Carsonjet -v- Dezyir
 

5 barz
20 minutes
normal rules

20 minutes start now-

Yo ima hit this up when ya'll spit peep this battle make an honost vote.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2

no fuken free postin ass hole

Now...
ahem...dezyir...
WachOut mista NewbieNator-Slash-Eliter'Pre-verse Mastibator//
Posin'Artist-but TruLy a Bitch wit no Dik~but'Rides em like'a~Hata//

Postin-up lookin for "my first RB posts" in bitch-slapped//
Tryna up ta 14-witta bitch dat neva rapped-lookin like u da'bich dat need B' slapped//

ON all Numerical Levels Ur droppin single Digits While Im frontin witta Triple//
My Verse-so Phat-could Veiw it on a swivel-Ya spit-cant tremor a single ripple//

so lemme keep it simple...

I cut-slash-dash-trash-an smoke ya like a bag'a seedless hash//
Face-it ya verse ya Traced-it ur-runnin Desciples re-cycles' like of re'runs 'MASH//

Dezyir-dun deserve a shot-droppin shot's like motion-less Email-bots//
Capped Open like'2'o clock'Bar parkin Lot's~face it-Bitches...they'll neva change dere spots//

open..

how do you expect to get a win by yourself when your whole crew is afraid of Inspire?..
80 battles? shit kid, been here long as i have and its already time to retire..


no Dezyir, thats why when it comes to rap you dont have much to offer..
no thinking required, best insult to you is saying your on B.R.E.s roster!..
not even 1/2 a herb, make a compilation of Carsons battle entitle it "When Wackness Strikes"..
gonna get hurt, not a chef so you dont touch knives..not an MC either so dont touch mics..



closer..
must be a window open cause murkin this fag was a breeze,
im tired of beating these herbs...so for the next few lines ill get some z's
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i dont even need 10...good luck...


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^i know..im talking on aim and i threw a verse together....whatever i dont care..


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while we are waiting for votes hit this up Car..


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68673

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Damn this was some nice, close, heated shit
both came out hard

wordplay-Carson
punches-carson
flow-tie-
multies-carson

vote-carsonjet

cjet first two barz came hella nice....afta that your punches did'nt hit that hard and your disses were ok....your last two barz hit nicely with a good diss but did'nt carry enuff heat..

Dez had tha betta disses...and nicer punches..did'nt really come that hard but to me he landed betta...last bar of dez was a killa...

Dez gets my vote

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Breakdown:

Carson-You got to a nice start with the technicality and the punches, that shit was ahrd to udnerstand if you can't read good. I loved that triples line.

Dez-That shit was pretty hot. It was hella simple but good. You should have taken mroe lines to him, it was funny but you just fell short. The opening lines were cool.

Vote-Carson

VOTE ON THIS SHIT:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68732

OK good battle lol

Flow - Carsonjet, Dezyir yours was all over the place
Personals - Dezyir .. he is king lol
Punches - Carsonjet
Wordplay - Tie .. both weak

so Vote - Carsonjet.. .. Dez.. you need 2 work o your finishers

and Carsonjet.. You seem to think i only spit 2nd lol??? In my past 6 battles, apart from the 1 with Dezyir.. i have spit 1st.. and i would have in mine and Dez's battle but my shit crashed
anyway seein as you think like thta how about a battle? i spit 1st/.. you have 10 minutes 2 spit after me?

every time i battle u its controversial-i dont need it~u beat me twice when it should only have been once-not a big deal i jus dotn feel like dealin wit it again~thanx fer vote~

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carson had a good flowin verse wit nice multies n all but desyir had personal hitin punches that were way better compared to a multi n e day

easy vote desyir dont u hate when newbs see a flashy verse and thinks is dope?

yea i betcha do ;)

please peep

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67873

yes. *wonders who illseed is* hmmm....


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This battle was def. heated

Both had hot shit
But carson edged him out a lil with better dissing and wordplay

tight fuckin battle guys

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67848

^^^ please vote here for me voting on your battle!

carsonjet-

- pretty good intro.. but you tried too hard on that multi
- okay follow up... but you rhymed slapped with slapped. be more creative

I cut-slash-dash-trash-an smoke ya like a bag'a seedless hash//

^^^ all hash is seedless man... lol. and that is not a good line... just cuz it rhymes dont make it hot.

- not that great of a closer... some of your shit i didnt understand! not bad though..

Dezyir-

- good opener... nice personal diss
- second bar tried to be a good personal diss... not bad
- good flow... nice attempts at good personals again. good work
- pretty good closer... you had good consistancy throughout the entire verse but all of your punches were just above soft.


Vote: Dezyir because he had more personal disses... and thats what battles are about. dissin. not flow

^^quite honestly the best votin explanation i seen on RB yet...
i wish everyone put this much time n effort into explainin there vote
*including myself...

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Thank you ... i try to be a good voter and try to offer advice rather then just say who won! i like to try and help people elevate.

peace out man :)

both yall had sum hard verses

but carson to me still got dis hard punches and nice flow

hit dis up wit an honest vote
i'm winnin 4-1
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69153