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13th Disciple 08-01-03 10:29 PM

W-ILL Farr-ILL (dezyir) Regime vs FeebleMinded UT
 
okay...no crew votes..no dick ryding...only explained votes......
15-20lines max....no swaying....no newb votes....verses due
august 3rd....no later......lets do it......good luck.....1.

Dez 08-01-03 11:07 PM

check check.

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13th Disciple 08-03-03 05:18 PM

deadline is tonight.......w-ILL drop ur verse even if this cat no
shows.....cuz by tonight if he doesn't drop or show....it'll be
considered a win.....NO EXTENSIONS!....peep the rulez.......1

Dez 08-03-03 07:06 PM

will do...ill drop just before midnight to give him a chance..


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Dez 08-04-03 01:01 AM

midnight Eastern time...


Feeble is
Feeble
thats why he no showed,
i cant believe im even wasting on no show verse
on this ho

13th Disciple 08-04-03 01:23 AM

and there it is........don't bother postin a verse....its like the
rulez in LLL......a no show...is considered a loss.........................1






*yall got until 3:00am Western Time.....3 1/2 hours.....hope u
can meet the deadline........*

Feeble Minded. 08-04-03 04:22 AM

I DID SAY ID BE HERE MONDAY OVR AIM.
IM HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AND ID NEVER NO SHOW, WAT U THINK IM SCARED???

CHECKIN IN.............

Feeble Minded. 08-04-03 05:54 AM

yo. .
i rep U.T. & it'd take a tight crew to rise-n-beat-us//
but i heard ur sumthin special. .in the eyes of Jesus!//
im gonna eat this herb like vegetarian spices//
unless ya flows generous& kind then mine's the nicest!//
your shit to me, so do what you need-to//
cuz im nothing. . and none can beat-you!//
MEMO. . ya punches is played, future in rap is dim-yo//
& its no small feat. .ya bars is longer than stretch limos!//
& ya rap couldnt get props in the Church-of-Jesus!//
now they a bag of letters. .ya words is needed!//
he fought for the last word. . & took the bag from my hand!// 11
5 votes is needed. . & he cant meet the product demand!//
find his brain. . cuz this kids losin his mind//
if he cant see me winning hes stupid and blind//
he's ill? must have a cold. . in fact he's diseased!//
verbally raping the regime like a knack to be priest!//
all their verses are just a slew of shit!//
im surprised they aint through and chrit (quit)!// (chrits in their crew)
this is like a george bush speech. . "the regime has fallen"//
them winnin is a long way away like a 1-800 number calling!//

explained lines:
line 11. .is referring to the line above it when i say "the bag"
thats it..

and uh theres no quotes on either of our verses and shit
punches are there. if u dont see the punches in our verses ur dumb as fuck and most likely a newb.


and thats. . word^^

Dez 08-04-03 05:55 AM

caught me totally off gaurd with you showing up...


**keyed**



stretched bar style is old kid,trust me it wont get you far,
only category you surpass me in..is the length of your bars,
take it to heart..not my lines but the sword in your avatar,
cause your rhymes just dont fit here, like 4 feet in a yard,
act hard but youre soft,can never merk crews..you arnt dope,
give up, you cant hang with me..but heres a noose for hope,
learn to cope with the fact that theyll never be an FM video,
in fact,only time anyone feels anything by FM,is on the radio,
standing O,at least this kid tried but hes still just a bitch,
UT is still unrespected...those homos are still unestablished,

Dez 08-04-03 05:59 AM

you didnt come with that stretched shit like usual...bah


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Mystery~murdera 08-04-03 11:38 PM

Quote:
your shit to me, so do what you need-to//
cuz im nothing. . and none can beat-you!//
feebles only good line...

this whole battle was Wills cuz he had dope ass wordplay in every line, great flow, smooth multis. Easily

vote - W-Ill

billy 08-04-03 11:57 PM

stretched bar style is old kid,trust me it wont get you far,
only category you surpass me in..is the length of your bars,



nice beginner




basically wut mystery said covered it........

my vote- wills

Violent~Wordz 08-05-03 01:08 AM

^^Agree..

