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Bash vs Carcuz
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No crew votes No dick riding All Votes must be explained Due: 2morrow U spit first |
you're such a pussy makin me spit first too... How about deadline today because i know you're gonna be writin until you gotta post..
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Ok deadline 2day , Muh fucker , Spit first |
haha, i'll drop at 12... we're spittin at the same time.. Dont think you're ill............................................... ....
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I got a Lead Pencil… When I Write This Stencil Its Poison n Leads To a ‘Deadly-Drop’/
My Hits Medical N Touches Ur Heart, When Da ‘Beats’ Finished ur Lifes Already-Stopped/ So I Smacked You With Each Of Your Lines-And-Verses…Watch The Nine-Surface… To Blow A Hole Deep In Your Thorax So Your Spine-And-Nerves-could Slip-Out-Of-Ya-Cervix/ D ‘Raised The Fees’ On The ‘Bridge Of The Deceased’…Cuz I’m Increasing The ‘Death-Toll’… I'll Have Carcuz Chest-Swole…Cuz ‘I Ain't Feelin His Shit’ Like u being paralyzed in ur Leg-Hold'/ This Fag's Ribs "Treble" And his Lips are Tremble When I Provide The "Bass" To His Existence... Come From Experience…I Blaze With Persistence...Carcuz Goin Down With A "Patient Death" Like Kavorkians Assistants... That’s Factious-Play…I’ll Have Carcuz ‘Throw-The-Scales’ Cuz He’s Passed-A-Weigh...(Get it) He Dipped His Head In The Fountain-Of-Youth…Cuz He Was Hopin-For-‘Cure' To 'Age’(Courage)... Bound-To-Throw Out his Eye-Sores As I Score With Knives-Tore Down ur Spine’s-Cord Till Each Of Your Thighs-Sports A Lined-Scourged... ...................................Peace.......... ........................... |
please peep on it its bein sleept on real bad...return the favor
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=68448 |
Bash get's wrapped-up-in-plastic and tossed in the back-of-a-casket./
His neck is so snapped-into-"fractions", it takes some "math"-to-assemble-it-back-with.// My wrath? shit this rebel-can-have-it, leave his verses so hurt the devel's-ecstatic./ just watch as i level-this-faggot, i'll leave him "stuck in a hearse" like a "necro-fanatic"// (necrophilia is when people like to have sex with dead bodies) I dont do text but i'm makin-expceptions, breakin-his-neck-with my flow, bash should start takin-some-lessons./ he's a disgrace-to-this-text-shit, humiliate him at his own game... that's my blatent-objective// forced multis and wordplays? this nerd-stays clear of my PUNCHES, if he DOESN'T, he'll end up in first-aid/ his scenario?.. i believe it's the worst-case, this bastard just got "bashed" and i left him a "merked-name"// why am I ill? cuz i'm in U-T... WHy are you ill? cuz you got sick from gettin booty from an infected blond beauty./ ...and yes i know you're fruity so i'm sayin the dude you screw-be screwin other dudes in their poopie.// get-it?.. your shit-is... not even worth my minutes...i'll rip you with conviction til you're throwin-down-and-quittin./ i'm mowin-down-your-diction-with-ease, stop spittin fictionous,-please, if i were u i'd fuckin quit-in-a-breeze.// your limits-are-tweaked thinkin you can serve-me, your words-be dumber than the thought of UT merging./ and you know that's dumb when we're running-the-site...i'm comin-tonight, to murder you and your mum-in-delight.// your shit is random thoughts thrown-together while i am known-forever./ your basis is a set of "copied lines", like the "clone-endeavor".// (copied genetic code/clone, copied text) I knew that you were shitty reppin B-R-E...maybe one of them will pay your fuckin E-R-Fee/ |
OKKK breakdown Bash i liked
That’s Factious-Play…I’ll Have Carcuz ‘Throw-The-Scales’ Cuz He’s Passed-A-Weigh...(Get it) He Dipped His Head In The Fountain-Of-Youth…Cuz He Was Hopin-For-‘Cure' To 'Age’(Courage)... ^^and after that i didnt think the "newbee" would come back BUTTT Carcuz had some good lines.. liked his opener and finisher Soooo Flow- Carcuz Punches- Bash (but it was close) Wordplay - Tie Vocab- Tie Personals- Tie (both had very litte/none) But i gotta gie it to Bas because punches are more important than Flow to me PLUSS he had like half Carcuz's shit good battle can your PLEASE return tha favou here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68673 |
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whats with all the long verses lately?
bash got this because of less filler and strictly ti the point of dissing his opponent n its somethin how you can make a short verse hot |
2-0 , But ya all gotta poll vote
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their votes were wrong anyways... Vote this up people............................................ ...................
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I'ma have to vote for Bash on this one because his punches were harder in my opinion. Tight battle you two, keep it up
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"whats with all the long verses lately?
bash got this because of less filler and strictly ti the point of dissing his opponent n its somethin how you can make a short verse hot" what kind of explanation is this? our verses are almost the same length, mine just looks way longer because my lines run over a little bit... His lines are all close to running over.. you gotta vote wordplay flow punches disses vocab multis |
3-0 out of poll votes , and 1-0 poll vote
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DAMN, iight look close battle im impressed wid the little dude,,,, he came hot against a vet,,,,, ok ok look bash,,, unuseally ya grammer was off and that totally fucked ya flow,,,,, iight complexity was tight,,, vocab ill,,,,,,, punches ok,,,,,,,,,
carc,,, iight bit long bit long,,, but lets see,,, flow was in places ok but mostly off,,,,, complexity was ok ,,,,,,, punches where ok,,,,,where u loose diss battle is u talked about U far to much,,, if u aimed at bash more IMO u woulda took it,,, but such is life cat IMO bash takes it,,,,,,, also advise carc u had some,,,,, bash becareful of ya nine lines sooo played cuzz na mean,,,, dats all tight battle IMO bash the victer |
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yo, carcuz... you get it.... way harder punches and wordplay, flow was way better.. an' it made me laugh my ass off
stuck in a hearse" like a "necro-fanatic< ----- that was good yo, the multis' were pretty ill too... sorry bash, I just don't agree wit those other votes.. I think you might have some dick ryders, 'cause honestly your verse wasn't that good, your best line was "Throw-The-Scales’ Cuz He’s Passed-A-Weigh... |
yea dat was nice both ways
good punches, nice flow but i gotta say bash got it jus cuz'a da nastiness in his punches wordplay - tie flow - carcuz punches - bash disses - tie vocab - tie multis - tie Meks _________________________ "dope thoughts....... spit heron" ____________Jada_________ i.d. |
thanks for votin BLUNT
as for MEKS, take your fuckin 59 post-writin, sorry-ass battle-record-havin self out of this post... |
bash baisically got this one
no question punches flow elevation nothin else to say ^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ |
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Hey bash can you return the fav. plz.. i voted u
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68673 |
Bash left that nigga's carcus in the street, yo bash your tight dawg
vote: Bash ************************************************** ************************************************** |
HOT BATTLE, BASH HAD BETTER WORDPLAY AND FLOW
CARCUZ SHOULD HAVE KEPT CONSISTENY WITH LONG LINES VOTE-BASH NEED A FAIR VOTE: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67045 |
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