Battle: Triztwarrior Vs Natural_Disaster
 

Here are the rules:
10 lines max,
No hate, d/r or crew votes,
No prewrittens
Ill spit first

right lad u spit am ready for it

try go easy as am new to dis shit lad mind it wont matta i still kick ass lol (just using 100 characters lol)

Hey yo,
Naturally a disaster//You're so damn slow, could I flow any faster?//Looks like this prick pricked himself, lemme get you a plaster//You expected a newbie, you got the fuckin master//Grab a pistol, and into submission I'll start to blast//In a minute you're gonna need a whole body cast//Your style is embarassing, its so stale, you've failed//Get yo ass back to Wales, you like a beached whale//All you can do it flail, from this boat named the Rap, you should bail//Open my sails, let them billow, sail towards ya//Comin to kill ya, start to bellow, im gettin iller//
Next time ill finish ya :P

I went sortof easy on ya lol, but I dont doubt ur skills I dont think i really needed to :) ...................................(dam this 100character rule! I h8 it so badly lol).............................................. .......

lol @ the 100 character thingy, good rhymes lad

OK OK OK OK LISTEN LISTEN

me 5yr old sis got more skill//
you betta take note of ma flow its so fuckin ill//
better go grab urself a beer your not gunna like this//
if i'd have used protection you wouldn't even be ere i regret the first kiss//
get your mum sum rub she'll even let u ave her up da fuckin bum//
your rhymes are fucking wank//
mine are that tight they're blowing you away like a fuckin tank//
i might be new to this//
check it out im totaly taking da fucking piss//

Trizt took this

Better dissing

Nt disaster needs a lil elevating but he still learnin da ropes

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67759


Vote goes to triz warrior

hey yo,
thats some okay stuff u pulled there i guess
PS tell your five year old sis daddy is ashamed of her from me (dont worry Natural you'll figure wat i said out someday :P)

synikill : : Yeah am still learning this shit lad soz i aint as good as you lot but as i said im startin ere so i'll get betta with time

Triztwarrior : : Soz mate but i think my lines where iller am new to this shit but whateever good battle dawg

nah man

natural you need to elevate
seriously....


acctualy it wasn't a bad battle....

you both need elevation

vote-triz
he had a better verse over all
but i didnt like your structure
cruise the bords and look around
this isn't much of a game
people acctualy spit sensibol lines on this site

lol okay Kautious ill work on incorporatin some more relevant lines in my shit thanks for the feedback :)

kautious thanks for the advice man, i'll have a look round gimme some ideas like, again sorry about earlier lol actin a prick 'n' all

uppin for votes :) ************************************************** ************************************************** ****

yo
Natural u have 4 unfinished (or somethin like that) battles happenin right now, just a warnin; ur only allowed two unclosed battles happenin at one time. be careful dawg

Peace Out

shit i didnt know that shit dawg nobody told me like

nooooooo i lost them all anyways but i dont wanna piss no peeps off like hopefuly it will go un-noticed

peace out

Uppin for votes......................................come on ppl! vote plz someone needs to win this battle............................................ .......................................

Uppin for votes....................anyone who votes/polls here I will look at their battles and honestly vote...(soz but i cant poll vote just yet) but ill look and give an honest opinion anywayz :)

Peace out

goddaymn! y is no one voting on this battle dawg?????????????????????????????????????????????? ???????????????

lol, good battle to both of you but I'm voting for trizt (LOOKS LIKE YOU'LL GET YOUR FIRST WIN!!!!!) He had more and since both of you sounded exactly the same, quantity was the next test and he one......

Good luck 2 both of you and try and get some harder punches
P.S. please vote on my battle against carsonjet, it is still on the first page of the frontlines

thanks for checkin out the battle homie............................................. .................................................. .................

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i think trizt came harder wit the punches, obviously i cant vote since there are no crew votes but good shit from both of u...........................................

i won't vote on this either cause of crew shit but i think tritz would have takin this with better punches and an overall better verse, u guys game will both become stronger, tips to both of u try usin better rhymes and up ure vocab but it was a good battle props to both u guys

thanks for lookin at the battle guys.............................................. ......................................

Trizt, that spit, i had my mouth open, it was heavy, sweet to read, good rhymin', good flow...
But Welsh one, you didn't have much that was interestin', to tell the truth as soon as i started redin' i said 'oh no', it wasn't hard enough...
outta the motherfuckin' water... Vote to Triztwarrior

^^ wtf.. first up... trizt's verse had no structure.. very poor flow... wasnt hard hitting at all, had little if any effective punches.. shit creativity and wordplay. Basically natural got this, he had better verse, had some decent punches and i mean decent, nothing really outstanding. both yall need to elevate.. go to WEC.
vote: Natural.

yo thx for votin u 2 :)................................................ .................................................. .....................

so so so so so so weaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaak

ayo, lol, this is a battle from aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaages ago but i wanna finish this y'all so I can move on, just vote for who dropped a better verse all. thx :-)

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