Rematch: (U.T)Feeble Minded vs. Bash(B.R.E)
 

10-20 Lines
No crew votes
No dickriding
No hate votes
All votes must be explained
You spit first
Due: Whenever you want it too be due

yo bash ........feeble dont come on till late n he might not see this so i think its a lil fuckin harsh the due dates tomorow ...............so wait till he checks in to start a due date aight

yo...

I SPIT FIRST LAST TIME...
U FIRST THIS TIME!!!!!!!!

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and ill spit the night that u spit......>>>>
u will see my spit the next day no matter what...
just spit whenever u want...
and its a good thing i felt like readin good battles cuz usually i dont come in here cuz no one votes.....


GO!

...peace....

Check this out feeble...............................
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=66988

yo feeble this is a crew battle so take this kidd down, ya lost in the frontlines but ya did go first last time so the outcome might be different, take him down i kno ya can cuz u got some skillz wit ya, holla, and good luck

I can “Decipher” your “Lines” like I play “Scrabble” and “Text-Twist"/
get your “Chest-Hit” when I “Twist my Text” into “Clips” then “Shoot” out my “Tech”/
Knockout Blows Sprayed , While Feeble is 'Packin Very Little Punches', Like 'Midgets Employed By Kool-Aid'/ (Get it)
Make Feeble Ice An 'Rep A Set' , Ya Life is The 'Opposite of Shaq At Freethrow lines', 'Nothin-But-Net'/
U a Trainee Not A Soldier but U Can Still Get Ur Head Cracked,
So Step Back Cause My Bullets Like Little Meteors because They Cause MASS Destruction Wit' "A Smidge Of Impact",
I'll Send-u-Losses, Leave Ur Team Wit "Heavy Blood Lost" N Put Ur Men-On-Pauses(menopause)
I'll Leave This "Bitch-In-Tha-Dark" When I "Click-And-Spark", I Might "Split-Ya-Heart"/
He still wouldnt be able too hit me even if he "Swing-Both-Ways" Like "Kids-In-Tha-Park"/
"Rip-Him-Apart", Let Tha Bullet "Poke-Thru-Ya-Dome"/
You "Out-Of-my-Range" Like "Long-Distance" On "Nokia Phones"/
I've Learned That I'm "Scarin-Him" He Knows He "Wants-No-Beef" Like "Conservative-Vegetarian"(conservative=refuse to change)-
He's A Humiliation Tha "Skeleton-Wearin-His-Skin", To Say "Nice-Try" After This Wouldn't Be "Fair-To-Him/
My Punches "Land-directly-in-His-Mouth", This Nigga Need "Doctor's-Help" To Establish Himself As The "Man-Of-The-House"/
He Can't Get Tha "Upper-Hand-In-This-Bout"/
You "Play-Me-Close", I'll Invite "Tiger-Woods" To Yo "Gravesite", Just too Have Him Play Your Eighteen-Holes"/ (Sick line right here , think about it)
Stop "Pinin'" Because You "Behind-Me", Bakin Ya "Yeast" Infection The Only Way You "Makin-Dough"/

I'm out..Spit ur shit

If u think it's too long , juss inform me , and I will remove some lines...
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yo..listen up ...please read the whole thing! some parts may be iller than others (all is ill tho lol)...thanks.

yo...

we all know this guys gay..cuz he gives heterosexuals glaring-hates..this guys like alaska cuz he's bering-straits!// (bearing straights) lol! explanation...the bering strait is a waterway near alaska, and gay people have to bear straights...2

slash-his-hopes and throw out words-of-wrath..cuz like injured felines im gonna hurt-this-cat//
his words is like garbage trucks they carry dirty-trash..his opponents always celebrate wins like a birthday bash// 5

i'll admit he's beat a rapper..he was proud to say he did-the-crime..until the press released that the kid-was-nine!// lol
he was proud of his punch..except that it was-mine! cuz like auctioned-watches all he does is bid-for-time!// 8

its like crashing-parties..cuz im serving bash-merkings..he took all day to write that shit..although i tried to stop his ass-working!// (a bash is a party) 10

if this was a topical about life, we'd see bash-gone..cuz last time i checked its easy enough to say he has-none!//
im electin bash as nun!..cuz it'd make ya seem even holier with a gash-son!!// (nun is holy, gash is a hole) 12

i hold his mind captive..like storing-his-brain-in-a-box..even though his game-is-on-lock..i dont give herbs second chances so i spray-him-with-glocks// 14

its like a prisoner bit his brain cuz i captive-ate his mind!..he cant see me winning so i laugh and say he's blind// 16

SERVED..
i dont even need this part..cuz i already won-this-battle...but
i wished they banned for sucking..i know someone to tattle!// (tattle on)


FINISHED..
didn't they teach you in school? its not smart to face kings...
now you'll know for the future..feeble minds do great things!//

lmao! served....

