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XL4REAL vs ~JacK ThA RippA~
10 lines max
No recycling No Feedin No Hater/Dick ryder/crew votes You spit first so check in and spit |
yo yo im checkin in dawg.............................................. .........................................im at work so gotta rhyme inbetween, im a spit now doh!!!!!
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Simple opener!
This guy thinks he's a famous mass murderer. 1 But as a rapper they say..... I never heard a ya. 2 Jack The Ripper prays on whores and strippers every night. 3 Cuz there the only girls he can get which dont put up a fight. 4 Bringing out da skill! Hes a reject from a workmans line, unable to pass the QC guy. 5(QC-quality control) Cuz his lines dont fill my skills specifications, im sending you back for re-evaluation. 6 Cuz your style and ya tactics, are wack as geeky star treck fanatics. 7 Your fronting wearing a good rappers mask, thinkin youd win... when you set this task. 8 Finish Him! Get Over Here so I can sting you like Scorpians tail, leave you cold like Sub-Zero as in Mortal Combat you fail. 9 You thinking your tough, i'll leave you stuck like Kane cuz I'll electrify you like Rayden leaving you lyricaly drained. 10 A wack verse but hey........ |
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Yo jack where the fuck you at, you off the site pre-writing so you can get a good rap?????
I seen you looking when I checked in who's online, so I was expecting to check this battle and see your rhyme? So why'd you log off, where the fuck did you go, yo I hope not a pussy so scared your a no show? Yo spit it son dun takea too longa ok!!!!!! |
Fightin verse a whack vet, age is 25, even when he was 13 he couldn't get inta the fly honeies hive, finally 12 years later he got a women but the sad part is he still gotta bribe, he aint got no vibe or rhymes everything I say about him he probably says "word" you should change the font above spida man from vet to "WHACK ~HERB~"
you rap with no punches or flow, to bad I didn't go first cause you woulda got choked, your implicit, I'm explicit, strait and plain I spit it, your heads so far up your moms clit you can't even dish it, your spida man's about to meet my king pin, stop lickin, your mom said she wants to stick her prick in your dick's ~en'd~ I'm remixin ya like coke did to sprite, but no matter how many times I change your brain cell's you still don't come out right, you still bite and don't put up a fight, your just a perilous white herb against your plight, I came by to unleash a blight, whats scarin me the most is how you stare at your daddy drollin when he's in his tights and you keep mutterin "so ~rype~..." Like an elipsis your whackness is infinit, time to blitz this and make an eclipse to rip the space time continuit, you spit pellets compared to bullets, deep down inside you know everything you say is just full of it, this is like an ancient egyiption myth, bout a rippa who killed an albino chick, that usta have a dick, but in reality its XL4REAL that is a ~myth~ last line I right before this merk, your raps are more boring then when steve ercal (sp?) was talkin about his birth, when you rap you go balistically gesticulate, you think its gonna help cover up those crappy rhymes you spit, well I gotta go, while your waitin for the votes go brib your bitch for a ~dick~ |
sorry bout the wait XL was eatin lunch nigga
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You are a fucking cheating twat, for a start you went offline then as soon as you come back on ya verse appears in like 10 secs, its so obvious its disgusting, plus your own rules state 10 lines max, I dunno if you cant read but is your shit 10 lins max, no...............
If I could get this closed I would man...... |
Dude wtf I wa sonline that whole time not offline and I'm not cheating I don't know what the fuck is wrong with you and I said 10 lines MAX! its fair dude and my lines maybe long but there is 5 lines there my lines are always long man I never said a line had a limit so this battle is fair and it is still on
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man you cant tell me you were online, I looked in who's online and you were gone, maybe online but not in here!!!!!!!!!!and you aint got ten lines man, with ya structure its hard to know where your lines start and finish.....
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Dude I have 5 lines, I said 10 max not min 10 max 10, and I wa sonline man I left my comp on when I went out to lunch I came back and spit for 5 min, and don't be swayin the votes by dissin my structure.
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Uppin
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either way
it says im offline but im not so shut the fuck up x4 real i dont think that was a pre- anyways Jack got merked here his shit was real basic the first line was weak and i almost didnt get it till i read the thing 5 fuckin times x4real gets my vote for worpdlay and dissing Jack lenghten ya lines better and people wont bitch |
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Ya I know I sucked this battle I was prety basic, oh wel lookin for honest votes niggas
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xl4real got dis, we had betta werd play and punches, and flow, jack just didnt come hard enough
vote-xl4real a-yo, can either of u hit dis up? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69103 |
apart from you two actin like a couple of bitchs>>>>>>>>>
it wasnt to bad both had some funny shit but>>>>>>>>>>>>> XL4REAL would get my vote but i cant vote >>>>>>> so fuck it who cares??????????????????? |
uppin this guys...........vote on this fair like................................yo jack I was bitchin b4 hand man, forgive me its just everyone is cheatin on here lately it seems, im fed up with it......
Uppin uppin |
I think that x4real won this battle because he had more punches, a better layout and didn't talk about the playd topics as much
Good battle, I guess return the favor and vote for someone on this battle please... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68322 |
its aight XL I know how you feel, man I really sucked this battle :\
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ok uppin this give me da votes and remeber to poll cuz my vota's have forgotten......................................... .................................................. ......................vote.......
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hey I just poll voted on this battle, can you hit my battle up at
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68322 |
uppin dis come y'all vote it up.............................................
two of ya voted but didnt poll so dont forget to poll ok kids 4real..... Uppin honest votes returned.... |
uppin dis honest votes returned.......................................... .............................vote this up so I can battle again............................................. .........uppin uppin
VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
this battles simple.. jack, ya didn't come hard enough.. Xl gets my vote..
Vote - XL4REAL return tha favor!!!!!!!!! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2873#post662873 |
xl4real won this one cause his flow is betta and his punchlines are betta and thats what wins battles
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Some real basic stuff here...
XL spit like he should have... Kinda mild, but at least it brought meaning and punch. Jack came with alot, a whole lot of filler and it really bogged down his rhyme. Shorten up, make ya punches more effective by cutting to the chase...alot like boxing, your punches will land more effectively if they come straight forward. |
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