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Merking King 07-22-03 04:46 AM

Feeble Minded v.s Merking King (should be close)
 
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Aight lets go

Rules:
Feeble spits first
10-20 lines
no hate votes
no d/r votes
no crew votes


Good luck homie....we rep the same crew but yea

Merking King 07-22-03 04:47 AM

I'll post tomorrow afternoon
Good luck feeble
no hate homie
juss battle
Nothin said is ta be takin seriously

Merking King 07-22-03 06:12 PM

aight juss waiting on Feeble............................................ ................
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Feeble Minded. 07-23-03 02:18 AM

yo...

...warm up...
comin into this battle with no-plan...watch this prick get his hopes-slammed//
cuz i hate faggots...and he 'CHECKS MALE PACKAGES' like the 'POST-MAN'//
lyrics 'heat his insides' like a 'slow tan' and 'light em up' like a glow-lamp!//
give him another try and watch the blowed-chance like its a-flowed-scam//

...next...
sumone help...this kids just untalented, give his spirits-a-lift//
cuz 'around christmas' is the only time you'll 'hear of his gifts'//
he's got a battle style like 'JEWISH HOLIDAYS' cuz cats 'PASS- OVER' his lyrics//
its like he needs 'PRACTICE HARPOONING' cuz its not improving his 'SPEAR-ITS'// (spirits) (lol)

merk time...
him winning is only 'ON THE HORIZON' like distant 'CLAPS OF THUNDER'//
i laugh-at-his-blunder...im above ya lyrically...ya raps is under//
im wishin his-throat-was-mute...cuz ima 'PICTURE HIS DEATH' like a 'PHOTO-SHOOT'//
if i was to quote-this-fruit id have to go he route to say "men are cute"// 12

finisher...
im a heavyweight fightin-a-light...and ya better wtch what ya write cuz we all know lit-fuses aint slow-to-ignite//
minds-get-incite...cuz im on a 'HARD DRIVE' to pack 'MEGA' punches and im quite quick to 'BYTE'// (computer references) 16

...the end... ....of you...
the end of you, death, destruction...the pattern is it all relates to you losing//
we all know he's gotta 'LOOK AT THE END' and 'FACE THE CONCLUSION'//
if you was once dope...we all know it was drugs u was using//
im verbally abusing and hes takin a bruising//

aite ...ur turn...

Merking King 07-23-03 02:21 AM

nice
i'm juss bout done
give me like a couple minutes.....
PROPS Feeble
no hate
u still my boy!

