Ambiguous vs wallbanger
 

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dont take too long to spit
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Aite... i rather have 10 MAX... but whatever, this my check in, i'll spit after you, peace...
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Aye... i gotta bounce real quick, it's 8 o'clock here... i'll try to hit it up when i get back, if not, i'll hit it first thing in the morning, you don't have to spit right now so you don't say i feed off your verse, i'm out, holla.

aight here we go......ten lines if you want......

this kid couldnt 'win' even he got pre'written' shit from dashowstoppa2 and "brooklyn"/
cause ya punches aint set to 'win',your so shitty you couldnt beat a "dolphin"/
u woudnt know good rap if they was unda ya nose 'hairs', i hate chumps like u,the mutha fuckin "poserz"/
you so weak and couldnt hurt me,its like you a plastic toy and im a bull "doza"/
this websites not for you its not 'ladylike',so just take ya gay ass rhymes and leave ya "dike"/
so poor you cant even afford a bike cause ya spent all ya money on that gay-hooker named "mike"/
could never even put up a 'fight',such a baby you can barely ride a fuckin "trike"/
you thought you had genital warts and you started to cry but you found out the next day it was just ya tiony "balls"/
thinkin you a tough boy goin into battle calls,lookin for newbies to merk but this time you gonna "fall"/
man you just a poser, cant even brake a 'jaw',get ready for ya first flaw/

Aite, sorry i took so long, i just got home a while ago and just finished my verse:

Messin’ with me will get your face scraped worse then gum of a shoe, like starvin’ bums... you’re bitten off more than you can chew/
My punches leave permanent tattoos, you get anally raped like it ain’t taboo, you beat me?, is-like-you-being-a-good-emcee… that’s untrue/

Your skill i easily transgress, you couldn’t have suck-sess, if a vacuum-cleaner you did posses, your attempt at a win, you get denied like your crew request/
Your reason for dropping a whack verse, same as mexicans who just crossed the border… “i no speaky ingles”… confess before your bitten rhymes are re-posed/

I have bad intents that’ll make your family lament, i’ll leave you full of resent the way i inflict torment, the day you leave RB will be a happy event/
Ill delinquent, you tryin’ to take “one step”, but you standin’ still like your feet are made of cement, you don’t make a dent, “herb” is what on your face i’ll indent/

This kid thinks he’s tough when he has cartoons printed on his under-roos, i’m amused, ‘cuz this kid is spittin’ rhymes that are makin’ me snooze/
I’ll lyrically abuse this kid ‘till he’s black-n-blue, to stop i’ll refuse, i’ll beat on this kid some more ‘cuz like dud fireworks… i got a short fuse/

You must be regurgitating your whack rhymes ‘cuz you like to talk shit, like HIV, losses i easily transmit, i got you “banging” on “walls” just give up and submit/
Like fat guys with tight pants… your head i’m quick to split, i quit i’m done with my spit… he admits that he commits more handling of “balls” than baseball mitts/

Let's get some votes...

could never even put up a 'fight',such a baby you can barely ride a fuckin "trike"/
you thought you had genital warts and you started to cry but you found out the next day it was just ya tiony "balls"/
thinkin you a tough boy goin into battle calls,lookin for newbies to merk but this time you gonna "fall"/
man you just a poser, cant even brake a 'jaw',get ready for ya first flaw/
^DECENT'
INTRO WAS FUNNY,.
This kid thinks he’s tough when he has cartoons printed on his under-roos, i’m amused, ‘cuz this kid is spittin’ rhymes that are makin’ me snooze/
I’ll lyrically abuse this kid ‘till he’s black-n-blue, to stop i’ll refuse, i’ll beat on this kid some more ‘cuz like dud fireworks… i got a short fuse/
^DECENT..MORE PLAYED FILLAZ,....THEN ANYTHING..
AMBIGIOUS I WANNA BATTLE U ILL DROP FIRST U SET IT UP WHEN I SEE IT IN FRONT LINES IL DROP....1
BUT U DONT GET MY VOTE..YA SHIT WAS KINDA PLAYED...SCRAPED...AN SNOOZE...THESE RHYMES AN PUNCHES HAVE BEEN ABUSED..DAWG..

^Hate vote, that's all i'm saying.
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i iant hatin u fukin dumbfuk foreallhe did have da stronger verse..an drop in our battle i already did..herb,,in a half...

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well i would vote, but u both r apart of the same crews im in

sorry............................................. ..............................................

Ill Delinquentz and B.R.E. Reppin

UP(2) You narcoleptics...
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Ambiguous that was weak
too many run ons and long ass sentence's

Both had good shit

But i was feeling wallbangers more

this aint a hate vote or d,r vote either

so enough of the crying

^Yes it is just cuz i didn't vote for you in your lilbrick battle... until then, no one had even hit this battle up.

I posted in your battle at 9:56, you posted in here at 10:01... no way you read it in 5 minutes... and even shorter cuz you still had to type that response and i know you didn't get the link as soon as i posted it... faggot.

wall banger got this for better punches,flow,vocab and everything else.
amb u spitted kinda weak in this battle compared to your otha 1z uu had way to many run ons.

Vote:Wall
poll Vote:wall

Evil merkin by Ambiguous...

Much more wordplay, complexity, multi's, and harder punches...

The other cat just came too elementary.

Peace

^First real vote, 1-2, let's get some more votes.
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In my opinion..Ambigous won.Wallbanger when you started off I didnt know what the fuck you was doin, but it got a lil better in the middle.Ambigous' verse was good all the way thru.My vote goes to Ambigous

2-2, can we get some more votes in here?
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In my opinion..Ambigous won.Wallbanger when you started off I didnt know what the fuck you was doin, but it got a lil better in the middle.Ambigous' verse was good all the way thru.My vote goes to Ambigous
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EXACTLY

HIT THIS UP: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67021

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Well this was not the cleanest battle, but it was not bad either.

Wallbanger, had some punches, nothting devistaing though. His flow was good, could have been better. No complexity, not much if any word play, nothing significant.

Ambigous, had some hardder punches, but dawg they are right, shit was abused in the past. one thing that set your verse apart was the vocan and that name flip. That in my eye's put you over the top, multi's were there but not complex. Had you not used the word play in the name dis, I would have a hard time giving you a vote.

overall, I think both of you could elevate, and big, tighten up your lines, they are a little runny, and freshen up your punches. They are recycled to some degree.


Vote=ambigous
Respect...

Aite... thanks for the feedback, i'll take that to mind... and bout the played punches... really? i've never seen these anywhere... well i haven't see that many battles either, so i guess that's it, let's get the final vote.

yo close battle i seen a lil bit of some played shit from both but more from wallbanger n i also waanna now why was wall talkin bout the brooklyn battle lololol theres no need for that hear lolol

go shit but amb won with ok flow some nice punches n aghhhh werdplay
holla