Krimzen VS Blacksash
 

10 linez
no dr
no hate
no crew
no feed
bitin, all dat shit u no.........

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u spit first..............
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Rap:

Look Every one we got a crimzon killia/you got killa instink runnin in your family yours mums a Alfpha male Gorrilla/

She`s also a ben stiller jackoff/she gonna be fistin her gash till you fuck off/

Your head swells with envy when you here ill lyrics/maybe cus you be losin your hair tryin to find a decent bite material lyric/

you so used to rejection after you entered a sean paul look a like compition/cus you turned up as that peado from ignition

all these wanksters comin now you be head of the roster/signin the pertition to surrport pube fur

your bitch be martin basherr/you in his new documentry about pleadin for beer

money you want some?/fuck off go get fisted by your mum

my lyrics will make you go crazy/go get rejected another 100th time by Dre and shady

you aids infected ball of shit/your mums callin you now she wants some Hiv in her clit

dats 10 bars 20 lines but o well ill spit now...................
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BlackSash like cas$, spits like he been smoking too much 'Grass'//
I ought ta 'Weed' this Herb an give him a bootin on tha 'as$'//

Ya could lick ma 'cocaine' coated balls and still wouldn't 'Police'-me(please me)//
Your a fake emcee, now ama give you lyrical 'cancer' like 'marie curie'//

Your rhymes contain no multies, nor any punches kid, all of ya sets is redundant//
The only way this kid'll ever be 'full-of-punches' is when my fists 'connect-with-his-stomach'//

I dont fuck wit "fags", ya raps is lyk a "old bitchs tits" dey "sag"//
I drop "bombs" lyk planes in "Bahgdad", and da "Mafia" wit "body bags"

You wack infact u must just be "holding back" like huggin when "trinas friends~over//
you even call yourself gay, you must only "Fuck up" rappers with names like Ben~Dover//

aight lets get some votez............
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Krmson got this black sash shoulda cam a lil harder

Krimson had better dissing and strucuture to his wordplay


Both had good lines just krimsons hit more


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69100


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68969

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vote-krimzen

better verse overall.....every aspect goes to him....iight battle
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werdplay-killa----|
flow-killa----------+------K.O.
punches-killa-----|
metas-killa---------|

just a betta verse tite battle tho


vote-killa

aight thx fo feedback............
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Easy win I think by Krimzen...
Just better everything.
Flow, harder punches, wordplay, metas.

Blacksash...
Ya need ta change that format and use some complexity here and there.
Some of ya punches were good, but it was like ya were just saying them...without any rap at all...
And ya rhyme scheme needs work...
In one bar, ya rhymed lyric with itself...
Not much though there, dude.

Elevate

Winner: Krimzen

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Vote up, please...

Blacksash had some good shit for a change, much betta man but crimson took it just becuase he got more experience though....betta multis and wordplay and flow. I think blacksash had harder hits though....

I vote crimson....

Yo you forgot to poll on my battle with jack tha ripper dude and I have a new one with emcee abilities if you guys wanna check it.....