datzecho vs ~JacK ThA RippA~
 

check in and spit nigga

ait, give me a minute, ill spit first............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .

echo..........
I blow holes, especially when im holding da four fith
im in control,, when I battle this dipshit

Loss ya soul,, not even God can save you
the tools I hold,, a dirty tech when I blazed you

Twin nine,,shellz smacked across ya facial
big dimes,, hit the block when my hustles graceful

Hot lines,,why my name stayz up in ya mouth
talk shit,,I slip an AK up in ya mouth

bust quick,,NO,,I wont even pull da trigga
stomp u out,,have u spitten up all ya liquor

public places,,meet me face to face if you raw
you forced to take a loss from the boss a C4

Finisher

battlin fake killaz always been my duty
so go tell ya boys you got beat by a newby...

one..

Not bad for a newb, aight I'm gonna spit my shit in about an hour, goin to lunch now
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An hour, thats mad grimy, that gives you mad time to write, I wrote in ten minutes........10 minutes.............an hour............damn dog...

Working in brooklyn I know that you do, I don't even got a job and I get paid more then you do, manipulatein your every move with voodoo, you feelin shootin pains through your veins, as your fuckin your uncle lou, stickin your dick in a jar from a couple hundred yards while your hard, you rhyme like a retard, can't even spit 1 ~bar~

I dare not quit, I spit quick and screw you over like B. Rabbit did to lickety split, it was writ in a hyrogliphic that a dope nigga would talk shit about a white boy with a dry tounge who couldn't spit, playin ya like an electric guitar riff, get outta hear with that prewritten shit, for I fuck you up the prick, little maggot ~bitch~

As I retort, I'm gettin bored rappin gainst a whore whos still stuck to his momma's imbillical chord, you roar as I'm hittin you with punches galor, not only did you bite but I think you swallowed your hole verse, from a bitch that I threw in a herse, not even god can save ya don't even bother goin to the ~church~

You should have digressed, your left with a split in your chest as I leave my merk on your breast, you probably got a mexican to make you like Tyson chicken's buisness, should have wore a bullet proof vest, but that wouldn't even put you to rest, cause my music is full of 16th notes aint no room for an eigth ~rest~

Wow your momma just ate you out, not with a fork or a spoon she used a spork, she invted me to join but I said keep that room for 2 to your dad cause I'm sick of him suckin my long hard broom, Your fucked up and crude, I don't mean to elude but when your rhymein agaisnt me, hell your not even ~rude~

I'll now and your torture, don't worry you'll be your mom's new boyfriend when your daddy divorce her, now I'll empty your brain of all thoughts, it'll just be a big blur, opps I think I unplugged the wrong thing, you weren't suppose to hit the floor with a big splat, shit it's too late you've been ~purged~

Lol dat I just got back from lunc I wrote my verse in about 5 minutes dawg uppin
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you wrote for an hr, but still didnt eat me, bite off my lines, and Im still the better man............................................... .................................................. ............................good shit though, lol

please people, when u vote, be honest, just cuz he wrote mad lines dont mean the lines were better.................
and im up to battle anybody else who wants to see me in rap.

Thats right vote to who you thought was better honestly,yo dat you'll get better your a good newb dawg

thanks, but you ca call me EcHo............my log in is datz echo............... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$%%%%% %%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%

You should have digressed, your left with a split in your chest as I leave my merk on your breast, you probably got a mexican to make you like Tyson chicken's buisness, should have wore a bullet proof vest, but that wouldn't even put you to rest, cause my music is full of 16th notes aint no room for an eigth ~rest~

Theres a typo in there its:
wouldn't even stop me from putin ya to rest, NOT that wouldn't even put ya to rest

some good shit

if o could vote it would go to jack tha ripper!!!!!!!!!!
i loved this verse
As I retort, I'm gettin bored rappin gainst a whore whos still stuck to his momma's imbillical chord, you roar as I'm hittin you with punches galor, not only did you bite but I think you swallowed your hole verse, from a bitch that I threw in a herse, not even god can save ya don't even bother goin to the ~church~

You like bitting, huh............................................... ....................................good thing you cant vote, cause your opinion iz a waste.

jack da rippa won this one wit his overall verse datzecho came close >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Ben you didn't poll vote nigga UPPIN
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Never mind you did sorry bout that shit
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iz it me, or do people see a long verse and think itz better. I write small simple verses so that people can vibe wit da tempo.......wheres the vibe from his verse????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????/

Echo man don't be hatein dawg its just da net nigga, I think your good don't fret on dis shit man.....................................

I feel you son, but nobody understands that this is how I write, no offence to you my nigga.......I juz feel my verse was better.....I battle niggaz all day face to face, this iz fa practice.

^ You obviously need more practice.

Echo - Your verse was MAD simple. No complex punches thrown, no creativity. . All played shit. Nothing stood out. . The flow was decent though.

Jack - Your shit was pretty long. . And had some average punches thrown in there. You also had some played lines, but you were more creative than Echo. Flow was lost at times, but it was cool. .

votejacktherippa

I hear that, I did write simple, so why dont you try and battle me?



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I dont read dictionaries when I write............................................. .................................................. ...............

If you really want to battle me, go ahead and set it up.

I thought joka had better flow and dissing as well as use of wordplay

good battle but im a give joka the uppa hand here


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68371

Uppin
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I mean jack the rippa
whythe fuck did i put joka here

der im toos toned


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68681

Yo hit this one up too Rippa

uppin
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rippa got it his was better in every way shape or form

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jack the rippa
 

vote for me on my shit and i got u yung hustla so get back at me on that so this cat can be done wit holla at ya boi

word^^^^