Vote = W-ILL

Oh..Feeble Minded...Wasnt Like Ur Otha Verses..But Newayz..
No Biggy...W-ILL..First Bar Was Betta Than Nething Feeble Spit Out....No Need To Explain Just Read The B.V's..


~UnO~

Feeble Minded. 08-05-03 03:34 AM

ok.
my old style was better?
i shouldnt have tried a new style in a crew batle...
watever ill get ya back in a rematch :)

but still votin yall..........

Wi11y Na$D@Q 08-05-03 07:05 AM

i agree with the others on this 1


vote- will

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PlaGuE2 08-05-03 07:13 AM

Punches.. W-Ill Farr-Ill
Personals.. Feeble
Flow.. W-Ill Farr-Ill
Multis/Metas.. W-Ill Farr-Ill
Creativity.. W-Ill Farr-Ill
WordPlay.. W-Ill Farr-Ill

Sorry Feeble... But He Came Out On Top Bro..

Dez 08-05-03 05:06 PM

up


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Dez 08-06-03 07:51 AM

up nuccas...


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Dez 08-07-03 05:02 AM

up.



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AMEND 08-07-03 02:02 PM

Feeble Minded
i rep U.T. & it'd take a tight crew to rise-n-beat-us//
but i heard ur sumthin special. .in the eyes of Jesus!//
1st ok, 2nd played but hit a lil
im gonna eat this herb like vegetarian spices//
unless ya flows generous& kind then mine's the nicest!//
1st blah. 2nd wasnt feelin
your shit to me, so do what you need-to//
cuz im nothing. . and none can beat-you!//
1st blah, 2nd could of hit ALOT harder
MEMO. . ya punches is played, future in rap is dim-yo//
& its no small feat. .ya bars is longer than stretch limos!//
all of it was blah
& ya rap couldnt get props in the Church-of-Jesus!//
now they a bag of letters. .ya words is needed!//
this wasnt good, didnt hit at all
he fought for the last word. . & took the bag from my hand!// 11
5 votes is needed. . & he cant meet the product demand!//
1st blah, 2nd almost hit but no
find his brain. . cuz this kids losin his mind//
if he cant see me winning hes stupid and blind//
atleast better then the last 2 lines
he's ill? must have a cold. . in fact he's diseased!//
verbally raping the regime like a knack to be priest!//
1st played, 2nd didnt hit
all their verses are just a slew of shit!//
im surprised they aint through and chrit (quit)!// (chrits in their crew)
uh, NO
this is like a george bush speech. . "the regime has fallen"//
them winnin is a long way away like a 1-800 number calling!//
wak for the last 2


W.F.
stretched bar style is old kid,trust me it wont get you far,
only category you surpass me in..is the length of your bars,
1st was blah, 2nd was very true[b]
take it to heart..not my lines but the sword in your avatar,
cause your rhymes just dont fit here, like 4 feet in a yard,
[b]uh kinda hit, coulda been better

act hard but youre soft,can never merk crews..you arnt dope,
give up, you cant hang with me..but heres a noose for hope,
1st personal, 2nd was kinda humorous
learn to cope with the fact that theyll never be an FM video,
in fact,only time anyone feels anything by FM,is on the radio,
i didnt really get this, but almost a personal
standing O,at least this kid tried but hes still just a bitch,
UT is still unrespected...those homos are still unestablished,
1st blah, 2nd was ok


OVERALL
Feeble Minded Came Descent In The First Half Of His Verse, But Then It Went From One Played And Badly Worded Concept To The Other. W-ill Really Didnt Have Much To Counter Feeble's With But What I Did Notice Was His Hit Just As Hard And Had Less Bars. BY FAR. And Im Still A Quality Over Quanity Guy So VOTE W-ill


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