dw vs xl4real (round 2)
 

10 lines max
no crew/d ridin/hatin votes
no feedin

i'll spit first in about 10-15 mins!

checkin in dude, ive been on my lunch break!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Alrite here we go, dawg u spit back in the time that I take 2 write this if u can--


Come on fuck this ho, yo yo, lets go---

C.P.R is wot u’ll need wen im finished, vanished will be the name xl4real with his gravestone varnished/
Dawg you’ll need an “enigma” 2 remove my lines, which r bein shruved so far up ya ass u shittin ILL rhymes everytime/
Xl4real? Think theres a mistake, its more like xl4fake for fuck sake/
Your more transparent the water vapour, cats like u will neva av the chance 2 put pen 2 paper/
Pre-written shit is all u provide, dividin lines u used before against different opponents so u don’t collide/
This vet vs vet but u only a trainee, dangerously mixin wiv a quality, qualified V.E.T/
--cautiously entered wiv ya head down low, entered low, leavin givin ya own dick a blow/
flow! I keep it comin smooth like water from a tap, wiv no gap showin niggas like u how 2 rap/
r u upset wiv life? Do u wanna die? Cos stepping in eres like commitin suicide/
man u throw punches, I digest n shit em out as “waste”, I throw, u “choke”, but atleast you’ve ad a taste/
of justice in its highest portion, one think that leaves me wiv brain exhaution, is why the fuck did your ma not have an abortion//

now u dawg!!!!

soz y'all its meant 2 be---

more transparent "than" water vapour, = not "the" which i've put,

ad

on the last line, "one thing" not "one think" which i've put,

soz bout that but keyed it quik n it won't let me edit!

I'll shoot my tongue out like manga movies with sharp lyrical spits,
and i'll slice DW with knife saliva he's too slow to defend my hits.
He slower than time machines stuck in rewind from film scenes,
and i'll scare him with my stee's put him to his grave like crugar in dreams.
This is round two like experiments which went wrong the 1st time,
and DW is the mutation we made from mixin his rhymes with mine.
He's part ill and part wack when he rap battle attacks,
If he's me he wins, if he's him he'll collapse.
So when you hear this story of a half rapper, half wack mc,
You know which half is dw and which half is me!!!

10 lines man!!!!!!!

man thats why I asked about the lines man, one bar is two line that rhyme, lines is each induvidual line. So I spit less than you now man!!!!!!!!!!

see what i mean dawg all your lines include the rhyming line, where as I rhyme with the next line, so tchnically youve spit 20 lins, what you wanna do cuz I dont feel happy id rather it be fair???

i gott go wit DW
on da strengthg that i wasn't fellin XL's verse
i mean it was aight but
dw had tha punces and wordplay

vote=DW

yo D cum check this out XL u can't vote there
i'm battlein a nigga in your crew
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67193

DW CAME HARDER
nice battle
people should be more specific about rulez

DW GETS MY VOTE none the less

thanx! xl man edit ya verse then dawg! or drop some more lines!!!

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin don't sleep y'all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

There Ya Have It...

dw Can Ya Poll On My Battle Wit B2K...You Forgot...Thanx.

thanx,

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!1

Real nice by Real...

But it wasn't what I would call a battle rap.
More like a comedy type skit with a funny theme.
Dw threw down like he was in this to win, not entertain.
Harder munches, better wordplay, and metas.

Peace

uppin 2 votes 2 finish this up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin for this to get it out my hair!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!too many battles on da go
vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i kno that DW got this shit cause man he hit em wit doze punch linez talkin mad shit ---u kno he came to win and XL didnt have shit ........... thats just me

yeah dw took this one with harder puunches eventhough he went over ten lines

vote DW

return tha favor by voting on my battle vs gunnrunna