vote...

vote like this:

personals- these are name disses....ex: opponents always celebrate wins like a birthday bash//

wordplay- using one word to sound like another....my first bar had one...this guys like alaska cuz he's bering-straits (bearing straights)

punches- (duh) who had the best peeps.

metties: comparin one thing to another...

multis-rhymin more than one word in a sentence...like this: i captivate his hate he aint straight...(a bad example but u get it)

oops...this is elite i prolly just wasted my time but fuck it.....

uppin vote pansies........................................... .................................................. .....................................

oh and why did you edit?
vote anyway peeps....i still won i think i dont care if he edited....>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

personals- FEEBLE, I ONLY SEEN 1 SO I'LL TAKE THE 'S' OFF PERSONALS LOL NAH JUST PLAYIN..YA HAD 2 SO YEA FEEBLE

wordplay- BOTH, I THINK WORD PLAY WAS SORTA EVEN

punches- BOTH, SO MANY I FEEL LKE QUOTIN, BUT WON'T

metties: BOTH

multis- BOTH

OVERALL I GIVE MY VOTE TO FEEBLE, IT WAS SORT OF CLOSE BUT AS I ALWAYS SAY..PERSONALS ALWAYS MAKES A DIFFERENCE


HIT THIS UP WITH A FAIR VOTE, APPRECIATE IT: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68263

Because my verse was long as fuck , so i removed some lines , I dont care who wins , because It's just da net

OH THATS A GOOD REASON............................................ .................................................. ..............................................

SHOULDA SAID U WERE TAKIN LINES OUT.................>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

GOOD BATTLE....1

Personals - Feeble like Brook said didnt saw that much pers
Multi's - Bash
Punches - I would have say both but, Bash had some nice punches combined with hot multis, so bash get this
Mett - Both
Wordplay - both


Overall nice battle enjoyed readin the verses but bash took this in my eyes.....he had some harder punches
and that takes battles, very nice battle..props to you both Vote-Bash

Personals-Feeble...alot of his verse was built around Bashs name while Bash has some fill-in-the-blank punches..

Metas-this is where Bash shines..i think he took this category hands down

Punches-Feeble had this from the getgo..

Metas-again Bash takes this..

wordplay-tie

it was a tied so i decided to go by the "Oh Damn!" factor- i judged by how many times i thought/said "Oh Damn" in your verse..

and Feeble got this..

quit stretching bars damnit.

vote=feeble.

hit this up and vote honestly please...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68673

quite a nice battle but feeble got straight to the point with his vers
better structure and flow was ok but it was better than bash's

does "thugz d cry" know what a multi is?
a mutli is like

thug-do-cry// hate-this-guy

i clearly had that in every bar almost.
but...as long as you know what it is u decide who had more/better

2-1 me!~
uppin or votes will hit links back after@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@@@

Dawg i know what a multi is...but i liked his verse better than yours...no hate.........you had a tight verse...but liked his one more.........good battle....props to both 4 real



*Uppin 4 votes lol

lol
aite its cool just makin sure...
rhanx 4 votin......................

uppin this, damn....

no votes in a week?

personals- Feeble only one wit personels

wordplay- tied

punches- feeble, hands down

metties: ima say Bash wit dis one.

multis-tied


overall vote goes to Feeble, he had the punches and punches are 90% of a battle. Bash had a good verse too but Feebles punches were too much.

hit this up for me: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=69877


^^return the favor peeps $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$ $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$~1~

overall feeble got dis 1 i think. bashs punchs wernt really al that ill. but ggod shyt...return favor http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9539#post669539

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

holla>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
ill hit those battles up tomorrow on a diff computer this cant ote cu of aol............................................... ......................

HOOt battle but im guna have to go wit feeble, theres just things in his verse I ejoyed much more

Other guy was hot too

can ya'll return the favour and vote here. and please read my entire verse to see i got ILL punches, cuz bitches be votin for the guy wit the highest rating u know

thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=70016

hhhhhhhhhhhhh......pol ya votes????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ???

uppin for a few ore vters...........

You guys have very nice rhymes, I am keeping you guys up there on the vote, curious to see how this turns out, and maybe if it twists or sumthing, I honestly like both.

come on uppin...................

very nice battle if i can give myself props. (alias of fm)
this is so old.....
but i will beat bash if it takes all year.......

Tough call...

I'm a clearly give the bulk of the battle to Feeble, although, sometimes I think wordplay is stretched so much, it's barely wordplay and comes out more, "HUH?"

The closer was definately Bash's...
Sick Tiger Woods line.

So...

Let's break it down...

Personals: Feeble
Flow: Even
Wordplay: Feeble
Metas: Bash
Punches: Even

Have ta go with the closer and like the other guy said, the "oh damn" factor.

So, that closer by Bash is gonna do it for me.

Bash

Holla back...
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