Merking King 07-23-03 02:23 AM

Here we go

I'm battlin a fool that's on the Top 10 list dont matta cuz in a battle i'll beat him with my flows or my fist, My flows be Ambitious this nigga gay he think i'm magically delicious//
We rep the same crew Lethal Connections this like a campain i'm winnin the elections, damn feeble you Alliderate i'm the number one confederate//
I'm gone win this battle with hand down gettin 5 votes from niggas all around, I'm the illest as you can see battle me you wont be as intellegent as me//
Your punchlines i had prevented my punches so hard you can't be protected, I'm the Merking King you like mariah carey you can't rap all u can do is sing//
I'm never gonna be beat by any of you cunts i'll burn all ya'll like me and my nigga crysis was smokin some blunts, my flows are hard some what exquizit i'm gonna beat you feeble so dont be afraid come visit//
Right now you prolly think you hated but honestly when ya step against me wit a mic i'll leave ya faded, see you like Osama Bin Ladin ya committin terrors battlin me that was ya first error//
Ya spittin stuff thats not relavent how ya gone diss me when ya not Intellagent, Battlin me ya got ripped, ya had a title but it juss got stripped//
Your daily rutein is prolly to watch Richard simmons Nigga i'll leave you confused u be like why's his rims keep spinnin, My flows be Untouchable ya verse is so wack it's not even helpable//
Right now yo ass got writers block dont worry bout it cuz ya wont be albe ta write when i cock my glock, you like those internet porn sites so damn sick you cause cyber fights//
See me and niggas like doin Collaborations Feeble Minded think he got talent what high Imaginations, Sorry feeble but we battlin by the way how does it feel that ya brains are rattlin?//
Ya screen name is BlackJack damn dawg i aint kno u was that wack, dont think to hard ya might hurt yaself Damn i should put ya verse on the wackest shelf//
Damn you wack ya verse makes me mad man i could beat you in a battle if i wrote a verse on the back of my hand, Battlin me is a bad decision it's pretty self explanitory pickin me ta battle was the worst move ya could make manditory//
Your Winning record i'm shutting down ya bout as wack as a teacher teachin Proper nouns, Ya time ta post got extended i kno u got mad bout what i'm sayin but dont get affended//
This nigga bout as gay as Inspector Gadget a dumb trench coat wearin faggit, see you are on my hit list listed i'm the Merking King dont get it twisted//
See i'm merkin you leavin u dissmissed i kno ya gone read my verse and then ya gone be pissed, but no hate homie props if i kno if i merk you to bad you'll prolly be gay and call da cops//
Feeble to bad if i got u Embarrassed but hey now u kno what it's like ta be ya parents, Juss playin you kno u my dawg but i'd still merk you even if i couldn't see in a FOG//
Damn you a virgin you aint eva even seen a thong Feeble ya think ya gone win this battle you got it all wrong, Sorry but this time ya punches got rejected maybe next time they will be accepted//
I kno your pretty new to rejection but honestly dawg my verses come out 110% Perfection, I'm not underestimating you i'm juss momentously defeating you//
Feeble wonder if ya still wanna be friends it's not that bad my verse was better times 10, i'm juss bringing out my skill because my flows bazarre and kill//
Fuck it before you battled me you shoulda been Kautious cuz my flows are sick they'll leave ya nautious, I probly left you amazed you probly wish your verse could get rephrazed//

Feeble Minded. 07-23-03 02:26 AM

nice verse man...

voters,,,,,vote....
vote for best verse not length that dont mater.................>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>..>

Merking King 07-23-03 02:28 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by Feeble Minded
nice verse man...

voters,,,,,vote....
vote for best verse not length that dont mater.................>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>..>

Word
Props to ya feeble
this was a good battle

PlaGuE2 07-23-03 02:49 AM

Flow... Merking..
Wordplay... Feeble..
Punches... Feeble..
Creativity... Merking..
Personals... Tie..
Metas... Merking
Comedy... Feeble..
Imagery... Merking..


Right enough categories... This battle was truely ill, damn mad props ta both of ya'll... extremely close..... too close..... shits scaring me ta vote....... goin on categories..... Merking got it, and when i say by a hair strand, i mean that, was really shit close all tha way....... nice work guys......
vote: merking

ShEmY 07-23-03 03:04 AM

Damn this was some close shit.. Merking King is starting to get up there... feeble sorry bro but Merking took this battle
vote-Merking King

Sureal: This Will Not Count, Not Explained Well Enough*

Feeble Minded. 07-23-03 03:06 AM

yo....>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>...


yall are just copying others shit....
some fair votes please?

,..............................................

use ya own thoughts...yall are pissin me off..................

Merking King 07-23-03 03:13 AM

yea
write your exact opinion
dont quote
Uppin 3-0 my lead.
Props to ya Feeble

lets get some more votes

Merking King 07-23-03 03:25 AM

Feeble u a herb
lol juss playin with ya homie
you kno i'm juss fuckin round
but yo lets get some votes

RappinThug4life 07-23-03 03:32 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by YoungWhiteThug19
Damn this was some close shit.. Merking King is starting to get up there... feeble sorry bro but Merking took this battle
vote-Merking King


Holy shit i didn't think Merking King would do this good
he got my vote
sorry feeble for the quote
but youngwhitethug19 took words out of my mouth

Sureal: This Will Also Not Count, Due To Quoting, And Not Being Well Explained

Kosta 07-23-03 04:14 AM

after reading through the verses i came to the
conclusion that there is no way merking won this
hobos eat germ infested fly habitats called garbage
that is what i compare merking kings verse to. and
please some one get these voters a band aid because
his dick is so far up their ass you know it's bleeding.
i'm closing this poll and resetting it to 0-0 cuz thats some
bullshit, i'll reopen the thread so you post mongers
can free post and bitch at me until you get banned . pz

