shattered_solja vs. ~JacK ThA RippA~
 

ayo,

check in and spit

Aww shit sorry dawg I didn't even see this Aight I'll spit
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Its a fantasy for you to be beatin me, I come creepin and deletin all those skills your be stealin from mobb deep its weak your just a fucked up white boy, sittin on the comp all day, what a ~geek~
Your a shattered solja, I'm rollin ya, spittin on ya till your cold enough to be shattered again, your gonna be merked by jack my ~friend~
Its a catstrophe for you to be a newbie, and not know what a pussy be in reality the definition is you ya see, I'm like Bruce Lee, kick and punchin your whack ass till ya aint got a beef, soon you'll see me on TV through the windows of the store from your bed in the streets ya ~weak~
Breakin your hands and your mouth I laugh out loud, as you make a fool of your self in the crowd your already shattered your dignity, ain't nothin worse then a soldier who I burnt his brain so bad he thinks his names ~olga~
Don't worry bout your dick it won't be limp no more, I sent it to your mom. who said shes glad you got fucked like a whoar, I roar as I spit my rhymes and cut ya ~more~
You say your from hells pit and I know how you got there, you rhymed against god and he knocked your ass down there, I can see you now, I'm like a wolf thats wear, and your pissin your pants your so scarred of the shit I spit I'm quick to rip my lyrics and fuck you up the ~prick~
Like the colors of the rainbow, your fake like Jlo's ass I shoot the mask off your whack ass to see its really your face, I admit that shit scarred me but what really got me phased was that your ass wasn't was full of shit and wasn't ~shaved~
The alarm clock popped its the end of your rock to fame, time to send you back to shame, as I merk your whack ass cold, damn man I killed you so long ago your already growin fucking ~mold~

Damn :\ I rreally need to shortin my lines :\
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I gotta up this because solja aint up so uppin!!!!!!!!!!
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Uppin for solja
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Like the colors of the rainbow, your fake like Jlo's ass I shoot the mask off your whack ass to see its really your face, I admit that shit scarred me but what really got me phased was that your ass wasn't was full of shit and wasn't ~shaved~

That line, Delete the wasn't after ass at the end

uppin
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yo my bad,

I disintegrate bones-n- infiltrate-zones, jack the rippa your rhymes chicken scratch, so many fakes like you I castrate-clones-1

You throw punches like late-reactions because when they finally hit I sit there laughing-2

Manipulate-distractions and duplicate-abstractions, so there’s double the life lines, and I’ll hit you with punches so hard you animate-contractions-3

Setting fires to incinerate-rhymes, your flows like concentrate-limes because your rhymes bitter-4

Infiltration-invading your home killing you by asphyxiation-castrating is the next best thing-5

Your punches hit like Mike Tyson because you swing and always miss so you come back biting-6

You so played out you could inherit eminems-ability but realize your rhymes stay the same because you still have feminine - disability’s -7

No matter how hard you try to terminate mc’s you couldn’t penetrate - casualty’s- 8

Your rhymes stick like wet cement but after an hour the always go dry-9

I’m from the dark side where broken angels cry, the body count will continue to multiply, the unholy and never been baptized-10

uppin ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

rippa ya need to work on your flow--kinda hard to read but you got potential
shattered took this one with better punches and flow
no beef

VOTE shattered

Aight aight.... Uppin
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Uppin for some honest votes that means just cause he got a vote don't mean he wins... :\ which one ou thought was better

upping for votes yall ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^6

Come on yall we need votes and honest ones too
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Come on Niggas!!!! Votes we need some honest votes!!!!!!!!
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uppin...
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shattered got dis one by a smidge from da betta flow...

Vote= Shattered

Good battle, dawgz............................................. .....

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Come on dawgs uppin
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uppin yall for some votes ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

yo i disagree wit str8 your flow was decent to me but
it was kinda hard to put together your rhymes at time
like they didnt really make much sense to me

i think shattered had betta structure and harder punches
just my opinion therefore gotta go with shattered
denct battle for a couple of newbies
vote=shattered
hit me up
holla

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6319#post646319

THANK YALL YPPIN ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Ugh..... I need 1 more win come on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
uppin I guess :\
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when does the battle end?...................??????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????

I though jack had the better punches

both descent just shattered didnt have anything worth rereading

I'd like ot see a round 2 guys


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68242

Jack the ripper had a nice flow to his verse i thought

both had some good punches, but the wordplay in both was off point ...

Other than rippers flow bein slightly better you where both equal

So by that i'm gonna have to say Jack The Ripper !

Can you drop a vote on this please .. both of you !!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68026

thanx

solja had this but it was close, both ya flows were hard to get so you need betta srtucture. solja had betta wordplay and harder punches.

I vote solja!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Can you guys hit up my battles with asphixion and prophiit, cheers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

both of ya need some rhythm, it seems as though yall are pumpin more words in your lines that are definately unnecessary. I'm goin with Shattered, cause I plain ole didn't understand Jacks.
don't mean to be rude//
What'sup with your bars dude//
You said it your self