SwiF'][' vs ~JacK ThA RippA~
 

check in and spit first

I'll spit in a few
20 lines max aight or i aint battlin
no feedin

ill spit soon peace out............................................... ...................................

hurry it up and spit man I gotta go to work soon
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Violent like a villan im dishin Severe Concusions/
Ya dome is crushin, Im splittin wigz like Combs and Brushes/
(wigz means fake gangster)
Carefull son cuz ya talent is down the drain whenever the
Toilet Flushes/! (SHIT!)

Choke? not Swift, I love to spit so I'll Bust ya Quick spillin ur guts N shit/
Fuck this bitch, Jacks the biggest assHole, I guess my dick is a Custom Fit/! (think about it)

Meta equiped wit Syringes, intentionally burnin ya set/
Puttin more needles in this cat than a fuckin Emergency Vet!/
Have u learnt yet? These metas r Turnin ya neck/
Im treatin Jack like a ball at a dunk contest, Slammin this bitch all over the net!/ (internet)

Son u surpass the sheep, ur Nursery Rhymes are tattered and weak, puttin me fast asleep/
My foots on the gas of the jeep, chasin ur ass till I crash as I smash this bitch all over the street/

I give you the cold shoulder only cuz my surface is as rough as glaciers/
Going against me, you've dug ya own grave like suicidal undertakers/

I'll curse ya soul, basically eatin ur verse whole/
Jackies screamin for help like n' old lady who jus got her purse stole!/
Hey, It coulda been worse though, and Listen, I wouldnt be callin You Son if ur mom had taken her Birth Control!/

Get real why you think you can beat me wit these neat rhymes, when your simple ass still uses de-feat lines/
I’ll have u beat, please, I peep a played punch in each line, i'll use ur head to skate n’ then make ya fuckin teeth grind/ !

U can feel the tension but still cant even cut it/
Who the fuck cares about U, we all know ur fuckin sKills are Low Budget...............



uppin..............

Violent like a villan im dishin Severe Concusions/
Ya dome is crushin, Im splittin wigz like Combs and Brushes/
(wigz means fake gangster)
Carefull son cuz ya talent is down the drain whenever the
Toilet Flushes/! (SHIT!)

Yur bars guna be played, plus you portray a gay image like homosexual painters/
Witness ur death,this queer ain't gay, dawg you must contradict yourself like fat fitness trainers/

Choke? not Swift, I love to spit so I'll Bust ya Quick spillin ur guts N shit/
Fuck this bitch, Jacks the biggest assHole, I guess my dick is a Custom Fit/! (think about it)

Meta equiped wit Syringes, intentionally burnin ya set/
Puttin more needles in this cat than a fuckin Emergency Vet!/
Have u learnt yet? These metas r Turnin ya neck/
Im treatin Jack like a ball at a dunk contest, Slammin this bitch all over the net!/ (internet)

Son u surpass the sheep, ur Nursery Rhymes are tattered and weak, puttin me fast asleep/
My foots on the gas of the jeep, chasin ur ass till I crash as I smash this bitch all over the street/

I give you the cold shoulder only cuz my surface is as rough as glaciers/
Going against me, you've dug ya own grave like suicidal undertakers/

I'll curse ya soul, basically eatin ur verse whole/
Jackies screamin for help like n' old lady who jus got her purse stole!/
Hey, It coulda been worse though, and Listen, I wouldnt be callin You Son if ur mom had taken her Birth Control!/

Get real why you think you can beat me wit these neat rhymes, when your simple ass still uses de-feat lines/
I’ll have u beat, please, I peep a played punch in each line, i'll use ur head to skate n’ then make ya fuckin teeth grind/ !

U can feel the tension but still cant even cut it/
Who the fuck cares about U, we all know ur fuckin sKills are Low Budget...............



uppin..............

I mighta went over 20 lines, but just match wut ever extra i put by accident.......................................... .................................................. ................

whyd you at two lines?
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would somebody vote on the d-mecca and rappad battle and ill vote on your guys's battle aight niggas holla front1

ill give my opinion when jack goes....could you please hit this battle up..............
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69994

Why did I waht two lines?

add 2 lines?

Cus man when I write in this box im writin in right now everythin comes out different wen I post, so i can never be sure its fucked.

