school days....(song)
 

yo peep dis i made it when i was like 13.....
VERSE 1
ever since i started school i was always some kinda fool..i neva fit in so i tried to act cool...to be freinds wid the other u'se( other try hards)..i was bieng fake not bieng true, sometimes i thought i was neva born to include...wid the places u went to.i always hated bieng on the pedastool, always having to only talk to the people cool, not the ones who actualy enjoyed to go to school..but on the weekend i had nothing to do wid them, they neva called but then, i met a guy named raymond..he made life feel like one big faggy lesson...do this and that and find a betta way dressin..suddenly i thought that i dont need the stressin..so i walked up and told him to fuk off or stand up to me and get hit wid a blessin.sometimes i think that i was better off to stay in heaven...but now at school i am looked at to as a bully..but i think that people neva took the chance to understand me fully..i just wanna be smart not to be some fake coolie..i just wanna learn to do things in good ways..and i just wanna have betta school days.....
VERSE 2
in school i neva really past the test, but i neva really thought that i was betta than the rest, i wish i was free as a bird flying to its nest..i judged gurls on there looks neva wats in there iner self..i neva made money cause i didn't ever earn, i wanted to stay in school so i can listen and learn..if i gt mad i would feel like i went to hell and burned..if i had to make a choice i was scared incase i would take the wrong turn..i neva asked for help dat i neva really earnded...i feel like the airs sweepin up my health..but wat i need to do is search deep inside my self..i feel like a boxer fighting for the title belt..but i fail and all i need to do is reign and hail so i can do shit right..so i can finally say that i have won dis fight, and i will forget about thm haters haten me dispite..but i can be biger than u not just in height..so i can free the world and make all shit right.so i can finally find a betta way in these school days..
VERSE 3
i'm gettin alot higher in these school years and i've found betta ways to get through my fears..i've stopped felin like i've been hit by a thousand spears..now i am sittin here scream..WATSUP MAN CHEERS.. i am actually studying when i take that test for math.. and i've found a new way of settin up my path..i feel like i'm in a movie just widout the cast and i'm tryin to catch my life but its runnin too fast, but i stop and think if i ever went past a good oppertunity to make things last..and no suddenly my movie has found its cast( friends,family)... i wanna finish school and proove ur stupid ass that i can finally listen when i'm sittin in class..so i can finaly feel proud and when i do i will shout it out loud.and i have finally prooved u wrong so stop listen and think when u hear my song..that i have worked hard for this and busted my ass all day long..so i dont need to think about yesterday in my school days.......

yo dats it peeps....write wat u think and i will get bak to ya...
i have more songs dat i will post when i get some feedback on dis

peace

Tite for 13.....
Structure it bet better...
Pce

i'm just gonna up this aiight
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thats much better than i was when i was 13. i was like "a bug flew in my mug". but cool post. songs about real life always come off better than killa killa songs. good post. by the way how old are you now?

i'm just gonna up this aiight
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YO I LIKED IT....STRUCTURED EVENLY...ITS AIGHT

This was a pretty nice drop....I was feelin the content but the wordplay was a lil choppy...Other than that good looks...keep blessin

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comon peeps i wanna know wat u think about it
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dont sleep on dis

i'm just gonna up this aiight
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COMON PPL I WANNA SEE PPL GIVIN EXPLANATIONS ABOUT MY VERSES
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COMON PPL I WANNA SEE PPL GIVIN EXPLANATIONS ABOUT MY VERSES
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Its cute a back in the day style for me nice though!

Where the hell is the chorus?

(caugh) BORING


but good for 13 years old

peace

bitch fuk u i had enough of ur faggetty ass....
u couldn't make a good rhyme if half of it was eminems bitch

goo shit liked the flow

pretty basic but i was feelin it

keep it up


And can everyone peep my battle. (REALITY vs KEPS or sumthin, jus look for my name)

peace

AIIGHT ANYMORE SHIT PPL WANNA SAY BEFORE I PUT MY OTHER SONG I WROTE IN THE FORUM

it was str8

AIIGHT ANYMORE SHIT PPL WANNA SAY BEFORE I PUT MY OTHER SONG I WROTE IN THE FORUM

AIIGHT ANYMORE SHIT PPL WANNA SAY BEFORE I PUT MY OTHER SONG I WROTE IN THE FORUM

This was aiight... very basic... but pretty nice for 13. Some of the verses were choppy and made no sense... for instance...

'sometimes i thought i was neva born to include...wid the places u went to.i always hated bieng on the pedastool, always having to only talk to the people cool, not the ones who actualy enjoyed to go to school'

'always having to only talk to the people cool' makes no sense. I know what you were tryin' to say, but the words were all twisted around so the final words of the lines would rhyme... you know.. decent for 13 though like I said... Peace...

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Descent shit yung gun,shit i never knew u was 13,very good for ur age dawg.

Peace

i aint 13 i wrote it wen i was 13.....
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