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I Stand At A Summit..Gazing With My Hand To My Stomach...
Plannin To Plummet..Through The Dirt..Sand And The Rubbish... The Land As My Luggage..I’m Forced To Carry The Weight... Of Times Under Airy Debate...Please Make Light Of This... I Think A Parody’s Great..It’s A First Living Monogamous... Married To Fate..Who Just Seems To Want To Bury It’s Mate... And Put An End To All That I Love..Home..My Very Estate... It’s Scary To Wait..With No Clue..No One To Show You... Life Slows Due..To The Fact You Have Nothing To Grow To... Fasten Your Seat Belt..In Fact..Grab Your Neck To Tie The Rope... Cause You Might As Well..No Options..Views..Or Kaleidoscope... Just Try To Cope..If It’s Possible..Let Out A Cry Of Hope... And Have Faith..To Dive Head First Down The Highest Slope... Am I Biased..Nope..I Just Have Views..I’ll Share Them With You... Please Feel Free..And Just Drop A Reply If You Dare To Issue... Something As Personal..Flowing With Tears To Tear The Tissue... Stripped Of Your Clothes..From Head..To Tips Of The Toes... Let It All Out..The Feelings Slalom Down The Bridge Of Your Nose... It Grips As It Goes..Trying Only Just To Trouble The Brain... Not Subtle..But Plain..It Finally Drips Down As A Puddle Of Rain... But What’ll It Stain..Your Mind State..Still Filled With Blind Hate... With Who To Blame..What..The Movies..Music..The Crime Rate... Through All Of The Clever Going..This Process Is Ever Slowing... I’m Talking About Life..It’s Project..And You..Never Knowing... How To Present Yourself..Put Up Masks To Cover Laughter... Regardless How Many Problems You Solve..There’s Others After... And That’s The Cycle..Then It All Hits With A Stunning Smack... Troubles Are Like Football..They Always Keep Running Back... Now You Know..Life Slows..And Stops On A Comma..Forgiving... You For The Fact You Can’t Live..Without The Drama Of Living... |
hahahahaha, nice one
wanna collab bruv? |
Yeah this cat is sick , He always spit flames , Ur vocab was sick in this Piece , ur wordplay was blazing as always , ur metaphors were Nice , Hell this piece was just SICKNESS...I give u a 9/10
Return da favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67799 |
Thx Ya'll...Uppin This Piece
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Uppin This Piece 1 Mo Gen..
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this pacaso mac the "street avenger" ok dog i will admit, that was kinda fire. you talked subjects that are different. ya flow was pretty good to. keep it up dog
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thx^...uppin
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"But What’ll It Stain..Your Mind State..Still Filled With Blind Hate...
With Who To Blame..What..The Movies..Music..The Crime Rate..." ^^Reminded me of skillz needed to make it to tha mainstream^^ Tellin you right now, you should expand your talent. Start gettin in tha studio if your not already, and really get this kinda shit out on a tape or cd. Eventually someone will notice it. It couldnt hurt anything so try it. But this was an ill piece, when i first started readin it i thought i was another poemy piece. But when i started readin it and it smacked me wid dopeness lol. Keep tha shit up. -1- |
Very nice drop, i liked it, nice vocab and wordplay. shit is just hot.............hit my piece up...its crazy...lol insanity is tha title
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Thx Ya'll..Uppin This Piece
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Uppin This Piece...
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You're A Biter!
you bit this off of braisen outlaw from rapmusic.com http://board.rapmusic.com/showthrea...threadid=596674 |
Kid,I Already Did An Audio For This So Stfu !..
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and your point is? you bit...
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The Audio Is From May Man...I'll TRY To Upload It On Soundclick n Then I'll Show You
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who gives a fuck...you bit this verse from braisen outlaw...
or did he bite it from you? |
If I Recorded The Verse In May..Wut Do Think ?
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Did u really bit this? |
I ALREADY TOLD YOU...I RECORDED THAT VERSE IN MAY...SO HOW COULD I HAVE BITTEN IT ?
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Aight dawg , check ur P-M , I sent u a message |
Upping this , because this piece is sick
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You Bit...
How Do I Know...?... Cause I Wrote It... |
Knachural this is da cat who bit ur song
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* gets out ban stick *
i have no reason to believe you didn't bite this, or if you did write it, i need to ban these other kids. but for now i'm going to leave it open so someone can explain what the fuck is going on. =I |
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Ok sand let me explain what I think happened , Knachural said that he put this in audio a long time ago , and then he posted it in open mic , and then this other cat had dat same song on another site , So I reported him , and said he bit tha song , And I think he got banned , so he came here ,...........Knachural said he had this in audio a long time ago , and the other cat posted that same song on a different site like 4 days ago.. |
tight shit, i felt this piece had good rythm to it, keep droppin these pieces
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yo this was a sick drop... nice flow, great creativity and wordplay.... it has sickness written all over it! Luved it!
keep spittin stuff like this peace |
two questions....
1)If the audio is from your boy, and your taking credit from it, doesn't that constitute as biting? 2)You said you have to upload it.....HOW in the Fuck....could someone bite this if it wasn't uploaded or available for listening.... sidenote.....If you bite someone on my crew again and try to make them look like a biter....I'll expose all your bitch ass biting freenzies..... |
ILLLLLLLLLLL is all im sayin
keep it up can ya'll peep my new battle please thanks, peace |
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It was on my cpu awhile ago..but i had to get my whole system restored and i lost it..don't belive me ? Ask Kred..he knows i've been without any files for awhile..i lost my Kazaa n everything so yeh..but oh well...i know i ain't bite but if ya'll decide to ban me..oh fuckin well cuz i know i didn't |
No proof that you made it in audio, from my perspective, it looks like you bit.
And BlurUrOptics, If He Has Bit More - Get Evidence, Then We'll Act On It, Until Then, He's Innocent. . |
I don't care who wrote it... that shit was ill from the opening line. Not a bad thing to be said about it... to whichever of you wrote this... shit was nice...
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