Whats in a word
 

Footprints in the concrete do you remember when we made them.
Your understanding just loosens because its unraveled at the hem.
Misconceptions in every aspect of your personality makes me sick.
How can u judge while your in the midst of one of your schizophrenic fits.
Im differant but you can't put your finger on what it is because your too timid.
Glazed over with fear how can you say Im the one when you always get livid.
All genius in just one mind attracted to depth that is beyond comprehension.
Inside I cry but the tears do not fall because my emotions are on a mental dentention.
Less tension in my mind when brought upon from the open minded denial.
Can't help that no one has the correct vision to see a master piece beyond trial.

nice drop...definately enjoyed reading it....

How can u judge while your in the midst of one of your schizophrenic fits.

^^have to say that was one of my favorite lines....flowed really smooth....hm, really nothing more to be said...overall nice piece...
LP

This Was Good....Once Again....
Flowed Well Through And Through
What Recca Highlighted From It Did
Stand Out...Dont Stop Doing This Your Talented

You Couldnt Spot Me With Laser Surgerys
Eehh....Nevermind....Overall This Was Good

~Content~

thanx

that tight shit boo,nice wordplay keep elevatin

Nice drop Trinity, keep up the good work. I like the style, flow's well. Keep elevating, you have talent for sure...

Respect...

lol....i just love how everyone says the same thing...thanx for tha reply content...u've been there through everything ...even all my mood swings..lol...I dont know any one else on RB..since all these new peeps..lol...gettin old aren't we

Twenty Years Young...
Some Have Put CD's Out....
Others Have Became Uninspired....
Some Are Working On Putting A Cd Out....
Someone Will Hook You Up If They Make It...
This Someone Is Hired
Paying Bills And Rent For A House
His Works Far From Done

Take Care...Dont Worry Be Happy*

uppin

nice drop like ur work n stlye keep with the style n keep elevating once again nice drop

This was actually one of the best pieces pieces i've seen from you in my hazy memory.

The depth was intriguing, dug shallow yet still must work to find.

The imagery was fitting. I went well what you were 'getting out'.

Though maybe over-doing certain parts. A bit more compression would probably benefit it.

But overall, a quite fine piece. I can see that within each one of your pieces there are 'masterpieces' (of 'short' poetry, which you seem to concentrate on) bursting to get out.

I think the key is compression. Because from what i can see at the moment, most of the other things are already there.

Oh, and as well as percieving another thing. I also got a little message out of it directed to some people *shuffles feet* here at RB. I am sure they know of your talent. And there has merely been a lapse in communication and overall understanding on both sides.

..resp....

hmm...its directed to many people..(but yes some at RB...a lot of tha newbies)....no one comprehens me..but its all good

That was really good
i enjoyed reading every line
kept me interested
keep droppin
you got lots of talent
peace,

nice rhymes but ya poem is all over da place after" livid" u lost me it was like now who ya talking about like i said nice rhymes but subject matter is missing you got ta make it more intriguing

then see..U DONT UNDERSTAND ME...sorry..to be so blunt..well not actually

You Knowing What Your Words Represent Is All That Matters
Girl..Thats All that Matters..Theyre Your Closest Weapons For
Any Form Of Expression....If People Dont Pick Up Or Look Into
You Have went Over Their Head.......Which Is A Good Thing
Embrace That..I Do With The Smug Smile Of A Hateful Winner

Hey Gurl..
This was an excellent drop, no doubt. Just an overall smooth read, with powerful bars, subtle yet strong.

>Misconceptions in every aspect of your personality makes me sick.
How can u judge while your in the midst of one of your schizophrenic fits.

^best part, undoubtedly.
and by the way..who gives a fuck if no one understands you or the poem..You didnt write it for THEM did you? I didnt think so. Most of these people dont even read the whole thing, they just reply with some bullshit.
Stay up girl, you're talented! This coming from someone who actually read the whole thing.. trust me on that one.
All the aggravation only makes for better writing material.
Nice writez,
keep em comin.
pz.

hey gurly... dunno if you remember me? I remembered that you had helped me out in the past when I needed some advice jus through the board an whatnot an I remembered likin ya poems so I thought to stop in... seems like a lot of the older people on here have gone for bad additude twoards people not replying or not completely understanding things. What happened there? I mean damn gettin a guilt trip for some one replyin to my ish...? To tha peice:
Not gonna sit here an say what I think this peice was about because I don't wanna be told that I don't understand you or your work... I don't know you prolly don't understand you but I still don't like to be told things like that smell me?
I was loving the imagry in this peice. The words you chose to depict your emotions were amazing! The line homeboi picked out was by far what stood out in my mind. (I know I'm wrong) But I got a lil out of it that you may have not completely understood what was going on... or there mighta been several emotions or things goin wrong and they were all tuggin at the same time... the foot prints in the concrete verses what people commonly hear "sand" makes me thing that the commitment was a bit more permenate than what sand might be, washing away verses always being there... and I don't know what this peice was on, first conclusion obviously would be a relationship gone bad. But I've written peices that seem that way to others an aren't I didn't get annoyed but I'm openly admitting my assumption maybe wrong.. anyways I thought this was a beautiful peice and I enjoyed readin it, stay up gurl an I'm lookin for more of ya work peace

thanx chickita banana..and i'm glad to see you back and strong..yea..i had to keep you up..uh its about bein misunderstood..and how i can't stand it..i could go into depth but i wont...you don't have to apologize for how you felt..everyone can get out a diff. meaning out of a poem...thats what poetry does...makes u feel a certain way...thank tho..God bless..1..