Right thurr...(Girl remix)
 

(Got the usual talkin in the beginning....)

Make us say oooh...oooh...oooh..oooh We do what we.do./

I really like to do it right thurr/(right thurr)
Shake my ass,like i,don't even curr/(even curr)
I really like to do it right thurr/(right thurr)
I got my gems,hair done,i got my furr/(got my furr)

Take me to the club,start feelin on my booty/
Taking off my shirt,Rubbing,juss to get through me/
The type of guy,just to Leave u, at the movies/
He'll kiss u just ta,get close,to those rubies/

(i'm not done yet,but that's what i got so far)
Tell me what ya think....
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sorry im not feelin it at all...

hahahahahahaha....THIS WAS WHACK.........What da fuck was this............Simplistic lyrics shit........This is a hardcore site...this aint no mainstream shit............

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Whatever everyone has their opinion...I got extremely bored..prolly cause dashowstoppa2 didn't post that battle i agreed to last night.....shrugg*

That was tha gayest lyrics i ever herd in my life!

Mic

I know....It was a fuckin joke.Are you ppl that stupid....come on

It's obvious you only said that because you had no other way to cover up your "screwed" Wanna-be gangtsa girl B.S...you have no talent and you suck.Don't ever come back to this site again......Or I'll tear you apart...hehehe

nah..no good

Well.. um... this shit dont matter to me cause i dont even take this shit seriously. So dont let these ppl get to ya. I know u was bored and all but u can make sumthin better. Just try again.

Shut up.

wow your mad nice, you got mad talent, crazy talent

Lol..Yeah this piece deserves too be in R-B Legend

well im not a hater but not the legents maybe da closed section naw jk it was aight i aint a hata but it was aight it rhymed

You ppl are straight up fuckfaces......
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dude back off....she was just foolin round.....I could kick yo sorry ass anyday bitch.....lets go rightn ow......

but you do need to come up wit some better shit...it was pretty whack......but its ight.....

This sucked

dont mean to sound like an asshole

But why post this it wasnt even funny


This is absolute garbage

AND THAT SONG KIND OF SUCKS

I hate that Thurr hurr shit its fuckin wack

AGreed....I can't even hear that shit now DAmn you.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

why must u be a bitch, i mean it wasnt the greatest thing i have ever seen yet alone one of the good things ive seen but why do u constantly put her down, shouldnt u be like tryna writing something to proove that u can write better then her. So good luck with all yo stuff and much respect even if u did are jus jokin around, and to carmine dont be a bitch noone likes bitches other then there bitchy friends cuz well ur bitches and we dont like to be bitched at so try bein the oppisite of a bitch cuz bitchiness is bad, bitch.

Lets battle bitch

Ehhh, funny but id of liked to see a little more effort done to it if your gonna make a parody, like a first verse or something.

No, this isnt gonna be an RB Legend so dont nominate it, lol.

Go reply to my piece: Wonderful Women.

Look, everybody makes fun of you, but thats dumb, cuz I like it when people criticize my shit, because it makes me work harder to come up with a better piece.
but anyhow, you need to work on trying to make a better parody or whatever you was aiming for. Surprisingly, even though it ain't done, it could use some work, and the song isn't even that great to start with, it is better then some of the shit iv'e seen around Open Mic an' shit.
Elevate
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I agree wit skiddlezz. Carmine just has her life on this board lol. Its ok. U'll live better once u lift ya hand off tha mouse. O and u cant say nothin bout me cause i got me a job and not on here everyday postin shit lol. But to MF, finish this. I wanna see more of whachu done to tha song. LAter.

boo it suck but i mean your just foolin around so it doesnt really matter what any of us think until you do something for real right.