diss n nice personal but his flow kept going n thats what made the verse stand out so i think brooklyn took this

- Prospect - 07-27-03 07:38 PM

outta all honesty no hate-ur both ill text-c's
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Bribe took this in a more simplistic to the point style~
his wordplay an metaphores were unbelievably sik~
and the flo was absolutly top notch.....

Brooklynn had alot betta multi's but it seemd to me like u got a lil too carried away with them an beefed up ur lines too much....
looked like alot more fillers on your part~but shit ur fillers are like my ill lines.....

great battle~vote=Bribe-One

So2Speak 07-27-03 07:47 PM

REAL CLOSE BATTLe this should go down to tha wire

but i think brook took flow n punches bribe took werdplay n setup but that dont really matte compaird to flow n punches punches was liek 5050 but i kind felt some of brooks more nice battle nothin but props to both holla

lilbrick005 07-27-03 07:55 PM

outta all honesty no hate-ur both ill text-c's
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Bribe took this in a more simplistic to the point style~
his wordplay an metaphores were unbelievably sik~
and the flo was absolutly top notch.....

Brooklynn had alot betta multi's but it seemd to me like u got a lil too carried away with them an beefed up ur lines too much....
looked like alot more fillers on your part~but shit ur fillers are like my ill lines.....

great battle~vote=Bribe-One

^^^^ i totally agree with carson (i can't believe im saying those words) but brook i've seen you do better in battles....tip*sometimes going all complex isn't the right way*

You know it aint no hate brook, good verse bribe

Slik 07-27-03 07:56 PM

they were both really good......
Props to both of ya.......

Ima have to give this one to Bribe though...........
I loved His Wordplay and Shit.....

It was real close though becuz Brooklyns Opener was fuckin sick..
BUt just didnt take it this time......

---Yeah and now i know brooklyn is gonna bitch cuz i didnt give him a vote....cuz he always doin that shit...........whatever....im out----

bone crusher 07-27-03 08:01 PM

Quote:
Origionally posted by $ilk
Good battle, this is how I was feelin it:
Bri-Dude had really good flow and the punches were on, the wordplay had some plays but still good.

BROOKLYN-Good flow, good punhces, good worldplay, good everything. It was a good verse. Everything was even and that's what made you get this.

Vote-BROOKLYN
- word to big bird

metaphysical one 07-27-03 09:02 PM

here it is . . .

flow - bribe
multis - brooklyn
wordplay - brooklyn edges it out
nice personals - bribe
metas - brooklyn's were a little better, so . . .

even though bribe usually comes much stronger, in a close one I give it to Brooklyn. 1

POLL VOTE=BROOKLYN


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