create vs payable
 

sorry but this is the right one here is my same verse

man this is a battle so get off ya boyfriends "dick"/
by the looks of it your rappin like a "chick"/
maybe rapbattles wasnt such a good idea fuck "face"/
cause gay femcees like you are out of "place"/
so get the fuck outta my "face"/
cause when i rap weak shit it hits you like "mace"/
its like a hot pursuit and you got a shitty "car"/
your slow and fucked rhymes are no where near me my by "far"/
you'll be short on breathe when ya facin payable on "death"/
cause my ill shit rhymes will leave you a "mess"/

alright dont feed

Dawg i'd pay you to die but your already suicidal/
You got banned from the real world so you're here outta denial

Your payable on death, but you forgot to pay for your meth/
Now ill "CrEaTe a story bout how you humped kobe's bitch and then "left"

Man even your prewrites suck "shit" and your spirit gonna get sank/
Your like a sucker "fish", but you could never get tanks/ (tits, boobs etc.. sucker fish clean tanks including fishes shit)

Seriously man you need better wordplay/
you put me to sleep faster then shakephere plays/
now that was a prewrite 'cause im not "gay", not to mention a chick/
seems like ur da one who has been suckin the dicks

You think your dope but you cant even set-a-battle-up-right/
Either your stupid as fuck or as high as a kite

^^worst ever cant think of anything anyways vote on this plz peeps

ok that was feeding man......w/e though..............votes..............votes...... .......uppin......

line 8 near the end is actually mine instead of my and me....i fucked up on that..........................

its the advantage of goin 2nd....plus you woulda got merked anyway cuz u suck....uppin...........................

upping......if you look at this vote on it and drop a link to your battle and ill give u my opinion....thx

uppin..................................uppin...... ..................................................

uppin 3rd time....vote on this thx
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i give this to payable simply bcoz create fed off payables verse, that is fuckin wack........p'z................................... ........................

thanks phix.........................more votes.................uppin... .......uppin....................

um yea DONT FEED thats the point when your going 2nd your not supposed 2

well anyway you still got my vote cuz other cat was preety shitty


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ighlight=spirit
^vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69293

^hit it up

dis battle was one sided both u newbs suked
but i thoguht create took it
harder disses...weak battle elevate newbs u got potential one does atleasy

by the way i voted for you instead of payable because your new and shit happens when your new

just dont do that shit again

yehh this was weak...with the feedin...but i gotta vote 4 the betta verse..which was create..had betta wrdplay and punches...vote=create...111

uppin for votes need 2 more.....thx...................................... .................................................. .....

i think Create got this one, ok for a newb battle
watch the feedin next time, you will lose respect for feedin
but anyway
everything was pretty even but think Create had a little better
flow and structure
therefore vote=Create

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67848

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PayableOnDeath-

-good rhyming intro and kinda soft punch
-good rhyming again but soft punches
-not that great closer... needs to punch harder

$$CrEaTe$$-

-okay intro... not a really hard diss though
-nice attempt at wordplay
-not great ending... need to punch harder too!!!

Vote: Create cuz his verse was more like a battle verse...