Anyway did u like the verse?

can ya'll peep this wit honest votes, thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9590#post669590

You think your lyrically swift? more like lyrically dicked, your lines are played on more then pamela anderson's tits, take a swig an sit maybe when your drunk you'll rap better den dat shit, even if I gave you a "present" of rhymes, you still wouldn't have the ~"gift"~

I'll have you arreasted for exotortion, your just an accident your mom should have had an abortion, you knew when you started my retorting would be more of a bitch then you fucken judge judy on her court thing, just listen to a tape of your self to hear how I ripped you gorey, your mission's impossible, so you better ~abort~

Drowning you in hydrochloric acid, your raps a rancid like bean's coming out your ass kid in the form of gas and shit, I've been blown on more then a maste of a ship in the old age, for you to get your jollies off you gotta masturbate and masticate, your own dick you rape, maybe thats why when I kicked you you didn't feel it, you got balls the size of ~grapes!~

You don't even live near the hood and you think your a thug who raps and spits real good, news flash your 83, and white and swiftly sayin you should have would have and could have, save it bitch, rhymes are more bouncy then a trip on a river raft, stepin in this battle wasa huge trap winning a gains't me is more risky then winning at ~craps~

This battle was a waste of time, your not even up to "par" with any of my lines, your a filty peice of grime, rhymin shit and actin like your shy, can't even get a girl if she was a fat swine, even the blind can see through you like you were in old fogey, your just sittin their and got no homies, in this rap you got a double ~bogey~

I think I really should maudlin though, I got something to tell you before you go, your rhymes are weaker then a nursery rhyme so, row row row your boat gentaly down the stream, meet my ship, you've just been dropped like a break, your life was is now just a ~dream~

change 83 to 11 I don't know why I said 83 :\
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WOW this was a tiggghtt battle....too close to call
Swifty that was pretty nice considering the number of voted u have too.....good luck to both of ya.........

ugh in the last line its brick not break :\
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thats aight

ok Im uppin votes ppl............................................... ..........................pretty nice spit jack............UPPIN............

Any1 who visits this, can ya'll peep this wit an honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69945

thanks peace out

hot battle yo

i think jack got this by werdplay and punches

swift u was good too

no beef vote

vote=jack

Word that was dope battle.
Props Swift
but my votes goin to jack on this one.

Uppin
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Uppin come on nigga's
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uppin............................................. ........................................can we get sum ppl who no wut they talkin about ot vote..........

Honestly this sites always voted for the ppl who've been around the longest, i aint complainin, but its fuckin true

The higher ur stats r, the more votes u get,


o well still uppin.............................................

swifts got dis hands down metas multies and erything. multies are defining points and he had lots and used em wit nice punch's so he got ma vote. but it was pritty close cuz jaack had good structure and vocab. but id have to give it to swift. return the favors on am baattles both of u....http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9814#post669814 <<obvious

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...11&pagenumber=2 <<<*cough* obvious lol

and swift i agree with you peep ma battles...u'll c same shyt.... just cuz were .newbs. they think we cant acomplish shyt...they just vote for the ppl with the most posts so they can get a poll vote in return witch is bull shyt!!

yea true that Im sick of it, they dont even read the battles they just look at the points its fuckin stupid

uppin,...............i'll vote on urs in a sec............................................... ......

VOTES.....................ACTUALLY RED THE BATTLES AND DONT FUCKIN DICK RIDE..................DONT VOTE FOR THE PERSON WIT THE HIGHEST STATS LIKE THIS SIT LOVES TO DO!>.....

Right here we go

Jack Tha Rippa

Nice Opener liked it hit hard but after that you kinda went downhill with punches, flow etc. once you hit hard with an opener you've to follow it up with some lines of the same quility

Overall- 6/10

Swift

Nice overall verse i liked Jacks opener more than most of your lines but you were the more consistant of the two the flow never really went off i liked the complexness (if thats a word) of your verse made you wanna bounce to it more

Overall- 8.2/10

Vote- Swift

coo coo

we stil need voted ppl

and please read the entire battle and dont vote for the guy wit the higher stats once again............................................. ....................

Swift stop bitching and let the people vote man don't worry your a tight battler
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w/e i just dont like ppl votin like that

anyway

Rippa can ya peep this while we waitin

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69945

uppen for votes
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Can ya'll start votin

and read my ENTIRE verse dont dick ryde

thanks............................................ ...............................

Can ya'll start votin

and read my ENTIRE verse dont dick ryde

thanks............................................ ...............................!!!!!!!///////////////////////////////////////

wtf is this :\ uppin
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vote swift
beter flows and overall
hit this up
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...0217#post670217
please

YO IF I SEE YOU VOTE ON THAT BATTLE HE JUST PUT... N VOTED FO HIM... FO SOME WHACK REASON.. YOU ARE D/R... HE HAS CATS VOTE FO HIM LIKE CRAZY SO PLEASE DON'T BE ANOTHER

thanks fo the honest votes

keep em comin............................................. ..........................................

can we get um votes............................................. .................................................. ............

Dog I aint haven nobody vote for me U can check I didnt even look at the batlte he wanted me to peep

fuckin chill

we need.............................................. ..........................

that iz some thight ass shit yo!!!!!!!



vote..............SWIFT.................better punches and flow yo!

jack had some nice shit too but he messed lots of it up(must b stoned or somethink) but like a said.....he waz slightly better!!!