Roots 07-23-03 07:33 AM

looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool he sucks big timelooooooooooooooooolllllllllllllllllllllllll trying to challange me with lyrics like that????????????????????????????????????? feeble merked u he should be wninig

Violent~Wordz 07-23-03 09:29 AM

: Agrees With Sand Also :

I Posted A Vote.Earlier.But It Was To Late.So It Didnt Go Through.. It Was Also For Feeble Minded....Better Punches..Flow..Multies..Basically EveryThing...Merking King..Flow Was..Off..Your Verse Wasnt Hard...Overly Stretched Lines..etc....

But SInce The Poll Is Closed....Nobody Can Vote Now..


~UnO~

MiCsYcKlE 07-23-03 09:59 AM

I thought feeble killed it

Merking king was good

Jujst stretched his sentence's way too much fot my taste

Ill Battle Both had good hots at eachother

I was giving the edge to feeble cause his had more heat
Merking was running off and on in his lines

make em shorter and more to the point and you would be one of the best on this site

My vote goes to feeble minded

MiCsYcKlE 07-23-03 10:00 AM

I meant good shots at each other not hots
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str8 jacket 07-23-03 03:03 PM

you guys both came with some shit!!!
one of tha better battles i have read
I liked feebels flow a little better
but merk won with his complex wordplay and punches
VERY CLOSE

VOTE merking king

peep my battle against gunnrunna does not compare with this shit but iam tryin to elevate i need some honest feedback yall
peace

Born To Kill 07-23-03 05:51 PM

I gotta throw to Feeble...

This was close as shit and everyone's already broken it down proper like so I'll just give my thoughts...

Amazing battle...

Merking came with some supernatural flow and multi's...

But he was put away (in my opinion) by the bad-ass wordplay and complexity of Feeble's shit.

Punches were about the same, just different in arrival style.

Feeble did his complex like used wordplay to bring his in...
Merking used straight forward in your face stuff...

I was just more impressed with Feeble's for the reasons I gave.

Sureal 07-24-03 01:06 AM

Ok I Took A Good Long Look At This Thread..
I Then Deleted All The Freeposting And Quoted Votes..
Counted The Legitimate Votes, Should Be 2-2
So I Will Now Edit The Poll To 2-2 And Is Now Fair
To Both Sides of This Battle..

Verbaly Abusive 07-24-03 01:10 AM

Yo, you both got mad talent straight up no bullshit it probably dont meen much comin from me but im up and comin i would vote for feeble minded the big bang at the end
dope battle check my shit at
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67957

Merking King 07-24-03 01:34 AM

OMG
What the Fuck
First i win this shit and Sand Changes it
Knuckle~head fixes it
I get the win Now Sureal change it
Wtf
i keep gettin screwd by these fucking MOD's

Emcee Rashaddy 07-24-03 02:32 AM

In my opinion Feeble took it, He had better word play and more was much more humorous, Great Battle. But Feeble Took it, Hands Down. Merking Kings verse was ill, but Feeble Topped it.
Props to both.

Vote - Feeble Minded

Merking King 07-24-03 02:41 AM

Dont matter your opinion
this shit is closed
stop usin this for freepost~
GOD DAMN.............................................. .........................................

twistabill 07-24-03 03:12 AM

YO CHECK MY SHIT OUT TWISTABILL VS GRUBB AND VOTE UPPINS NIGGA UPPIN^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Feeble Minded. 07-24-03 03:45 AM

keep this battle closed..............

NO ONE VOTE IN HERE...I DONT THINK ITLL LET U ANY WAY AND I DONT WANT STUPID NEWBIES THAT ARE IN AIM VOTING RINGS SCREWING MY WELL EARNED RECORD BY BEING STUPID................................


OUT OF THE 4 VETS THAT VOTED IN THIS BATTLE....

I GOT ALL FOUR VOTES.....
IT MAY NOT BE MERKING KINGS FAULT, AND HES MY DAWG SO I DOUBT IT...BUT DAMN! DICKRIDERS!

THATS ALL...........THANKS..............


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