Fukin Wit Me
 

Yo this is ma latest audio drop jus postin here for a bit of feedback and comments -


fukin wit me i'm gone have to thrill you/
fukin wit me i'm gone have to kill you/
fukin wit me i'n gone haveta deal wit you/
fukin wit me i'm jus bein real wit you/


Yo if you fukin wit me i'm gone havta play a game,fukin with me and association will bring ya fame/
fukin wit me it leads to an early grave,not fukin wit me and it's ur own life u'll save/
fukin wit me is tha last thing u wanna do,fukin wit me end up like murda inc and tha rule/
fukin wit me - foolish coz i'm a lyrikal messiah,fukin wit me from ma heat ur gone be lit on fire/
fukin wit me - pick a fast and painless death,fukin wit me -i'm gone be serial killin like red and Meth/
fukin wit me feel free if wanna test,fukin wit me i'll lay ur soul to constant rest/
fukin wit me parental advisory required,jus listenin to me i inspire tha unenspired/
fukin wit me i'm leavin u with a scar,fukin with me u gettin smashed lika rockers guitar/


fukin wit me i'm gone have to thrill you/
fukin wit me i'm gone have to kill you/
fukin wit me i'n gone haveta deal wit you/
fukin wit me i'm jus bein real wit you/


fukin wit me - not a wise decision,fukin wit me leavin u with double vision/
fukin wit me - no contest w.e.s.t gonna win,fukin wit me added to tha other seven it's a deadly sin/
fukin wit me i'm gonna have to give ya props,fukin wit me - never make it to top of tha pops/
fukin wit me what else i gotta say,fukin wit me is like cani verses cool j/
fukin wit me i'm gonna havta break ya nose,fukin wit me - punches thrown at ma foes/
fukin wit me - lyrikal power gone break ya back,fukin wit me - u givin props even though i aint black/
fukin wit me - i'll show u an exibition of emceein skill,fukin wit me - u gone od and die coz i'm a killer pill/
fukin wit me - call me tha kansas cannonball maurice greene,fukin wit me - i'm so fast never caught leavin tha murda scene/

fukin wit me i'm gone have to thrill you/
fukin wit me i'm gone have to kill you/
fukin wit me i'n gone haveta deal wit you/
fukin wit me i'm jus bein real wit you/

Uppin peeps

that was pretty straight...

Uppin peeps.

I LIKED IT LACKED A LIL BUT STILL A GREAT DROP ILLNESS

Slept on.

DECENT IT WAS GOOD FOR WHAT IS WAS BUT IT WERT ALL THAT

OK well uppin this.

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nice west like it, like 2 hear it wiv the beat 2 figure out the flow properly but apart from that, tight wordplay n ILL drop, keep em comin-----1

Thanx for tha feedback so far peeps.

Uppin dawgs.

nice rhyme west - it'll kick wit the right beat if u up the closure - I like ur style - don't stop

that was good i liked your shit just need to hear the beat to it

Uppin this.thanx so far peeps.

This was descent

needs alil work but still tight

You still droppin bangers i see


10ne

You know

this was pretty interesting to read. yeah you do need the beat to find the flow so im not rating that. It was pretty enjoyable and it was easy to read and understand, i liked it.
peep my piece-If I ruled the World

Pump Pump Pump It Up.

This was aiight... very basic... some of the concepts were a little played out...but, you said it was an audio drop right? I'd have to hear it in order to critique it any further... holla

Cool no probs dawg.